Instructional Focus

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Digital English

• Instructional Focus
• Lesson Plan
• Writing Strategies 1.6a
• Grade 5

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Edit and revise manuscripts to improve the
meaning and focus of writing by adding, deleting,
consolidating, clarifying, and rearranging words
and sentences.
Fifth Grade
Writing Strategies Standard 1.6a
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Fifth Grade
Yesterday we went to the zoo. The guide showed
us the bones for different animals. They were
like the human skeleton weve seen in our
library, but different sizes and shapes. The
bones in the cats tail were very long. The
guide also showed us a snake skeleton with many
rib bones and vertebrae. We got to touch the
enormous whale jawbone. It was really
interesting!
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my class and I
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belonging to
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these skeletons were
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There are many
which make it
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Its tail is much longer than a cats!
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It was very rough feeling.
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It was really interesting!
extremely
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Fifth Grade
Yesterday my class and I went to the zoo. The
guide showed us the bones belonging to different
animals. They were like the human skeleton weve
seen in our library, but these skeletons were
different sizes and shapes. There are many bones
in the cats tail, which make it very long. The
guide also showed us a snake skeleton with many
rib bones and vertebrae. Its tail is much longer
than a cats! We got to touch the enormous whale
jawbone. It was very rough feeling. It was
extremely interesting!
Yesterday my class and I went to the zoo. The
guide showed us the bones belonging to different
animals. They were like the human skeleton weve
seen in our library, but these skeletons were
different sizes and shapes. There are many bones
in the cats tail, which make it very long. The
guide also showed us a snake skeleton with many
rib bones and vertebrae. Its tail is much longer
than a cats! We got to touch the enormous whale
jawbone. It was very rough feeling. It was
extremely interesting!
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