Off the Track

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Off the Track

• Aimee Dominguez, Hannah Bryner, Coralie Hodson,
  Annetta Grimsdell, Ella Warnock

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One day four friends decided to go to Land of
the Angels - a fun park that had just opened.
Alexis and Alexia the twins called their friends
Skyler and Cloe and told them to meet at the old
shack for a ride to the Land of Angels. Cloe and
the twins got to the shack first. Skyler was
always late because she could not go out side
with out her hair just perfect.
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When Skyler finely got to the shack every one
else was tired of waiting and was relieved she
finally came. The four friends agreed to get a
ride from Skylers mom. Skylers mom was just
like Skyler. So, when the four of them got in
the car Skylers mom Joyce hurried to say, Dont
get anything on the seats! Finally they could
see the what they thought was the fun park from a
distance.
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They arrived at the fun park just before dark.
The first ride they saw was the Angel Palace.
Skyler really wanted to go on the ride. Cloes
older brother ran the ride next to the Angels
palace. Alexis did not and would not go on the
Angels Palace . So she went with Cloe to get a
hot dog. And then all the power at the hot dog
machine went out! Then all of the power went out
everywhere! Skyler goes on the ride. Cloe and
Alexis went to the hot dog machine to get some
food.
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Then they heard someone scream theres a chip
in my hair! it sounded like Skyler. Since the
power went out all of the rides had stopped.
Skyler and Alexias car was in front so all of
the cars bumped into theirs. The kid in the car
behind them jerked to a stop witch caused him to
lean forward and spill his Cheetos. Skyler
reacted by calling him a little twerp which made
him cry.
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Over at the hot dog machine the Mustard Machine
had been going full blast so when it stopped
mustard got every where including Alexis and
Cloe. Since Cloe was a neat- freak she freaked
out when mustard splattered all over her jacket.
They decided to go to the bathroom to clean up,
when they got to the bathroom they herd shouting
and then they herd someone screaming You
stepped on my foot you little rascal! and
someone shouted You got soap on my shirt !
They decided just to wash it off in the drinking
fountain because they didnt want to get into
trouble in the bathroom.
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They all met up at the Mouse Trace ride to decide
what to do next. Cloe and Alexis wanted to go on
the ride but Sykler wanted to get a hot dog
because she hadnt ate lunch yet so Alexia went
with her. Cloe and Alexis went to get on the ride
when all of the sudden a voice boomed over the
speakers Ladies and Gentlemen the power will
come back on momentarily. then the power all
of the sudden came back on, and all of the rides
came back on. Then Cloe and Alexis hopped on to
the Mouse Trace ride zoomed into a dark tunnel
and then they felt their car jerk a different
direction which they thought was part of the ride.
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Then suddenly they bolted downwards towards a
black darkness and jerked to a stop witch threw
them off the ride .Meanwhile Skyler and Alexia
were back at the hot dog stand wondering where
their friends were. When all of the sudden a
voice came over the loud speaker, Ladies and
gentlemen sorry to interrupt your fun but cart
11 is missing from the Mouse Trace ride. Thats
the cart that Cloe and Alexis got on. That
sounded a little weird to Skyler and Alexia. How
could a cart be missing? Skyler and Alexia
decided to go to the security booth and tell them
about their missing friends. So then they went to
the security booth and told the officers that
their two friends Cloe and Alexis had not come
off the ride.
What would you choose? To be underground or look
for your friends at the park above ground? To
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The two friends decided go and look for their
friends to see where they were and what they had
been doing the whole time. Then they heard a
voice come on over the intercom saying, Ladies
and germs, I mean gentlemen we have two missing
girls named Cloe and Alexis if you have any idea
where they are please contact the security booth
at the south entrance of the park. They looked
and looked for a while until they decided to take
a little rest for a minute or two.
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So Skyler and Alexia got worried . Than Alexia
said we should look for them Skyler said
no , we should go and tell the police about this
Alexia said fine you go to the police and I
will go looking for them . so they separated and
Alexia had better luck than Skyler she went on
the ride and went in the tunnel and found them
but then she was stuck to so they cried for help
and no one came then they herd someone call
hello and a long rope of hair ties came out of
no where and one at a time climbed to safety so
happy to see that Skyler had saved them ! THE END
By Aimee
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After a little while of searching and calling
names trying to find their friends Skyler and
Alexia decided to give up. Well never ever find
Alexis and Cloe. Its no use! complained Alexia.
But Skyler had a better idea than to just give up
on their friends. Hey Skyler said while
thinking out loud. why dont we go on the ride
and maybe we can find them. So they decided that
it was a great plan to go on the ride. So, they
did. So on the ride they were just sitting trying
see if they could hear or see something. And then
they did! HEEEELLLLPPPP!!!! HEEELLPPP!!!!! A
yell was coming from below them and it sounded
like.. Their friends! All of the sudden they
jerked off the track or at least it felt like it.
Then they were falling towards the ground to
where the voices were and then they stopped. Just
like what happened to their other friends. When
they got up they started to walk around although
they couldn't see they felt some thing. Wait , no
, it felt like a someone! Then, AAAUUUGGGHHH!!
Every body screamed. Then it just got really
quiet so Skyler just said, Is that you Alexia
and Cloe? When their friends replied yes they
all found each other again and were very glad.
Sooner or later they devised a plan to get out
and it worked! And from then on they never rode
on cart 11 on the Mouse Trace ride. They were
all happy to be above and lived happily ever
after. THE
END By Ella Warnock

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