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Title: Parallel Structures


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Parallel Structures
  • Use balance to connect two ideas
  • At the same level of importance.

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How do writers connect ideas?
  • Writers connect ideas using a variety of devices
  • Directly or indirectly repeating key words.
  • Using synonyms to vary the surface signals.
  • Numbering items in a list.
  • Including transition words.
  • Using parallel word, phrase, or clause structures.

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What are parallel structures?
  • Parallel structure means repeating the same
    pattern of words to show that two or more ideas
    have the same level of importance.
  • Parallel structures make writing easier to read
    and understand.
  • The usual way to join parallel structures is with
    the coordinating conjunctions "and" or "or."

Is there a time shift here?
Have you learned parallels?
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How do we use parallel forms?
  • To maintain proper balance, parallel structure
    repeats the ing form
  • Amber likes hiking, swimming, and cycling.
  • Parallel structure also repeats to phrases
  • Amber likes to hike, to swim, and to ride cycles.
    or
  • Amber likes to hike, swim, and ride cycles.

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What are parallel form errors?
  • Parallel errors mismatch and imbalance the
    phrases, disrupting the flow of thought.
  • Which single sentence uses correct parallel form?
  • __1. Amber likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a
    bicycle.
  • __2. Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a
    bicycle.

Is there a disruption here?
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Here is the correct parallel form
  • Parallel errors mismatch and imbalance the
    phrases, disrupting the flow of thought.
  • The second sentence maintains the parallel form
    of the phrase
  • __1. Amber likes hiking, swimming, and to ride a
    bicycle.
  • _x 2. Mary likes hiking, swimming, and riding a
    bicycle.

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Can you find the correct parallel?
  • Which alternate uses correct parallel form?
  • __1. The production manager was asked to write
    his report quickly, accurately, and in a detailed
    manner.
  • __2. The production manager was asked to write
    his report quickly, accurately, and thoroughly.

Is there a problem here?
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You can find the correct parallel
  • This alternate uses correct parallel form
  • __1. The production manager was asked to write
    his report quickly, accurately, and in a detailed
    manner.
  • _X 2. The production manager was asked to write
    his report quickly, accurately, and thoroughly.

Is there a problem here?
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Can you find the correct parallel?
  • Which alternate uses correct parallel form?
  • __1. Eddie waited too long to study for major
    exams, completed lab problems in a careless
    manner, and lacked motivation.
  • __2. Eddie waited too long to study for major
    exams, completed lab problems in a careless
    manner, and his motivation was low.

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You can find the correct parallel
  • This alternate uses correct parallel form
  • X_1. Eddie waited too long to study for major
    exams, completed lab problems in a careless
    manner, and lacked motivation.
  • __2. Eddie waited too long to study for major
    exams, completed lab problems in a careless
    manner, and his motivation was low.

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What about parallel clauses?
  • A parallel structure that begins with clauses
    must keep on with clauses.
  • Changing to another pattern or changing the voice
    of the verb (from active to passive or vice
    versa) breaks the parallel.
  • Ex. Angie knows that her mother is home and that
    her father isnt there.

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Can you find the correct parallel?
  • Which one is parallel?
  • __1. The coach told the players that they should
    get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
    much, and that they should do some warm-up
    exercises before the game.
  • __2. The coach told the players that they should
    get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
    much, and to do some warm-up exercises before the
    game.

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You can find the correct parallel
  • This alternate uses correct parallel form
  • X_1. The coach told the players that they should
    get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
    much, and that they should do some warm-up
    exercises before the game.
  • __2. The coach told the players that they should
    get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
    much, and to do some warm-up exercises before the
    game.

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Can you find the correct parallel?
  • Which one is parallel?
  • __1. The salesman expected that he would present
    his product at the meeting, that there would be
    time for him to show his slide presentation, and
    that questions would be asked by prospective
    buyers.
  • __2. The salesman expected that he would present
    his product at the meeting, that there would be
    time for him to show his slide presentation, and
    that prospective buyers would ask him questions.

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You can find the correct parallel
  • This one is parallel
  • __1. The salesman expected that he would present
    his product at the meeting, that there would be
    time for him to show his slide presentation, and
    that questions would be asked by prospective
    buyers.
  • X_2. The salesman expected that he would present
    his product at the meeting, that there would be
    time for him to show his slide presentation, and
    that prospective buyers would ask him questions.

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Are lists also kept in parallel form?
  • In lists after a colon, keep all the parts in the
    same form.
  • Wrong The dictionary can be used for these
    purposes to find word meanings, pronunciations,
    correct spellings, and looking up irregular
    verbs.
  • Right The dictionary can be used for these
    purposes to find word meanings, pronunciations,
    correct spellings, and irregular verbs.

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Can you use correct parallel form?
  • Which single alternate is in parallel form?
  • __1. Jon is handsome, brave, and the sort of
    person who would do anything for you.
  • __2. Declaring sustainability as a goal is one
    thing putting it into operation has been an
    elusive goal.
  • __3. You are responsible not only for organizing
    the conference but also for introducing the
    keynote speaker.

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You can use correct parallel form
  • This single alternate is in parallel form
  • __1. Jon is handsome, brave, and the sort of
    person who would do anything for you.
  • __2. Declaring sustainability as a goal is one
    thing putting it into operation has been an
    elusive goal.
  • X_3. You are responsible not only for organizing
    the conference but also for introducing the
    keynote speaker.

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Can you find the correct parallel?
  • Which one is parallel?
  • __1. The room was beautiful, the service
    impeccable, and I've never tasted better food in
    my entire life.
  • __2. She was a healthy young woman, a wealthy
    person, and a regular reader of my column.
  • __3. The Budget Information System is a query
    system, the database is small, and we need to
    recognize the fact that the response time is
    overly long.

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You can find the correct parallel
  • This one is parallel
  • __1. The room was beautiful, the service
    impeccable, and I've never tasted better food in
    my entire life.
  • X_2. She was a healthy young woman, a wealthy
    person, and a regular reader of my column.
  • __3. The Budget Information System is a query
    system, the database is small, and we need to
    recognize the fact that the response time is
    overly long.

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Can you use correct parallel form?
  • Which single alternate is in parallel form?
  • __1. Henry liked to drink red wine, eat fried
    fish, and orange juice
  • __2. Henry liked red wine, eating fried fish, and
    drinking orange juice
  • __3. Henry liked red wine, fried fish, and orange
    juice
  • __4. Henry liked to drink red wine, fried fish,
    and orange juice

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You can use correct parallel form
  • This single alternate is in parallel form
  • __1. Henry liked to drink red wine, eat fried
    fish, and orange juice
  • __2. Henry liked red wine, eating fried fish, and
    drinking orange juice
  • X_3. Henry liked red wine, fried fish, and orange
    juice
  • __4. Henry liked to drink red wine, fried fish,
    and orange juice

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Can you find the correct parallel?
  • Which one is parallel?
  • __1. The doctor will be available for
    consultation Monday, Thursday or on Sunday
  • __2. The doctor will be available for
    consultation on Monday, Thursday or Sunday
  • __3. The doctor will be available for
    consultation on Monday, on Thursday on Sunday

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You can find the correct parallel
  • This one is parallel
  • __1. The doctor will be available for
    consultation Monday, Thursday or on Sunday
  • X_2. The doctor will be available for
    consultation on Monday, Thursday or Sunday
  • __3. The doctor will be available for
    consultation on Monday, on Thursday on Sunday

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Can you use correct parallel form?
  • Which parallels compares better?
  • __1. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
    seemed to like Richie.
  • __2. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
    likes Richie.
  • __3. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
    liked Richie.

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You can use correct parallel form
  • Take care with the verb form to create smooth
    parallels
  • __1. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
    seemed to like Richie.
  • X_2. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
    likes Richie.
  • __3. Joan does not like Chucky as much as she
    liked Richie.

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Can you use correct parallel form?
  • Also keep the little function words straight for
    better parallels
  • __1. Walters often writes about the Indian
    immigrant experience and Parsi community.
  • __2. Walters often writes about the Indian
    immigrant experience and the Parsi community.
  • __3. Walters often writes about the Indian
    immigrant experience and this Parsi community.

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Can you use correct parallel form?
  • Also keep the little function words straight for
    better parallels
  • __1. Walters often writes about the Indian
    immigrant experience and Parsi community.
  • x_2. Walters often writes about the Indian
    immigrant experience and the Parsi community.
  • __3. Walters often writes about the Indian
    immigrant experience and this Parsi community.

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Editing tips for parallel form
  • On your paper, pause at the words "and" and "or.
  • Check on each side of these words to see whether
    the items joined are parallel.
  • If not, make them parallel.
  • If you have several items in a list, put them in
    a column to see if they are parallel.
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