Title: Software Institute
1 Software Institute
Part 1 Introduction
John E. Clayton Nanjung University, Fall, 2004
2I Once Lived in Greece
3I Have Lived in 7 States
4MmmmChinese Food
5North Carolina Smoky Mountains
6North Carolina East Coast
7North Carolina Hattaras Light
Built 1870, 208 feet high, 1,500 feet from the
water's edge. 1919 - 300 feet from the water 1935
- 100 feet 1999 Moved 3100 feet from the water
8I Was Once Skinny
9My Family
10Our Home
11Inside our Home
12Why We Returned to China
13Syllabus
1 9/21 Introduction Student photos Quick
review 2 9/28 Information cards Paragraphs
10/05 No Class - National Day Holiday 10/12 No
Class Education Conference 3 10/19 4 10/26 5
11/02 6 11/09 7 11/16 8 11/23
14Objective Contacts
- Objective improve your ability to speak and
write - in English.
- Focus IT-related speaking, business writing.
- E-mail clayton_at_software.nju.edu.cn
- Downloads http//software.nju.edu.cn/clayton/
- Materials Notebook for class notes.
- Grade You will receive a letter grade (A, B, C,
D), - based on attendance, participation, and
assignments.
15Objective to Change Improve
16Change is in the Air
Bill's company installed a car wash system in
Frederick, Md. for a gentleman. The new owner
complained to Bill that he was losing significant
amounts of money from his coin machines each
week. He even accused Bill's employees of ripping
him off. Bill couldn't believe that his people
would do that. So he setup a trap for the thief.
They caught the thief in the act!
17Idioms
1. ripping him off stealing from him. 2.
caught the thief in the act saw him doing it.
18What the Camera Saw
19What the Camera Saw
20What the Camera Saw
21Optical Illusion
22Loading the Bike
Loading to put something into its
place Bike - Bicycle - Motorcycle
23Loading the Bike
24Is Punctuation Important?
Dear John I want a man who knows what love is
all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful.
People who are not like you admit to being
useless and inferior. You have ruined me for
other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings
whatsoever when we're apart. I can be forever
happy--will you let me be yours? Gloria
25Is Punctuation Important?
Dear John I want a man who knows what love is.
All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful
people, who are not like you. Admit to being
useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For
other men, I yearn. For you, I have no feelings
whatsoever. When we're apart, I can be forever
happy. Will you let me be? Yours, Gloria
26Be Careful of Little Things
A common problem -- I want a man who knows what
love is . All about you are generous , kind ,
thoughtful people , who are not like you
. Guideline -- A comma causes the reader to
pause briefly should directly follow the last
character A period causes the reader to
stop should directly follow the last character
27Be Careful of Little Things
28A Balanced, Detailed Paragraph
Riding a bicycle is preferable to driving a car.
First of all, a bicycle is relatively inexpensive
to buy and to maintain. While a car may cost
thousands of dollars annually, a good bicycle
will cost only a hundred dollars or so, and its
annual maintenance cost is very small. Biking is
also healthier. Not only does the biker get more
physical exercise than the driver, but bicycles
are nonpolluting. The consequence is a person
with strong legs and a strong heart whose bicycle
helps keep the environment clean. Finally,
bicycling is, unlike driving, personally
satisfying. Instead of being a robot inside a
machine, the biker pedals along, enjoying the
scenery, becoming a part of nature. In all but
the most inclement weather, the bicycle is a
pleasurable means of transportation.
Which is the topic sentence?
What specific points are being made?
It's relatively inexpensive
It's healthier
It's personally satisfying
Which is the concluding sentence?
29Homework Assignment
- List 5 things that really interest you.
- Order the list, with most important item first.
- Describe why item number one is very important to
you. - (think of at least three reasons why it is
important) - You will be asked about your list during next
class, but you neednt turn it in. Dont loose
it you will need it later.