Journal

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Journal

• Have you ever tried to persuade someone to do
  something? How did you go about it, what were
  your trying to persuade them to do, and what was
  the outcome? Length of song to write.

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8-8-11
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Lets SALSA!

• Show actions that facilitate learning for the
  self and others.
• Actively participate and be cognitively present
• Learn to be open to new learning
• Study even when you dont think you need to study
• Act with a positive attitude and Accept that
  failure is not an option!

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Before Writinglets talk reading

• Million Word Goal
• https//www.georgiastandards.org/standards/GPS20S
  upport20Docs/How_to_reach_your_million_word_goal.
  pdf
• Chart- due for two-three weeks August 22nd

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Georgia High School GraduationWriting Test
Take notes!
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Prompt Specifications

• The GHSWT topics are often referred to as
  prompts, for their purpose is to prompt or
  elicit a writing sample in an on-demand setting.
• Each prompt is divided into two clearly marked
  parts the Writing Situation and the Directions
  for Writing.
• Writing prompts contain six elements.

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Six Elements of the Writing Prompt

• Issue
• The issue is to be of enough complexity to allow
  for the expression of diverse viewpoints.
• The issue will be relevant to the experiences and
  interests of Georgias high school students.
• Topics are drawn from teen and school-based
  issues, societal concerns, and diverse content
  areas (such as the social sciences and sciences).
  The variety of topics is intended to foster
  writing across the curriculum and to allow for
  differences in students prior knowledge.

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The Prompt

• Descriptive Setup
• The issue is presented within a framework that
  engages the writers interest, provides a
  realistic context for examining the issue, and
  presents enough information to familiarize any
  potentially uninformed writer with the nature of
  the issue.
• The context may be historical, literary, current,
  or hypothetical.
• Key terms that might be unfamiliar are defined,
  paraphrased, or illustrated with examples.

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Knowledge Base

• Writers should be able to produce a complete
  and competent response using knowledge gained
  through either personal or academic experiences
  or a combination of these sources.

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Writers Intent and Writing Task

• Cues in the wording of the prompt should make it
  clear whether the writer is to
• examine different sides of a controversy or
• choose a position and
• provide support for that position or
• analyze a problem and
  
• its solution(s)
• The organization or structure of the writing
• sample is to be appropriate to the task.

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Audience

• The audience is specified. The audience may range
  from the familiar (fellow students or family
  members) to the distant (legislators, school
  board members, newspaper subscribers).

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Form

• Form is specified.
• However, the conventions of form, such as the
  inside address or salutation of a business
  letter, are not evaluated.
• Possible forms include letters, speeches,
  compositions, position papers, and papers to be
  read aloud.

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New Georgia High School Writing Test

• 1. A domain is an aspect of writing.
• 2. Each domain itself is scored holistically.
  
• The score assigned indicates the
• writers command of the components.

• Domain
  Weight
• Ideas 2
• Organization 1
• Style 1
• Conventions 1

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Weighting of Domains

• Weighting means that the scores in some
  writing domains will be given more weight than
  others in determining the total score that a
  student receives.

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Successful Essays

• are consistently focused on the
  
• assigned topic, persuasive purpose,
• and audience
• have an effective introduction, body, and
  conclusion
• demonstrate a well developed and valid writers
  position
• present supporting ideas that are fully
  elaborated with specific examples and details

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Successful Essays

• fully address readers concerns and/or counter
  arguments.
• have main points of their argument that are
  logically grouped and sequenced within paragraphs
  and across parts of the paper.
• contain varied transitional elements that connect
  ideas (ex. first, next, finally)
• exhibit word choice that is varied
• and precise throughout the response

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Successful Essays

• present sentences that are varied in length and
  structure.
• show a writers voice that is distinctive.
• maintain sustained attention to the audience in
  the introduction, body, and conclusion.

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Successful Essays

• strive for sentence formation, usage, and
  mechanics that are consistently correct in a
  variety of contexts.
• contain only minor and infrequent errors.
• have a text of sufficient length to demonstrate
  effective writing
• skills in a variety of
• contexts.

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Persuasive Writing

• has as its purpose convincing others to accept
  the writers position as valid, adopt a certain
  point of view, or take some action.
• provides logical appeals, emotional appeals,
  facts, statistics, narrative
• anecdotes, humor and/or
• the writers personal
• experiences and knowledge.

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Persuasive Writing

• clearly establishes a position on the issue and
  fully develops an argument with specific details
  and examples.
• defends the writers position with relevant
  evidence that is appropriate for the audience
  identified in the writing topic.

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Persuasive Writing

• demonstrates that the writer can anticipate and
  counter the audiences position on the issue .
• uses specific facts, personal experience and
  knowledge, and/or statistics to support the
  writers position.

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Persuasive Writing

• includes appeals to logic and/or emotion.
• contains an organizational structure appropriate
  for persuasion.

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The Writing Checklist

• Prepare Yourself to Write
• Read the Writing Situation and Directions for
  Writing carefully.
• Brainstorm for ideas.
• Consider how to address your audience.
• Decide what ideas to include and how to organize
  them.
• Write only in English.
• Make Your Paper Meaningful
• Use your knowledge and/or personal experiences
  that are related to the topic.
• Express a clear point of view.
• Fully support your position with specific
  details, examples, and
• convincing reasons.
• Include an appeal to logic and/or emotions.
• Organize your ideas in a clear and logical
  order.
• Write a persuasive paper and stay on topic.
• Make Your Paper Interesting to Read
• Use examples and details that would be
  convincing to your audience.
• Use appropriate voice that shows your interest
  in the topic.
• Use precise, descriptive, vivid words.
• Vary the type, structure, and length of your
  sentences.

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Scoring the Georgia High School Writing Test

• Five score points in each scoring domain (Ideas X
  2, Organization, Style, and Conventions)
• A score of 5 represents the highest level of
  competence in each domain.

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Timeline for the Testing

• Part 1 Planning/Prewriting (15 minutes)
• Read your assigned topic on the Writing Topic
  Page and review the Writing Checklist.
• Use the space provided for your notes, jot list,
  or outline.
• Organize your major supporting details before
  writing the first draft.
• Part 2 Drafting (30 minutes)
• Using your prewriting notes, write a first draft
  of your paper on the Drafting Sheet.
• Concentrate on getting your ideas down on paper
  in a logical order.
• Part 3 Revising and Editing (25 minutes)
• Carefully reread what you have written to see if
  your ideas are clear and fully developed.
• Consider any changes that would make your paper
  better.

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Test Timeline (cont.)

• Part 4 Final Draft (20 minutes)
• Rewrite your paper on pages 3 and 4 of the Answer
  Document.
• When you rewrite, make sure that you use a blue
  or black pen and write neatly.
• You may either print or write in cursive.
• Do not use pages 1 and 2 of the Answer Document
  for you writing.
• Only what is written on pages 3 and 4 of the
  Answer Document will be scored.
• Part 5 Proofreading (5 minutes)
• When you finish writing your final draft, make
  any needed corrections on
• your paper.
• You may strike through words, but do so neatly.
• Do not use correction fluid.
• The suggested times given in the directions are
  approximate. You will be reminded
• of the times for each part. What you write on
  the Planning/Prewriting Page and the
• Drafting Page will not be graded. Only your final
  draft will be graded.
• You MUST write your final draft (using a blue or
  black ink PEN) on the
• Answer Document using only pages 3 and 4.

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Sample Essay Prompt

• Writing Situation
• Many public school systems across the country
  require
• students to wear uniforms. Some educators believe
  that
• wearing uniforms will help students concentrate
  more on
• their school work. On the other hand, some
  students argue
• that having to wear uniforms prevents them from
  expressing
• their individuality. Your principal is
  considering whether
• students at your school should wear uniforms.
• Directions for Writing
• Write a letter to your principal expressing your
  view on
• school uniforms. Provide convincing reasons and
• specific examples to support your position.

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Sample Essay
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Sample Essay (Cont.)
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Annotations for Persuasive Paper Ideas Score
5

• The writers controlling idea (students should be
  required to wear uniforms) is fully developed.
• The writer presents a logical argument with fully
  developed supporting ideas (wearing uniforms
  provides for a discrimination free classroom,
  teens arent mature enough to decide what to
  wear, there are other ways to express
  individuality).
• The supporting ideas are fully elaborated with
  specific, logical examples (the private school
  example, specific clothes that are not
  appropriate).
• The response contains an abundance of relevant
  information that fully addresses counter
  arguments and reader concerns (how to express
  individuality, whether teens are mature enough).

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Organization Score 5

• The introduction engages the reader (posing
  possible questions the principal may ask) and
• sets the stage for the writers argument.
• Ideas are presented in a clear and logical order.
  
• The writer first cites private schools as an
  example of how uniforms work, then describes the
  advantages of uniforms, then addresses a possible
  counter argument (individuality), before
  concluding that students are not mature enough to
  express themselves through their clothing
  choices.
• The conclusion provides closure without
  repetition and calls on the principal to require
  uniforms.
• The writer uses varied and effective transitional
  devices to link all parts of the paper.

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Style Score 5

• The paper contains varied, precise, and engaging
  language (higher rank, automatically, spare
  tire midriffs, enforcing a uniform code,
  chosen to disobey, modestly, discrimination
  free, I wager that you are asking).
• The writer uses an extensive variety of sentence
  lengths, structures, and beginnings.
• Audience awareness is demonstrated throughout the
  paper (You are probably asking, I implore you
  to do what you must to fix this problem).
• The writers concerned voice is sustained
  throughout the response.

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Conventions Score 5

• The writer demonstrates full command of the
  components of Conventions. Simple, complex,
  compound, and complex/compound sentences are
  consistently correct.
• Usage and mechanics are also consistently correct
  in a variety of instances.

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Sample Essay 2
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Sample Essay 2 (cont.)
What do you think for scoring?
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Helpful Website

• Georgia DOE
• http//www.doe.k12.ga.us/ci_testing.aspx?PageReqC
  ITestingWA1

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Reflection

• Questions, comments, fears, excitements?
• Write one thing that you are feeling about the
  GHSWT at the bottom of your notes ?