WRITING SKILLS

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WRITING SKILLS
Shiraz, Iran, May 1th , 2013
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• There were more cases of esophageal cancer in our
  follow up study of patients with Barrets
  esophagus than there were cases of gastric
  cancer.
• Patients with Barrets esophagus were more likely
  to develop esophageal cancer than gastric cancer.

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• Sexual assault against a child presents a
  significant problem to society and there is much
  evidence that sexual assault impacts negatively
  on the psychological development of children.
• Sexual assault has a negative impact on the
  psychological development of children.
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• Doctors workload reduction program
• Program to reduce the workload of doctors.

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• In the study group, nine patients underwent PCI.
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• There were 320 participants in this study.
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• Forty percent of participants had diabetes .
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• In the study, 18 boys and 9 girls had insomnia.
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• The p value was 0.020

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• In total , 45 of patients had diabetes.
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• The mean height of the group was 175 cm.
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• In our sample of 245 children , 11.8 had
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• In our sample of 58 children, 10 had diabetes.
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• In our sample of 15 children, 3 had diabetes.

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• CT, DNA, AIDS , EKG
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• No case, subjects, asthmatics, diabetics use
  participants, asthmatic patients , patients with
  diabetics.
• No male, female use men , women.
• No level use concentration( serum protein
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• There were six subjects with solid tumors (e.g.
  breast cancer, lung cancer,)
• There were four subjects with solid tumors ( i.e
  . breast cancer, lung cancer, colon cancer and
  stomach cancer).
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• The patients were asked how often they
  experienced each of nine symptoms of depression.

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• However, it is not known whether treatment of
  patients earlier in the course of MS is of value.
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• The concept of self-management, which is based on
  patient autonomy, is problematic.
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• Iron deficiency , the leading cause of anemia
  worldwide, is most frequently caused by occult
  blood loss.
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• We collected data from the following centers
  Tehran, Shiraz, Bushehr, Kaki, Dyeilam and
  Gonabad.
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• Epidemiology of tuberculosis in the Bushehr
  province new trends in incidence and prevalence
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• Mean age was 53.4 years 51.5 were women.

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Some points

• The patients were referred from the neurology
  department  to our center for the assessment of
  brain  If this is the official department title
  (as listed in the hospital directory), it should
  be capitalized.
• If this is the official department title (as
  listed in the hospital directory), it should be
  capitalized.
• Use abbreviation if more than 2 times a term
  is repeated during a manuscript.
• There is an activity with more intensity  in the
  stomach wall than in the heart on both stress .
• There is an activity with more intensity in the
  stomach wall than in the heart on both stress .
• When you use more, you must indicate more than
  what

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Bushehr Sunset