F. 5 Paper I Composition C7 : 97 A Q1

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F. 5 Paper I CompositionC7 97 A Q1

• You have decided to enter the Fight Crime Essay
  Competition. Write about WHY young people commit
  crime, and say WHAT you think we should do about
  this problem

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Paragraph 1 - Introduction

• Expository Essay
• State the FACT
• ? Recently, according to the statistic figures of
  crimes in Hong Kong, the youth crime rate is on
  the increase. The crimes they commit are
  ,,.., and rapes (SVC Unit 7). Why do young
  people commit crimes and what should we do about
  these problems ?

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Family Problem
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Paragraphs 2 4 REASONS

• Para. 2 family problem such as
• divorce, child abuse
• why would this problem affect youngsters
• and How ?
• Useful words lack of parental love, quarrel,
  single-parent family, become rebellious,
  delinquent, draw parents attention

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Problem at school
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REASONS

• Para. 3 problem at school
• e.g. scolded by teachers, no friends to play
  with, fail in tests and examinations
• Useful words on interest in learning , feel
  bored at school, discontent, hatred

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Way of living
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REASONS

• Para. 4 way of living materialistic life
• Craze on brand-name goods / luxury things
• Peer pressure drive them to steal
• Useful words gain money, spending money on
  pastime, ignorant, greedy, immature, unable to
  judge what is right and wrong, fall into the
  traps of bad guys

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WHAT should be done- Solutions Internal

• Family education
• Parents should give children proper attention and
  care
• Help them develop a correct way of life
• 2. At school
• Organize anti-crime activities
• Educate them about proper value and belief

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WHAT should be done Solutions External

• The police ? take a close watch to the Triad
  Society activities.
• Patrols parks and TV game centres