Liu Xiang

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1.healthy is more important than any other
things. 2.Giving up is easy,but getting a chance
is difficulty. 3.We need not only the gold medal
but also a health Liu Xiang. 4.No matter what
others say,just do yourself and train
hardly. 5.When they see Liu Xiang drop out of the
race,they must be very disappoint. 6.They think
the sports ground likes a battle field. 7.Im
sure he will be successed at the next
Olympics. 8.Giving up is a hard decide for him.
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• Now more and more people take active part in the
  discussion.
• As a athlete,he must try his best.
• 19.36 people dont think that his choice is
  right.
• Liu Xiang should go on the race.
• I prefer to agree the former.
• We hope he can break up the record at the next
  Olympic Games.
• About 34.77 of the people vote this opinion.
• Some people think Liu Xiang should drop out the
  match.

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• On the opposite,there are 19.36 of
• the people against Liu Xiangs leaving.

contrary
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• They argue that Liu Xiang should stick to the
  end.
• So Liu Xiang should have insisted on the race.

hold on to the end
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• As everyone knows ,health is the most important
  thing than anything else for a sportsman.
• There are about 19.36 of the people think that
  Liu Xiang should
• It is known to us ,health is more important than
  the gold medal.
• But about 19.26 of the people think he dropped
  out of the race is wrong.
• Some believe that Liu Xiang dropped out of the
  race is necessary

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Good sentences from your work!
I think nothing is important compared with
health.--??? They argue that Liu Xiang shouldnt
have dropped out of the race however seriously
his foot was injured.---??? I firmly believe that
he wouldnt have given up but for his serious
foot injury.---?? They stress that health is far
more important than a gold medal,for which Liu
Xiang should quit the race.---??? I think Liu
Xiang should drop out of the race though everyone
expected to see his excellent performance.---??? I
n my opinion ,health is the most valuable thing
in our life ,so keeping healthy outweighs
anything else.---???
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In the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games Chinese
athlete Liu Xiang dropped out of the race due to
his foot injury,which led to a heated discussion
among people across the country. According to
a survey conducted by Tencent Website,about 34
percent of the people think an athlete should
quit the race when injured since health is much
more important than a gold medal.While nearly
twenty percent of the citizens believe that an
injured athlete should hold on to the end instead
of giving up halfway.They regard the sports field
as a battle field in which every athlete should
fight for the honor of his or her country in
spite of any difficulty. In my opinion,its a
right choice for Liu Xiang to choose to quit the
race.For one thing ,nothing is more important
than health ,and sports doesnt mean sacrificing
ones health for a gold medalfor another,after
Liu Xiang fully recovers,he still has many
chances to realize his dream.

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How to polish
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Example(???06????III) ??????,
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2. ???????,?????? ????--- apply (v.),
application (n.) ???volunteer
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would
like to work as a volunteer for the 2008
Olympics. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in
Beijing. Im a middle school student. I want to
do something for the 2008 Olympics. First, Im
good at English. Second, I like sports. Third,
Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I
like helping others. Last, Im familiar with
Beijing. It is important for the work. If you
give me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the
best service to others. Please accept my
application. I wont disappoint you! Looking
forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,

Li Hua
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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. I would
like to work as a volunteer for the 2008
Olympics. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in
Beijing. Im a middle school student. I want to
do something for the 2008 Olympics. First, Im
good at English. Second, I like sports. Third,
Im good at communicating with others. Fourth, I
like helping others. Last, Im familiar with
Beijing. It is important for the work. If you
give me the chance, Ill try my best to offer the
best service to others. Please accept my
application. I wont disappoint you! Looking
forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,

Li Hua
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Problems ways of improving them

• the same subject I
• simple words
• simple transitions(???)
• simple sentences

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?. Change the subject (????)
1. Ill offer the best service to
others. ?________________________________ is my
goal.
(-ing?????) ? It is my goal
to______________________________. (

(?it????) 2. I like helping others. ?____________
______________________________.

(-ing??????) ?____________________________________
______.
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Offering the best service to others
offer the best service to others.
Helping others is my favorite/ what I like most/.
It is my favorite to help others.
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?.Choose advanced phrases (??????)
Phrase
Word

• I like helping others.
• 2. I like sports.
• 3. This is important for the work.

be ready to / be willing to
be fond of/ be interested in / have great
interest in
be of great importance
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?.Choose advanced phrases (??????)
Simple phrase
Advanced phrase

• Im good at English.
• 2. I want to do something for the Olympics.
• 3. Ill try my best to offer the best service.

be fluent in/ have a good knowledge of/ have a
gift for
make a contribution to/ contribute to/ devote to
spare no effort /make every effort
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III. Use transitions (??????)
1. Phrases (???????) ?????,???? First,second,
third,fourth,last ? __________________,
_______________, __________________,
_________________, __________________,______
___________, __________________,
_________________
To begin/start with
furthermore
in addition
moreover
besides
whats more
last but not least
finally
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?. Use different sentences (??????)
1. Im familiar with Beijing. Its important for
the work.
Im familiar with Beijing, ____________________ __
___________________________. (????)

which is of great importance for the work
2. Im a boy and Im 18. I was born in Beijing.
Im a middle school student.
Born in Beijing, Im an 18-year-old boy
_____________________________________ ____________
_____________________.
studying in a middle school
(?????)
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?. Use different sentences (??????)
3. I wont disappoint you.
(???????) 4. If you give me the chance, Ill
offer the best service to others. If ________
the chance, Ill offer the best service to
others. (
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will I disappoint you
In no case _____________________.
given
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?. Use different sentences (??????)
5. I like sports very much. I ________ like
sports very much. (????)
do
6. Ill offer the best service to others. ? It is
_____________ that _________________.

(?????)
the best service
Ill offer to others
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???2005?1??????Directions A Campaign Speech
(????) 1????????????(??,??,??)???????????? 2?
???????????????? ???? run for
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Today Im very happy.I want to run for the
president of the studentsunion. I am from Class
5, Grade 2. Since I came into the school, I
have always been the monitor of my class. My work
is very good, and my classmates and my teachers
all praise me. I am good at talking. And I like
to help others,so I am very popular.Also, I have
many hobbies,for example, basketball, football,
pingpong, etc. I think that I can do the
job. If I become the president, I will try my
best to do it well. I will organize some good
activities for you. I will do many things for you
to meet your demands. I hope you will give
me a chance, and please believe me that I will be
a good president. Thank you.
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Today I am very glad to run for the president
of the studentsunion. I am from Class 5,Grade 2.
Since I came into the school, I have always
been the monitor of my class. I have done a very
good job for my classmates, Both my classmates
and teachers think highly of me. I am good at
communication. Always ready to help others,I am
very popular with my classmates. Moreover, I have
a variety of hobbies,for example, basketball,
football, pingpong, etc. I am sure that I am
qualified for this position. If I become the
president, I will spare no efforts to do it well.
I will organize some siutable activities for you.
I will do many things for you to meet your
demands as well. I sincerely hope you will
give me a chance, and please believe me that I
will be a good president. Vote for me!Thank
you.
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