Title: Healthcare privacy and workplace privacy
1Healthcare privacy and workplace privacy
- Week 12 - November 16, 18
2Administrivia
- Check out example posters!
- Homework 13 (last homework!) will be reading and
summary/highlight only - http//lorrie.cranor.org/courses/fa04/hw13.html
- Draft papers due November 18
- Mike Shamos will give guest lecture on Thursday
3Organizing a research paper
Research and Communication Skills
- Decide up front what the point of your paper is
and stay focused as you write - Once you have decided on the main point, pick a
title - Start with an outline
- Use multiple levels of headings (usually 2 or 3)
- Dont ramble!
4Typical paper organization
Research and Communication Skills
- Abstract
- Short summary of paper
- Introduction
- Motivation (why this work is interesting/important
, not your personal motivation) - Background and related work
- Sometimes part of introduction, sometimes two
sections - Methods
- What you did
- In a systems paper you may have system design and
evaluation sections instead - Results
- What you found out
- Discussion
- Sometimes called Conclusion
- May include conclusions, future work, discussion
of implications,etc. - References
- Appendix
- Stuff not essential to understanding the paper,
but useful, especially to those trying to
reproduce your results - data tables, proofs,
survey forms, etc.
5Road map
Research and Communication Skills
- Papers longer than a few pages should have a
road map so readers know where you are going - Road map usually comes at the end of the
introduction - Tell them what you are going to say, then say it,
(and then tell them what you said) - Examples
- In the next section I introduce X and discuss
related work. In Section 3 I describe my research
methodology. In Section 4 I present results. In
Section 5 I present conclusions and possible
directions for future work. - Waldman et al, 2001 This article presents an
architecture for robust Web publishing systems.
We describe nine design goals for such systems,
review several existing systems, and take an
in-depth look at Publius, a system that meets
these design goals.
6Use topic sentences
Research and Communication Skills
- (Almost) every paragraph should have a topic
sentence - Usually the first sentence
- Sometimes the last sentence
- Topic sentence gives the main point of the
paragraph - First paragraph of each section and subsection
should give the main point of that section - Examples from Waldman et al, 2001
- In this section we attempt to abstract the
particular implementation details and describe
the underlying components and architecture of a
censorship-resistant system. - Anonymous publications have been used to help
bring about change throughout history.
7Avoid unsubstantiated claims
Research and Communication Skills
- Provide evidence for every claim you make
- Related work
- Results of your own experiments
- Conclusions should not come as a surprise
- Analysis of related work, experimental results,
etc. should support your conclusions - Conclusions should summarize, highlight, show
relationships, raise questions for future work - Dont introduce new ideas in discussion or
conclusion section (other than ideas for related
work) - Dont reach conclusions not supported by the rest
of your paper
8Plan your talk
Research and Communication Skills
- Make an outline of what you want to talk about
- No need to present every detail of your paper
- Your presentation should motivate people who find
it interesting to read your paper - Consider the background of your audience
- If they are experts, focus on the details of your
research and results - If they are not experts, spend time on background
and motivating the problem - Consider how much time you have (10 minutes
MAXIMUM 5 minutes for questions)
9Structure your talk
Research and Communication Skills
- Outline
- Optional for short talks
- Background and motivation
- Sometimes you may want to lead with this
- Research methodology
- Or system design evaluation
- Results
- You may not have them if this is a work in
progress - Related work
- Could also go after background or at end,
optional for short talks - Contributions
- Useful in job talk, probably no time in 10-minute
talk - Future work
- Optional for short talks
10Making slides
Research and Communication Skills
- Use easy-to-read fonts
- Avoid text lt 20 pt font
- Use a simple slide design, no distracting
background images - Use a color scheme with high contrast
- Avoid animation unless it helps illustrate your
point - Clipart can help make your points more clear
and/or memorable, but dont let it distract - Make figures and tables readable
- Dont make too many slides (1-3 minutes/slide)
11Slide content
Research and Communication Skills
- Are slides lecture notes/handouts?
- For a class or tutorial, slides may double as
lecture notes ? more content on slides - For a research presentation, your paper is
usually the handout ? less content on slides - Dont try to put everything on the slide
- Dont include text unless you want people to read
it - If people are reading your slides they are not
listening to you - Keep text short
- Dont put too much math on a slide
- Just include key points, examples, etc.
- A figure may be worth 1000 words
12If you use overhead projector
Research and Communication Skills
- White background usually best
- Dont use a paper to cover up part of your slide
and uncover as you go - If you have to skip slides, dont put them up and
take them down real fast, just skip them
13Prepare
Research and Communication Skills
- Make your slides in advance
- Practice
- Time yourself
- Get feedback from others
- Watch yourself on video
- Make sure you know how to hook your laptop up to
the projector, change screen resolution, advance
your slides, etc. (Mac users, bring your
adaptor!) - If you need to point to parts of your slides,
decide if you will use, mouse, stick, laser
pointer, etc. and bring it with you
14Giving your talk
Research and Communication Skills
- Dress neatly
- Stand up straight, hands out of pockets
- Dont hide behind the podium
- Move around, but not too much
- Keep track of time
- Put your watch on podium, note clock in room,
watch moderator with time cards, etc. - Face the audience, look at your audience, not
just one person - Project your voice
- Dont talk too fast
- Finish on time (or early!)
15Keeping your audience engaged
Research and Communication Skills
- Convey enthusiasm
- Inject humor
- Tell a story
- Ask the audience questions
- Modulate your voice
- Speak slowly
- Try to prevent your audience from getting lost
- Provide ample background
- Define important terms up front
- Dont get into highly technical details unless
thats what your audience expects
16Handling questions
Research and Communication Skills
- If you have a strict time limit, leave time for
questions or avoid taking them - Answer clarification questions quickly
- Suggest that questions that will require lengthy
answers be taken off line - Dont get flustered by critics or questions you
dont know the answer to - Stay calm, diffuse the question, keep going
17Presentation for this class
- December 7, 9, 13
- 8-10 minute presentation plus 5 minutes for
questions - Speakers should setup during question time for
previous speaker if laptop switch is involved - You must use visual aids (probably slides)
- Email slides to me before class if you want to
use my laptop (preferable) - Practice and make sure you do not go over 10
minutes - Sign up!
18Homework 11 Discussion
- http//lorrie.cranor.org/courses/fa04/hw11.html
- Cases where US government used personal data to
violate civil liberties of US citizens - Brin Can we stand living our lives exposed to
scrutiny ... if in return we get flashlights of
our own?
19Guest speaker