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Prepare Tem 4 At the last moment

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integrated skills

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Education as a lifelong process

• People need to be educated in order to
  develop their potentials and push the society
  onwards. Some people simply see education as
  going to schools whereas most people view
  education as a lifelong process. In my point of
  view, education is of great significance to a
  society. I would like to explain it in the
  following two points.

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Travel broadens the mind

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• ??Traveling is like reading a book. It makes a
  wise man better, but a fool worse.

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• Every college student would agree that
  life in college is not the same as it was in the
  middle school. Now, you have been asked by the
  Students Union to write a passage entitled
• THE MAIN DIFFERENCE BETWEEN
• MY COLLEGE LIFE AND MY MIDDLE SCHOOL LIFE
• as part of an introduction programme for new
  students coming in September.

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• You are to write in three paragraphs.
• In the first paragraph, state clearly what you
  think the main difference is between college and
  middle school life.
• In the second paragraph, state which life you
  prefer and why.
• In the last paragraph, bring what you have
  written to a natural conclusion with a summary or
  a suggestion.

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• We see advertisements on television every day.
  Some people think that TV advertising brings us
  benefits, but others dont think so. What is your
  opinion?
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• A MAJOR ADVANTAGE/DISADVATAGE OF ADVERTISING ON
  TELEVISION

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• You are to write in three paragraphs.
• In the first paragraph, state just ONE major
  advantage or disadvantage of TV advertising.
• In the second paragraph, give one or two reasons
  to support your point of view.
• In the last paragraph, bring what you have
  written to a natural conclusion.
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• Topic A Part-time job
• Nowadays it has become fashionable for college
  students to take a part-time job in their spare
  time. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of
  this trend.

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• You are to write in three paragraphs.
• In the first paragraph, state clearly your
  viewpoints on both the advantages and
  disadvantages.
• In the second paragraph, support your viewpoint
  with details or examples.
• In the last paragraph, bring what you have
  written to a natural conclusion with a summary or
  a suggestion.

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The first paragraph

• State clearly what you think the main difference
  is between college and middle school life.

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Well-done

• Whereas life in middle school is filled with
  endless exercises, homework and exams, life in
  college is pregnant with parties, sports, games,
  interesting contests and other colorful
  activities.
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The second paragraph

• State which life you prefer and why.

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• Study is one of the most important parts of
  life. In middle school, we were taught by our
  teacher most of the time and we spent much time
  to learn by ourselves. But in university,
  teachers only lead us to learn the important
  points. As for the details, we must study
  intensively by ourselves. Besides studying,
  standing the teat of a rigorous life is also
  important. The biggest problem is how to get on
  well with roommates. Living together will give
  rise to some unpleasantness because every person
  has his own way, and each one of us will lack
  privacy. In addition, we must wash our cloths
  with hands instead of the washing machine.

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Well-done

• The advantage of this self-arranged life is
  obvious. For one thing, I feel much relaxed both
  physically and emotionally. Pressure from
  academic study has been reduced to such an
  acceptable level that learning becomes a kind of
  enjoyment and pleasure. Classroom is rather a
  stage to show out talent than a battlefield to
  struggle for scores.

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• Moreover, more free time, in a sense, means
  more chances for us to join in the social life.
  Taking a part-time job, for instance, provides us
  who are still unused to the world an opportunity
  to negotiate with different customers and to
  adjust ourselves to such a rapidly changing
  society. This, undeniably, a great deal of wealth
  we can benefit from through our life.
  
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The third paragraph

• Bring what you have written to a natural
  conclusion with a summary or a suggestion.

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Well-done

• All in all, college life is much different from
  middle school life. It is a transition from
  campus to society. We should value and make good
  use of it.
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Well-done

• To sum up, I live a quite different life in
  college from which I become much more responsible
  for my own life and study. To those new students
  in the university, I would say, Welcome to join
  us and enjoy an independent college life.
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More pressure from academic studies does no good
to us

• It is known that interest is the mother of
  success. But we never say pressure is the mother
  of success. In fact, excessive pressure is the
  mother of resistance. We grown-up university
  students do not need more pressure from academic
  studies because it will do harm to us mentally
  and physically.

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• Where there is oppression, there is resistance.
  When students get more pressure from academic
  studies, they may naturally reject it in their
  deep mind because they feel that they are forced
  to study by the pressure but not their own
  willing. So they may adopt some improper means to
  get rid of pressure, which finally will damage
  their interest to academic studies. On the other
  hand, more pressure from studies will make
  students nervous and tired easily, which will
  visibly do harm to their health.

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• In conclusion, giving more pressure to students
  in academic studies is an incorrect way to
  encourage them to study well. Teachers should
  give it up quickly and find another way to arouse
  students interest in study.
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intra-sentence skills

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• Mozart is often quoted as a familiar example of
  ardent interest and sustained endeavor. Walking,
  or at the theater, or even while engaged in
  social amusements, he lived in a self-created
  atmosphere of music. His head was working all the
  time.

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• Whatever one does, one should do it with
  confidence. If one has no confidence, there is
  little possibility that one would ever achieve
  anything, especially when one is faced with
  drawbacks or hardships. This truth seems to be
  self-evident.

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• Why is the world getting smaller and
  smaller? For one thing, faster and safer
  means of transport have greatly reduced
  distance. In the past it took people eight weeks
  to cross the Pacific Ocean, but now an air
  journey from Shanghai to New York only takes
  eight hours. For another, the quickening pace
  of modern society creates more opportunities for
  people to visit each other. For example,
  business activities and cultural exchange have
  brought people into constant contact with the
  world.

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• This does not mean that thinking must always be
  conscious. The evidence that the unconscious mind
  can join in purposeful mental activity is
  overwhelming. The most dramatic example of this
  is the fact that insights often come to us when
  we are no longer working on a problem.

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• Taxies also cause a lot of problems. Some
  drivers usually park their cars at any place they
  like. They block the traffic. Other drivers
  sometimes drive very fast to save time so that
  they can earn more money. They cause many traffic
  accidents. Still other drivers charge much more
  than they should, and make the customers quite
  unhappy.

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• Taxies also cause a lot of problems. Some drivers
  usually park their cars at any place they like.
  As a result, they block the traffic. Other
  drivers sometimes drive very fast to save time so
  that they can earn more money. Consequently, they
  cause many traffic accidents. Still other drivers
  charge much more than they should, and thus make
  the customers quite unhappy.

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• The development of industry demands large areas
  of land. The already limited land is decreasing
  very rapidly. We should make the best use of our
  land. In cities, a careful and elaborate city
  plan should be worked out. In the countryside,
  farmers should be educated to use the land
  wisely. The government should reinforce the laws
  to punish those who waste the land.

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• The development of industry demands large areas
  of land. As a result, the already limited land is
  decreasing very rapidly. Therefore, we should
  make the best use of our land. In cities, a
  careful and elaborate city plan should be worked
  out. In the countryside, farmers should be
  educated to use the land wisely. Moreover, the
  government should reinforce the laws to punish
  those who waste the land.

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inter-sentence skills

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Brainstorming

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• Confidence - faith - build up faith
• - feel capable of doing
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• lack of confidence - lose heart
• - feel frustrated
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Diamond Words

• Take ones courage in both hands
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Diamond sentences

• An ounce of discretion is worth a pound of wit.
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• Hold fast to dreams, for if dreams die, life is a
  broken winged bird that cannot fly.

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• The constant sunshine and mild climate of
  southern California made it an ideal site for
  shooting motion pictures.

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• Happiness enjoyed alone is a pleasure, so is
  sorrow tasted privately.

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• She was asked ten questions in the oral
  examination and answered every one of them
  correctly.

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• Very soon he was surrounded by a crowd and was
  snowed under with questions.

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• The man, I believe, is reliable.

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• He rounded out his education by spending a year
  in Paris.

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• A few of the pictures are worth mentioning both
  for their technical excellence and interesting
  content.

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• The news may be surprising nevertheless, it
  is true.
• Nobody expected him to succeed in the
  examination however, he came out first.
• Its too late to go for a walk besides,
  its beginning to rain.

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• Love is important. He who loses wealth loses
  much, he who loses love loses more, but he who
  loses capacity to love loses all.
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• First of all, being in a good mood makes
  everything around us pleasant and ourselves
  pleasant to others.
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• Sometimes pressure can encourage one to work
  harder. However, pressure to students is what
  food to people. It cant be lacked it cant be
  too much as well.
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Methods of training

1. Imitate the sample structures
2. Refinement

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imitation

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• Mozart is often quoted as a familiar
  example of ardent interest and sustained
  endeavor. Walking, or at the theater, or even
  while engaged in social amusements, he lived in a
  self-created atmosphere of music. His head was
  working all the time.

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• Chen Qinghua is often quoted as a good example of
  hard working and diligence. Walking or at the
  canteen, or even while engaged in social
  entertainments, she lived in a self-created
  atmosphere of English. Her head was working all
  the time.

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• Lu Xun is often quoted as a familiar example
  loyal patriotism and sustained endeavor. Walking,
  or at his own pavilion, or even while talking
  with other people, he never stopped thinking
  about the public and the future of China. His
  head was working all the time.

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Awful organization

• But the question is, how can the tourists enjoy
  themselves under the control of travel agency?
  How can you travel around 5 cities in eastern
  China during 4 days?

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• But the question is, how can the tourists enjoy
  themselves under the control of the travel
  agency? How can a tourist, for example, travel
  around 5 cities in eastern China during 4 days?

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Awful organization

• Package tour is surely convenient for tourists
  and also safe. I give up the convenience
  willingly for several reasons.

• Refinement
• A package tour is surely convenient and safe for
  tourists. Nevertheless, I give up the convenience
  willingly for several reasons.

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Common errors

• In a package tour, tourists can gain more chances
  to communicate, to share what they saw and heard
  with one another.

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• In a package tour, tourists can get more chances
  to communicate, to share what they have seen and
  heard with one another.

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Common errors

• College life is a unique time in our life. It
  will give you another prime time.
• So, as we have grown up to be college students,
  we should value the freedom the college life
  gives us and take it as a turning point to
  develop your abilities.

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Redundancy ??

• When you are in good mood, you may feel all the
  world is smiling to you you seem to have been
  injected vigor you want to try everything. This
  is the power of good mood. Its important to keep
  in good mood.

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• Yesterday you failed to turn up for the
  appointment with your teacher, Professor Wang.
  Write him a note of apology and make a request
  for another meeting. You should also suggest the
  time for the requested meeting.
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• Apologize for failure to turn up for the
  appointment
• The reason for failure to turn up
• Make a request for another meeting
• Suggest the time for the requested meeting

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