Title: Bike Helmet Descriptive Writing
1Writing
2Prompt
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- Wearing a bike helmet is very important for your
safety. You are designing a new bike helmet.
Describe your new helmet and its features. Why
would these features be helpful?
3Lets Brainstorm!
- New and improved bike helmets
4Decide on ways to improve the helmet
- Choose the best 3 things you could do to improve
the helmet.
5Bike helmets are really cool, but Ive got some
ideas that will take an ordinary bike helmet to
extraordinary. My new and improve helmet would
have a great water system, music, and
navigation.
Every time I struggle to get up a long hill I
can press a button and some motivating music will
come on. It would be wireless so that I would
not get tangled in earphone cords. Having music
would make riding my bike so much more fun.
The navigation system would have a small screen
that would attach to my handle bars. The earpiece
would be on the inside of my helmet so that I
could easily hear the directions. This would
make exploring new places much easier.
The water bottle would be attached to the side of
my helmet. It would have a long straw that would
go directly to my mouth. This useful feature
would make it so that I dont have to stop riding
my bike every time I am thirsty.
6Closing Sentence
- Having a helmet that holds water, plays my
favorite tunes, and prevents me from getting lost
would be awesome! I cant wait to zip around town
on my bike with my new and improved helmet for
everyone to see.
7Bike helmets are really cool, but Ive got some
ideas that will take a ordinary bike helmet to
extraordinary. My new and improve helmet would
have a grate water system, musick, and
navigashon first my helmet would have a water
system to help keep me hydrated when I am out
riding around my neighborhood. The water botle
would be attached to the side of my helmet. It
would have a long straw that would go directly to
my mouth This usefull feature would make it so
that I dont have to stop riding my bike every
time I am thirsty.