Title: Havisham Carol Ann Duffy
1HavishamCarol Ann Duffy
2Lack of Miss in her name highlights lack of any
status.
Powerful opening sentence. Oxymoron of
affectionate and insulting language.
Havisham Beloved sweetheart bastard. Not a day
since then I havent wished him dead.
Use of pronoun rather than real name.
3Metaphor showing how much she has been crying.
Green also represents envy.
Prayed for it so hard
Ive dark green pebbles for eyes, ropes on the
back of my hands I could
strangle with.
Metaphor showing how withered she has become her
veins stick out like ropes.
4Play on word think. Shows how inactive she has
been since he left.
Effective one word sentence. Summarises her whole
identity.
- Spinster. I stink and remember. Whole days
- in bed cawing Nooooo at the wall
Loss of language. Losing the ability to express
herself.
Word normally associated with an animal.
Highlights her lack of femininity.
5slewed turned or twisted
Pronouns highlight how she barely recognises
herself.
Nervous her or the dress itself?
As the wedding dress decays, so does she.
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the dress - yellowing, trembling if I open the wardrobe
- the slewed mirror, full-length, her, myself,
-
who did this - to me? Puce curses that are sounds not words.
Questioning how she became like this. Use of
enjambment highlights this confusion.
Puce purplish brown
6Again the male is not referred to by name. He is
simply a body that she misses.
She becomes able to express herself again
physically in her dreams.
-
- Some nights better, the lost body over me,
- my fluent tongue in its mouth in its ear
- then down till I suddenly bite awake.
Imagery becomes more sexually suggestive and then
violent as she awakens to the reality of her loss
and hatred.
7Connotations of colour White purity,
virginity, pale, death Red Love, passion,
anger, blood
Oxymoron used again like in opening sentence.
Emotional confusion further highlighted by use of
enjambment.
-
Loves - hate behind a white veil a red balloon bursting
- in my face. Bang. I stabbed at a wedding-cake.
Violent verbs highlight her anger, reinforce how
abruptly her happy dream of wedded bliss came to
an end.
8Grotesque image emphasising her desire for
revenge.
Romantic idea yet when juxtaposed with previous
image it becomes sick and twisted.
-
- Give me a male corpse for a long slow honeymoon.
- Dont think its only the heart that
b-b-b-breaks.
Repeated theme of loss of language. Emotions are
so confused that she cannot express herself
clearly.