Title: Writers Toolbox
1Writers Toolbox
2Snapshots
- Describe physical characteristics of setting
- Move from general to specific, becoming
increasingly detailed, especially with relevant
information
3Snapshots
- Zooming
- Freeze the storys most exciting momentas if you
were taking a Snapshot of that moment - Begin with description of the general setting
- Zoom in and allow your descriptions to become
increasingly detailed - Zoom againallow description to become even more
detailed - Rememberthis is a Snapshota picture frozen in
time. Do not sequence the action.
4Snapshots
Lifeguard stands stood on both sides of the pool,
bright red and white umbrellas casting shadows
over each of them. A boy stood on the high dive
which extended over the north end of the
pool Another boy stood on the ladder while a line
collected at the bottom
The sun shined brilliantly A chain link fence
surrounded the public swimming pool. People
filled the pool and lined the sides.
5Snapshots
The turquoise colored diving board was textured
with a slip-proof coating, leaving a rough
texture. Silver rungs, dappled with drips of
water, stretched from the hot ground to the
diving board. I stood at the edge of the board,
staring into the water below. A kid stood near
the top of the ladder, his head peering over the
diving board.
6Snapshots
Clinging to the rails, the kid at the top of the
ladder gritted his teeth and furrowed his brows.
His flushed cheeks seemed to make his red hair
grow even redder. He had what seemed to be bread
stuck between his teeth and he spout words of
anger, demanding that I hurry and jump.