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• Project Parameters
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• Construction time
• Commissioning time
• Capital Cost (including planned commissioning
  cost capitilised)
• Construction approach (turnkey or other)
• Company engineering staff involvement
• Project Outcome
• Construction time
• Commissioning time
• Capital Cost (including planned commissioning
  cost capitilised)

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• The closest approximation of behavioral
  thresholds with the ASSR technique was at 1000 Hz
  whilst the poorest approximation was at 500 Hz.
  In an analysis of the difference between ASSR
  approximations of behavioral thresholds in the
  left ears (n6) compared to the right ears (n6)
  a slight increase in difference scores were
  noticed at all frequencies in the right ear. This
  may in part be attributed to higher modulation
  frequencies for the test frequencies in the right
  ear (91-99 Hz) compared to the modulation
  frequencies in the left ear (82-89 Hz). The
  sample, however, is too small to substantiate
  this inference.  

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• Construction time 30 months from authorisation
  to 1st briquette
• Commissioning time not clearly defined, but
  similar to Western Australia HBI duration of 6
  months
• Capital cost (including planned commissioning
  cost capitalized) US797 million
• Construction time 35 months from authorisation
  to 1st briquette
• Commissioning time not fully commissioned (see
  notes below)
• Capital cost (Including actual commissioning cost
  capitalized) US910 millionConstruction
  approach (turnkey or other) process design by
  VAI, self managed by Orinoco Iron (JV partner)
  using a number of construction contractors.
• Company engineering staff involvement minimal
  BHPB involvement

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