Unit Three : Ensure that Pronoun References are Clear in Meaning

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Unit Three Ensure that Pronoun References
are Clear in Meaning
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• The machines can process the family of parts,
  ensuring that it reaches full capacity.
• Revised Capable of processing the family of
  parts, the machines reach full capacity.

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• All parts have the same transportation costs,
  which limits the effectiveness of traditional
  approaches.
• Revised All parts have the same transportation
  costs, thus limiting the effectiveness of
  traditional approaches.

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• The department chairman told the research
  assistant that she needed to perform the
  simulations in the event that the experiment
  fails.
• Revised The department chairman told the
  research assistant, "You need to perform the
  simulations in the event that the experiment
  fails."

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• Deterioration is set to a constant fraction of
  the stock level, which implies that shortages are
  not permitted and the demand rate is assumed to
  decrease exponentially.
• Revised The fact that deterioration is set to a
  constant fraction of the stock level implies that
  shortages are not permitted and the demand rate
  is assumed to decrease exponentially.

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• When a machine is assigned to a manufacturing
  cell, it attempts to reduce the total cost.
• Revised When assigned to a manufacturing cell,
  a machine attempts to reduce the total cost.

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• The posterior objective concentrates on balancing
  intracell and intercell machine loadings, which
  allows us to formulate the cell formation problem
  as follows.
• Revised The fact that the posterior objective
  concentrates on balancing intracell and intercell
  machine loadings allows us to formulate the cell
  formation problem as follows.

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• Factors C, D, F, G and H significantly affect the
  response average. This indicates that F can be
  adjusted based on the target value.
• Revised Factors C, D, F, G and H significantly
  affect the response average. This finding
  (observation, occurrence, phenomenon, event)
  indicates that F can be adjusted based on the
  target value.

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• You should maintain a constant cutting speed even
  though the effective diameter of the cutting
  changes during machining.
• Revised A constant cutting speed should be
  maintained even though the effective diameter of
  the cutting changes during machining.

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• In most previous investigations, they do not
  consider the simultaneous effects of
  deterioration and inflation.
• Revised Most previous investigations do not
  consider the simultaneous effects of
  deterioration and inflation.

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• A numerical example demonstrates the
  effectiveness of the proposed method, which
  further indicates that the total system cost will
  be incorrectly estimated if the deteriorating
  effect and/or inflationary effect are neglected.
• Revised A numerical example demonstrates the
  effectiveness of the proposed method, further
  indicating that the total system cost will be
  incorrectly estimated if the deteriorating effect
  and/or inflationary effect are neglected.