Title: Parallel Structures
1Parallel Structures
- Use balance to connect two ideas
- At the same level of importance.
2How do writers connect ideas?
- Writers connect ideas using a variety of devices
- Directly or indirectly repeating key words.
- Using synonyms to vary the surface signals.
- Numbering items in a list.
- Including transition words.
- Using parallel word, phrase, or clause structures.
3What are parallel structures?
- Parallel structure means repeating the same
pattern of words to show that two or more ideas
have the same level of importance. - Parallel structures make writing easier to read
and understand. - The usual way to join parallel structures is with
the coordinating conjunctions "and" or "or."
Is there a time shift here?
Have you learned parallels?
4How do we use parallel forms?
- To maintain proper balance, parallel structure
repeats the ing form - Amber likes hiking, swimming, and cycling.
- Parallel structure also repeats to phrases
- Amber likes to hike, to swim, and to ride cycles.
or - Amber likes to hike, swim, and ride cycles.
5What are parallel form errors?
- Parallel errors mismatch and imbalance the
phrases, disrupting the flow of thought. - Which single sentence uses correct parallel form?
- __1. Amber likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a
bicycle. - __2. Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a
bicycle.
Is there a disruption here?
6Here is the correct parallel form
- Parallel errors mismatch and imbalance the
phrases, disrupting the flow of thought. - The second sentence maintains the parallel form
of the phrase - __1. Amber likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a
bicycle. - _x 2. Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a
bicycle.
7Can you find the correct parallel?
- Which alternate uses correct parallel form?
- __1. The production manager was asked to write
his report quickly, accurately, and in a detailed
manner. - __2. The production manager was asked to write
his report quickly, accurately, and thoroughly.
Is there a problem here?
8You can find the correct parallel
- This alternate uses correct parallel form
- __1. The production manager was asked to write
his report quickly, accurately, and in a detailed
manner. - _X 2. The production manager was asked to write
his report quickly, accurately, and thoroughly.
Is there a problem here?
9Can you find the correct parallel?
- Which alternate uses correct parallel form?
- __1. Eddie waited too long to study for major
exams, completed lab problems in a careless
manner, and lacked motivation. - __2. Eddie waited too long to study for major
exams, completed lab problems in a careless
manner, and his motivation was low.
10You can find the correct parallel
- This alternate uses correct parallel form
- X_1. Eddie waited too long to study for major
exams, completed lab problems in a careless
manner, and lacked motivation. - __2. Eddie waited too long to study for major
exams, completed lab problems in a careless
manner, and his motivation was low.
11What about parallel clauses?
- A parallel structure that begins with clauses
must keep on with clauses. - Changing to another pattern or changing the voice
of the verb (from active to passive or vice
versa) breaks the parallel. - Ex. Angie knows that her mother is home and that
her father isnt there.
12Can you find the correct parallel?
- Which one is parallel?
- __1. The coach told the players that they should
get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
much, and that they should do some warm-up
exercises before the game. - __2. The coach told the players that they should
get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
much, and to do some warm-up exercises before the
game.
13You can find the correct parallel
- This alternate uses correct parallel form
- X_1. The coach told the players that they should
get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
much, and that they should do some warm-up
exercises before the game. - __2. The coach told the players that they should
get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
much, and to do some warm-up exercises before the
game.
14Can you find the correct parallel?
- Which one is parallel?
- __1. The salesman expected that he would present
his product at the meeting, that there would be
time for him to show his slide presentation, and
that questions would be asked by prospective
buyers. - __2. The salesman expected that he would present
his product at the meeting, that there would be
time for him to show his slide presentation, and
that prospective buyers would ask him questions.
15You can find the correct parallel
- This one is parallel
- __1. The salesman expected that he would present
his product at the meeting, that there would be
time for him to show his slide presentation, and
that questions would be asked by prospective
buyers. - X_2. The salesman expected that he would present
his product at the meeting, that there would be
time for him to show his slide presentation, and
that prospective buyers would ask him questions.
16Are lists also kept in parallel form?
- In lists after a colon, keep all the parts in the
same form. - Wrong The dictionary can be used for these
purposes to find word meanings, pronunciations,
correct spellings, and looking up irregular
verbs. - Right The dictionary can be used for these
purposes to find word meanings, pronunciations,
correct spellings, and irregular verbs.
17Can you use correct parallel form?
- Which single alternate is in parallel form?
- __1. Jon is handsome, brave, and the sort of
person who would do anything for you. - __2. Declaring sustainability as a goal is one
thing putting it into operation has been an
elusive goal. - __3. You are responsible not only for organizing
the conference but also for introducing the
keynote speaker.
18You can use correct parallel form
- This single alternate is in parallel form
- __1. Jon is handsome, brave, and the sort of
person who would do anything for you. - __2. Declaring sustainability as a goal is one
thing putting it into operation has been an
elusive goal. - X_3. You are responsible not only for organizing
the conference but also for introducing the
keynote speaker.
19Can you find the correct parallel?
- Which one is parallel?
- __1. The room was beautiful, the service
impeccable, and I've never tasted better food in
my entire life. - __2. She was a healthy young woman, a wealthy
person, and a regular reader of my column. - __3. The Budget Information System is a query
system, the database is small, and we need to
recognize the fact that the response time is
overly long.
20You can find the correct parallel
- This one is parallel
- __1. The room was beautiful, the service
impeccable, and I've never tasted better food in
my entire life. - X_2. She was a healthy young woman, a wealthy
person, and a regular reader of my column. - __3. The Budget Information System is a query
system, the database is small, and we need to
recognize the fact that the response time is
overly long.
21Can you use correct parallel form?
- Which single alternate is in parallel form?
- __1. Henry liked to drink red wine, eat fried
fish, and orange juice - __2. Henry liked red wine, eating fried fish, and
drinking orange juice - __3. Henry liked red wine, fried fish, and orange
juice - __4. Henry liked to drink red wine, fried fish,
and orange juice
22You can use correct parallel form
- This single alternate is in parallel form
- __1. Henry liked to drink red wine, eat fried
fish, and orange juice - __2. Henry liked red wine, eating fried fish, and
drinking orange juice - X_3. Henry liked red wine, fried fish, and orange
juice - __4. Henry liked to drink red wine, fried fish,
and orange juice
23Can you find the correct parallel?
- Which one is parallel?
- __1. The doctor will be available for
consultation Monday, Thursday or on Sunday - __2. The doctor will be available for
consultation on Monday, Thursday or Sunday - __3. The doctor will be available for
consultation on Monday, on Thursday on Sunday
24You can find the correct parallel
- This one is parallel
- __1. The doctor will be available for
consultation Monday, Thursday or on Sunday - X_2. The doctor will be available for
consultation on Monday, Thursday or Sunday - __3. The doctor will be available for
consultation on Monday, on Thursday on Sunday
25Can you use correct parallel form?
- Which parallels compares better?
- __1. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
seemed to like Richie. - __2. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
likes Richie. - __3. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
liked Richie.
26You can use correct parallel form
- Take care with the verb form to create smooth
parallels - __1. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
seemed to like Richie. - X_2. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
likes Richie. - __3. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
liked Richie.
27Can you use correct parallel form?
- Also keep the little function words straight for
better parallels - __1. Walters often writes about the Indian
immigrant experience and Parsi community. - __2. Walters often writes about the Indian
immigrant experience and the Parsi community. - __3. Walters often writes about the Indian
immigrant experience and this Parsi community.
28Can you use correct parallel form?
- Also keep the little function words straight for
better parallels - __1. Walters often writes about the Indian
immigrant experience and Parsi community. - x_2. Walters often writes about the Indian
immigrant experience and the Parsi community. - __3. Walters often writes about the Indian
immigrant experience and this Parsi community.
29Editing tips for parallel form
- On your paper, pause at the words "and" and "or.
- Check on each side of these words to see whether
the items joined are parallel. - If not, make them parallel.
- If you have several items in a list, put them in
a column to see if they are parallel.