Derek

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Dereks full. Stop. A Story
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Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate his cat
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Derek woke up, went downstairs and ate. His cat
was playing in his cereal bowl
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His cat was playing. In his cereal bowl Derek had
his favourite nan
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In his cereal bowl Derek had his favourite. Nan
had bought it him.
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On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop
singer - his mum
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On the radio Derek could hear his favourite pop
singer. His mum was hoovering up his dad
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His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the
front door
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His mum was hoovering up. His dad was smoking the
front door
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His dad was smoking. The front door bell went
outside
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The front door bell went. Outside Derek could
hear talking. It was his sister's coat
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It was his sisters. "Coat please Mum," said Tina.
Mum said, "Put the cups away out in the garden."
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Mum said, "Put the cups away. Out in the garden
it was raining people.
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Out in the garden it was raining. People stood
out in the street waiting for the arrival of the
bus stop.
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People stood out in the street waiting for the
arrival of the bus. "Stop dawdling Derek," said
Mum, "or you'll be late yesterday."
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"Stop dawdling Derek," said Mum, "or you'll be
late." Yesterday Derek had been off school with a
cold dad.
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Yesterday Derek had been off school. Dad said his
teacher cried.
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Dad said his teacher cried out to him at the
school gate that Derek had missed an important
lesson on writing.
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Dereks full. Stop. The End