Writing an Essay Exam

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Writing an Essay Exam
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Essay Exam

• Why is retina detachment a serious issue?

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

Retina detachment
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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

Retina detachment
a serious issue
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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

Retina detachment
a serious issue
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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

Retina detachment
a serious issue
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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

Retina detachment
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The Relationship
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Essay Exam

• Intro I thinkt that retina detachment is a
  serious issue because it can lead to blindness.

I
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Essay Exam

• Intro I thinkt that retina detachment is a
  serious issue because it can lead to blindness.

I
retina detachment is a serious issue
think that
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Essay Exam

• Intro I thinkt that retina detachment is a
  serious issue because it can lead to blindness.

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retina detachment is a serious issue
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Essay Exam

• Intro I think that retina detachment is a
  serious issue because it can lead to blindness.

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retina detachment is a serious issue
think that
OLD
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Essay Exam

• Intro I think that retina detachment is a
  serious issue because it can lead to blindness.

I
retina detachment is a serious issue
think that
OLD
OLD
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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V1 I
• V2 retina detachment
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V1
• V2 retina detachment
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V1 SKIP
• V2 retina detachment
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V1 SKIP
• V2 retina detachment SKIP???
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Tell why retina detachment is a serious issue.
  Relate it to any medical incident in your own
  life.

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Essay Exam

• Tell why retina detachment is a serious issue.
  Relate it to any medical incident in your own
  life.
• I think that retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.

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Essay Exam

• I think that retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V1 You
• V2 detached retina
• Y blindness

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Essay Exam

• I think that retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V1 You
• Y blindness

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Essay Exam

• Define detached retina and tell why it is a
  serious issue. Relate it to a medical incident
  in your own life.

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Essay Exam

• Define detached retina and tell why it is a
  serious issue. Relate it to a medical incident
  in your own life.
• V1 You
• V2 detached retina
• Y blindness

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Essay Exam

• Define detached retina and tell why it is a
  serious issue. Relate it to a medical incident
  in your own life.
• V1 You OLD
• V2 detached retina
• Y blindness

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Essay Exam

• Define detached retina and tell why it is a
  serious issue. Relate it to a medical incident
  in your own life.
• V1 You OLD
• V2 detached retina OLD
• Y blindness

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Essay Exam

• Define detached retina and tell why it is a
  serious issue. Relate it to a medical incident
  in your own life.
• V2 Detached retina OLD
• V1 You OLD
• Y blindness

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Essay Exam

• Define detached retina and tell why it is a
  serious issue. Relate it to a medical incident
  in your own life.
• V1 You OLD
• V2 detached retina OLD
• Y blindness OLD

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Grading an Essay Exam
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Grading an Essay Exam

• Correct Class Info

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Grading an Essay Exam

• Correct Class Info Organized ?

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Grading an Essay Exam

• Correct Class Info Organized C

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Grading an Essay Exam

• C grade New Information ?
• Correct Class Info Organized C

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Grading an Essay Exam

• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C

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Grading an Essay Exam

• B grade New Idea
• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C

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Grading an Essay Exam

• B grade New Idea A
• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C

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Grading an Essay Exam

• B grade New Idea A
• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C
• Incorrect Info or Disorganized

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Grading an Essay Exam

• B grade New Idea A
• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C
• Incorrect Info or Disorganized D

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Grading an Essay Exam

• B grade New Idea A
• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C
• Incorrect Info or Disorganized D
• Incorrect Info AND Disorganized

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Grading an Essay Exam

• B grade New Idea A
• C grade New Information B
• Correct Class Info Organized C
• Incorrect Info or Disorganized D
• Incorrect Info AND Disorganized F

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V2 retina detachment
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness.
• V2 retina detachment
• Y1 blindness
• GRADE C

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness. There are five
  treatments.
• Old retina detachment
• Y blindness
• Expand five types of treatment

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Essay Exam

• Intro Retina detachment is a serious issue
  because it can lead to blindness. There are five
  treatments.
• Old retina detachment
• Y blindness
• Expand five types of treatment
• GRADE B

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Essay Exam

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness. This is particularly a
  problem for developed and semi- developed
  countries but not for Third World countries.
• Old retina detachment
• Y1 blindness

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Essay Exam

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness. This is particularly a
  problem for developed and semi- developed
  countries but not for Third World countries.
• Old retina detachment
• Y1 blindness
• EXPAND USA or St. Lucia vs. Haiti

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Essay Exam

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness. This is particularly a
  problem for developed and semi- developed
  countries but not for Third World countries.
• Old retina detachment
• Y1 blindness treatments
• EXPAND USA or St. Lucia vs. Haiti

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Essay Exam

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness. This is particularly a
  problem for developed and semi- developed
  countries but not for Third World countries.
• Old retina detachment
• Y1 blindness
• EXPAND USA or St. Lucia vs. Haiti
• GRADE A

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SCHOLARSHIPS

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness. This is particularly a
  problem for developed and semi- developed
  countries but not for Third World countries.

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SCHOLARSHIPS

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness.

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SCHOLARSHIPS

• Retina detachment is a serious issue because
  it can lead to blindness. This is particularly a
  problem for developed and semi- developed
  countries but not for Third World countries.

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHO?
• WHAT?
• WHERE?
• WHEN?
• WHY?
• HOW?

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHY?

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHY?

WHY?
WHO
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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHY?

WHY?
WHAT
WHO
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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHY?

WHY?
WHAT
WHO
WHERE
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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHY?

WHY?
WHAT
WHO
WHERE
WHEN
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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one question per unit
• WHY?

WHY?
WHAT
WHO
WHERE
WHEN
HOW
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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one Why question per unit

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one Why question per unit
• WHY is a detached retina a problem?

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one Why question per unit
• WHAT is a detached retina?

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Creating Essay Exam

• 1. Identify units
• 2. Develop at least one Why question per unit
• Is a detached retina a problem in the Caribbean?
  WHY?

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Creating Essay Exam

• 2. Develop at least one Why question per unit
• 3. Write tentative enthymeme number the Ys

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Creating Essay Exam

• 2. Develop at least one Why question per unit
• 3. Write tentative enthymeme number the Ys
• Why was the War of 1812 fought?

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War of 1812
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Francis Scott Key
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Creating Essay Exam

• 3. Write tentative enthymeme number the Ys
• I think that the War of 1812 was fought because
  of (1) _____, (2) _____ and (3)_________

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Creating Essay Exam

• 3. Write tentative enthymeme number the Ys
• The War of 1812 was fought because of (1) _____,
  (2) _____ and (3)_________

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Creating Essay Exam

• 3. Write tentative enthymeme number the Ys
• 4. Organize tentative outline use numbers for
  transitions

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Creating Essay Exam

• The War of 1812 was fought because of (1) _____,
  (2) _____ and (3)_________
• V1 You (SKIP)

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Creating Essay Exam

• The War of 1812 was fought because of (1) _____,
  (2) _____ and (3)_________
• V1 You (SKIP)
• V2 War of 1812 - Define or SKIP

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Creating Essay Exam

• The War of 1812 was fought because of (1) _____,
  (2) _____ and (3)_________
• V1 You (SKIP)
• V2 War of 1812 - Define or SKIP
• Why (1)
• (2)
• (3)

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Creating Essay Exam

• 4. Organize tentative outline use numbers for
  transitions
• 5. Write the question you know best, first

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Creating Essay Exam

• 5. Write the question you know best, first
• 6. Skip a space after the enthymeme

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Creating Essay Exam

• Enthymeme
• (Space)
• (1)
• (2)
• (3)

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Creating Essay Exam

• 6. Skip a space after the enthymeme
• 7. USUALLY do not include info on variables

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Creating Essay Exam

• 7. USUALLY do not include info on variables
• 8. Include LOTS of facts

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Creating Essay Exam

• 8. Include LOTS of facts
• 9. Include a 2nd sentence and an Expand if time
  permits

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Creating Essay Exam

• Enthymeme
• 2nd sentence
• (1)
• (2)
• (3)
• Expand

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Creating Essay Exam

• Enthymeme
• 2nd sentence
• (1)
• (2)
• (3)
• Expand

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Creating Essay Exam

• Enthymeme
• 2nd sentence
• (1)
• (2)
• (3)
• Expand
• Ending 1 sent.

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Creating Essay Exam

• 9. Include a 2nd sentence and an Expand if time
  permits
• 10. If time does not permit, draw arrow thru the
  space

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Creating Essay Exam

• Enthymeme
• (1)
• (2)
• (3)
• Ending 1 sent.

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DO NOT

• 1. Rewrite the question

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DO NOT

• Rewrite the question
• Use formal transitions

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DO NOT

• Rewrite the question
• Use formal
• transitions
• 3. Be non-factual

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DO NOT

• Rewrite the question
• Use formal
• transitions
• Be non-factual
• Just repeat class info

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DO NOT

• Rewrite the question
• Use formal
• transitions
• Be non-factual
• Just repeat class info
• Copy over the exam

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DO

• Anticipate the question AND organize beforehand

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DO

• Anticipate the question AND organize beforehand
• Write fast but neatly

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DO

• Anticipate the question AND organize beforehand
• Write fast but neatly
• Have LOTS of facts

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DO

• Anticipate the question AND organize beforehand
• Write fast but neatly
• Have LOTS of facts
• Have a new idea

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DO

• Anticipate the question AND organize beforehand
• Write fast but neatly
• Have LOTS of facts
• Have a new idea
• QUICKLY check spelling and fragments

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