Title: Session 1: Welcome
1Session 1 Welcome
- 9.30 Intro to RWS100 and the lower division
writing program - TA Introductions photo session(program of
assimilation and mind control revealed)
2Overview of RWS100
- 10.15 Overview of RWS100
- The program, RWS100, ICT, Spring students, the
course theme, etc.
3RWS 100 and the lower division writing program
- See the orientation handout for contact info and
resources for new TAs. - Argument is at the center of the program and 100.
- We mostly focus on non fiction, argumentative
texts.
4RWS 100 and the lower division writing program
- We ask students to interpret, analyze, and
produce written arguments, because this is
central to academic literacy, critical thinking,
and civic life -Lasch argument is the
essence of education, and central to democratic
culture - Universities are houses of
argument. - Graff Argument literacy is key
to higher education. - argument and
interpretation big part of academic
work/literacy
5- We want students to be able to identify claims,
evaluate evidence and reasons, locate
assumptions, identify argumentative moves, pose
critical questions, produce sophisticated
arguments, etc. - We do this not just because we think its good
for their souls, critical thinking, ability to
reason, deliberate, be engaged citizens, etc. But
also because its key to their professional
futures every gateway requires it.
6Why We Fight! (4 your right to write, argue
analyze well)
- The ability to interpret arguments, locate claims
and evidence, analyze moves and strategies, and
evaluate arguments are crucial skills. - They are central to business, law, professional
life, and to academic study (including graduate
school). - Students tested for these skills in the WPA, the
LSAT, GMAT, and GRE all the gateways to
professional life. - Consider the GRE
7Analytical Writing Tasks
- Present Your Views on an Issue (45 minutes,
choice of 2 topics) - Analyze an Argument (30 minutes)
- Each essay is scored on a 0-6 scale using
holistic scoring - Two scores for each essay
- GRE Website presents directions, actual topics,
scoring guide, and sample essays for both the
Issue and Argument tasks (www.gre.org/gentest.html
)
8Rhetorical self-consciousness understanding of
moves academic literacy
- We aim to improve academic literacy equip
students with transferable skills that will help
them in the disciplinary communities they are
part of help students become more rhetorically
sophisticated and self reflective producers and
consumers of texts, help students become
critical, engaged writers. - We want to help students read and interpret texts
rhetorically, to develop rhetorical self
consciousness to look at as well as through
language. So we also focus on moves, strategies
and choices what the author is doing with
words, how she is doing it, and why. - Revealing the rhetorical moves that writers make
is an important part of achieving academic
literacy, and of acculturation into disciplinary
communities. When you recognize the moves, you
not only understand the disciplinary conversation
better, you are better equipped to join it.
9You will (not) be assimilated
- This is, of course, just one way to design a
writing course many others are possible (genre,
critical literacy, cultural studies, personal
reflection, literary texts, etc.) - Writing programs often serve many masters, since
general education programs are collaborative
enterprises. Had we world enough and time (and
money and control) I like the idea of a hybrid
WID-based approach. - In any case, your experience in this program will
be valuable as a) its an influential model, b)
the trend seems to be toward aligning k-12 and
higher ed. around argument, and c) SDSUs program
is regionally influential. - In other words, in the future, you may go on to
teach writing in an entirely different way and
thats great. But it will be useful to have
familiarity with a program like this, which is
very large, multi-leveled, comprehensive and
tightly designed. Many other TAs will work in
programs where there is one semester of freshman
comp, and thats it. -
10Expectations
- ITC an important part of your work. You are
expected to attend. You get credit for it - More importantly, its part of collaboration,
professional development, and networking. The
dialogue matters. - Modest home work is assigned but its all to
prepare for your class. - Your contribution is important and most welcome.
We provide a lot of support, but you are welcome
to adapt remix, or add your own materials. We
encourage you to suggest new ideas/ways of
teaching the course
11Teaching in a time of crisis
- The budget crisis, class size increases, the
furloughs etc. have/continue to cause disruption,
uncertainty and change - We can't provide quite as much support as usual
- You may well have to teach RWS200 next semester,
where learning curve is steeper. - So using ITC and your fellow TAs is especially
important this semester.
12Teaching in a time of crisis
- Class sizes will be 32.
- Most major academic organizations (including the
WPA) have shown that university writing classes
should have at most 20 students. - Our pedagogies arent really designed for classes
this big. We may wish to share coping strategies. - In fact, we may want to jigsaw the work of
preparing class plans, etc.
13Meet your audience
- Spring semester students are often
developmental writers. Many will have just
completed 92A and 92B. - Some may be quite sophisticated readers and
writers, but youll be presenting them with a
very different way of approaching texts, and they
will find this challenging at first. - You may have some ESL/L1.5 students.
14The R in RWS Rhetoric
- Some students will assume they are in an English
class, and will bring expectations from high
school English. E.g. when you say claim or
argument, they may think thesis and/or
opinion. - You may need to remind them this is a Rhetoric
and Writing class so they don't keep reaching for
familiar strategies from high school English
(usually less of an issue in spring, as theyve
often experienced a semester or 2 or RWS.)
15Spring 2010 Course theme
- Arguments about language, literacy and the
politics of education. - Well read 3 main texts1) Postmans Word
Weavers2) Gladwells Outliers3) The PBS
documentary From First to Worst.
16Assignment Sequence
- 1. produce an account and analysis of a single
argument (Postman)2. gather sources, situate an
argument within a field of other texts, map out
and analyze relationships between them (extend,
complicate, illustrate, etc.) (Gladwell)3.
identify, analyze and evaluate rhetorical
strategies (From First to Worst) 4. a lens
assignment, group assignment, orflexible
portfolio assignment
17Managing the Final Paper
- Section 4 Portfolio/Lens/Student Writing
Assignments - For the final assignment, you can select from a
number of options. - We recommend one of the following, although you
are welcome to - suggest alternatives
- 1. Lens paper if you would like to stick to
traditional way in the 4th assignment has been
taught, you can use the lens assignment (see
past 100 syllabi, assignments, materials etc. for
details. This paper involves taking one of the
texts weve read and using it as a lens through
which to analyze another text or a contemporary
issue. The student can present an original
argument, interpretation or analysis. - 2. Group projects/presentations where students
get to make an argument that draws from one of
the issues raised in the class, or which focuses
on one of the texts covered. If you choose this
option, we suggest you construct a group
assignment with clearly defined roles for each
student, so that individual grades can be
assigned and you minimize free riding and
conflict.
18Managing the Final Paper
- 3. Portfolio Students have done small writing
assignments over the semester. You can assign
further short writing assignments in the final
part of the course, and give students an
aggregate grade for the completed portfolio. - 4. Reflection essay have students write a paper
that asks them to reflect on the writing work
they have done, what they have learned, the way
they approach writing, the things they still need
to work on, etc.
19The Readings
- Custom reader
- You should have Raimes and They Say/I Say (if
not, can get a loaner from bookstore). - Raimes comes with Eduspace online resources for
teaching writing (perhaps not that useful if
dont have a lab)
20Main Texts
- Short texts, incl. Bleich and Rifkin, and any you
select - Postman, The Word Weavers
- Gladwell, Outliers
- From First to Worst PBS documentary
- Various short texts for strategies and lens
section (E.g. you may wish to consider Parrys
The Art of Branding a Condition, Daily Show
materials, or texts related to education/budget
crisis) - BUT - in a sense the central text in the class
the students texts. (Your - fabulous teaching performance vs. their written
performance) - You may want to be brilliant, and may be tempted
to model your teaching on - the last class you took (a grad class). New
teachers tend to prepare to teach - the classes theyve just been in, just as armies
prepare to fight the last war. - Try to resist this.
21Supplementary texts
- For the 4th assignment, you can assign no text,
select your own text, or let students choose a
text(s), but youll need to work with them and
provide guidance.
22Overview of RWS100
- Sample syllabi, schedules and assignment
sequences are on the wiki (and will be on
Blackboard very soon). - Well talk more about syllabi later today and
tomorrow.
23- 11.00 The First Week(s)
- Introducing rhetoric, the course,
- and working with short texts
24Common Class Activities Patterns See p. 3 of
handout
- Pre-reading and pre-discussion work
(questionnaires to get at assumptions, surveys,
etc) - Jig saw work (students share researching key
parts of text and share in class) - Class discussion, group work
- Critical reading/rhetorical reading posing
questions, interrogating assumptions, reading
actively and critically (modeling qns to ask) - Charting what is the text doing what/how/why
moves are made - PACES (project, argument, claims, evidence,
strategies) - Pre-writing exercises
- Templates, rhetorical precis, metadiscourse,
transitions, mechanics - Drafting, peer review, student read alouds,
conferencing - Assessment and response
- Analysis (single argument, relationship between
texts, strategies, lens work) and presentation
of student argument - Reflection and reflective practice (applying
concepts to students own writing e.g. charting,
analyzing students moves and strategies, etc.)
25Example pre-reading exercises
- 1. In Class test
- Careful, you might run out of planet SUVs and
the exploitation of the - American myth, by David Goewey.
- Questions
- Is Goewey critical or complimentary of SUVs?
- Does the author believe that there is time to
make a change? - Does the author put more emphasis on car quality
or social issues in assessing the value of SUVs? - Is the author likely to be a supporter of major
oil companies? - Was this essay written in 1979, 1989, or 1999?
- 2. Examining Titles Carefully Chua
- - Chuas article A World on the edge became
part of her book World on Fire How - Exporting Free Market Democracy Breeds Ethnic
Hatred and Global Instability. - - Postmans article is part of a book called The
End of Education Redefining the - Value of School
- 3. Headings you can find out a lot by going
through the section and chapter headings - in Gladwell and First to Worst. E.g. Gladwell
book divided into 2 parts, - Opportunity, Legacies, and within each part,
aspects of the these concepts are - explored
26- Survey/discussion questions before reading Pinker
- Our moral sense is best described as coming from
a) our upbringing, b) society, c) religious texts
and teachings, d) other. - Moral laws are universalStrongly
Disagree Moderately Disagree Moderately Agree
Strongly Agree - What are the most important moral laws and
where do they come from? - Morality is a product of our evolutionary
pre-historyStrongly Disagree Moderately
Disagree Moderately Agree Strongly Agree - To what extent is our moral sense shared by other
animals?
27- Survey/discussion questions before reading
Postman - How is the definition of a word arrived at?
- In school you probably learned thousands of
definitions did you ever study how definitions
are constructed? How are definitions taught in
high school? - Who makes definitions?
- To what extent are definitions political,
reflecting the values, interests and purposes of
those who make them? - What are metaphors for? Are they important? Are
they mostly decorative? - Do metaphors matter in fields like biology,
physics, history, business, English, or the study
of argument? - Do metaphors shape the way we see things?
- How is technology talked about in our culture?
Taught in school? - To what extent do technologies shape how we act,
think, communicate, make sense of the world?
28- See page 3 of the handout for a detailed account
of each of these major activities. - There are handouts, class exercises, and class
plans based on each of these key activities (see
wiki or Blackboard).
29Some Roadmaps for RWS100
- Overview of RWS100 Overview of RWS 100,
Assignments, Classroom Activities, Coursework,
and Detailed Description of First 3 Weeks - Gives you multiple views broad overview, to
detailed description of 4 units, to
class-by-class description of first three weeks.
30Introducing rhetoric
- We ask that you tell students that RWS 100 is a
rhetoric class. Many will base their expectations
on high school English classes literary texts
and writing assignments, etc. Youll need to
emphasize that the interpretation, analysis and
production of argument is central, that they will
be reading non-fiction texts, and producing a lot
of analysis. - You may find Content is king - locate, remember
and deliver content. You may encounter a
textbook mentality in the reading practices of
many of your students, and an information
processor model of writing. - Textbooks are often anti-rhetorical -
presenting knowledge in terms of a
decontextualized, disembodied voice of authority,
a view from nowhere, and of knowledge as
settled, unified and authoritative - The contested, contingent, contextual,
community-centered, argument-drivenin short, the
RHETORICAL dimensions of knowledge of academic
discourse, are largely absent.
31Nudging students toward a rhetorical stance
- We want to move students from a focus on what
texts say (content) to what they do and how they
do it (rhetoric). Rhetorical self consciousness
achieving a kind of double vision of looking
at as well as through language. - Rhetorical self consciousness understanding
what texts do - is an important skill for
students. Revealing the rhetorical moves that
writers make, the strategies they draw on, is
part of achieving academic literacy, and of
acculturation into disciplinary communities. When
you recognize the moves you not only understand
the disciplinary conversation better, you are
better equipped to join it. - In the first week of class wed like you to
introduce key conceptsthrough the analysis of
some short texts. There is a folder on Blackboard
to help you with this. - Focusing on strategies and what texts do good
ways of introducing rhetoric.
32Basic Rhetorical Strategies
- How do texts position readers?
- What point of view do they adopt?
- From what perspective do they invite us to view
the world?Consider these chewing gum ads
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36Rhetoric Is Everywhere an Everyday Thing
- When a politician tries to get you to vote for
them, they are using rhetoric. - When a lawyer tries to move a jury, they are
using rhetoric. - When a government produces propaganda, they are
using rhetoric. - When an advertisement tries to get you to buy
something, it is using rhetoric. - When the president gives a speech, he is using
rhetoric. - But rhetoric can be much subtler (and quite
positive) as well - When someone writes an office memo, they are
using rhetoric. - When a newspaper offers their depiction of what
happened last night, they are using rhetoric. - When a scientist presents theories or results,
they are using rhetoric. - When you write your mom or dad an email, you are
using rhetoric. - Thought itself is rhetorical - when you think,
you engage in inner argument, or inner
persuasion in order to reach a decision or act.
37- HEADLINES DESCRIBING MEDICAL MARIJUANA DECISION
- Salon Magazine Court rules against pot for sick
people - New York Times High Court Allows Prosecution of
Medical Marijuana Users - USA Today MEDICAL MARIJUANA BAN UPHELD
- San Diego Union Tribune Court OKs Marijuana
Crackdown - L.A. Times Justices Give Feds Last Word on
Medical Marijuana - Christian Science Monitor US Court Rules
Against Pot For Sick People - Christian News Source Medical Marijuana Laws
Don't Shield Users From Prosecution
38Telemarketing Strategies Script
- Pre-introduction (Ask to speak to the
decision-maker) Introduction (Introduce
yourself and the reason for your call) Attention
Getter (Mention the key features of the offer
and qualify them for eligibility) Probing
Questions (Always ask for information that will
be useful for rebuttals) Offer (Explain the
product/service and terms of commitment) Close
(ALWAYS ASK FOR THE SALE) Rebuttal (deal with
objections)Sales Continuation (Agree, use
rebuttals, sell benefits, CLOSE)
Up/down/cross-sell (If there is another product
of less-price this is the time to sell it.)
Confirmation Close (Review the terms of the
offer to reduce buyer remorse) Final Close (End
on a positive note. Thank the customer and leave
a dial free number for customer support)
39- Everyday words, names, definitions, categories
how they are selected or constructed
rhetorical. - Consider
- War on terror, vs. war against Islamic
extremists, vs. fight against Al Queda (scope,
agents involved, action) - War on drugs Axis of Evil
- Body bags vs. transfer tubes
- Doctor assisted suicide vs. death with
dignity - Defense of marriage vs. marriage equality
- French Fries/Freedom fries
- Death Tax/Estate Tax
- Habit forming vs. addictive
- Erectile dysfunction vs. impotence
- Halitosis vs. bad breath
- Male pattern baldness vs. losing your hair
- Viagra!
40- The controversial New Yorker cover, politics of
fear.
41When ads used a lot of logos
42Todays ads often use different appeals
43WE CAN READ MATERIAL CULTURE RHETORICALLY
- By readingwe mean something more than simply
lifting information out of books and articles. To
read a text or event is to do something to it, to
make sense out of its signals and cluesReading
is thus not something we do to books alone. Or,
to put it another way, books and other printed
surfaces are not the only texts we read. Rather,
a text is anything that can be interpreted,
that we can make meaning out of or assign value
to. In this sense, all culture is a text and all
culture can be read. Joseph Harris and Jay
Rosen.
44Strategies in Sculpture Maya Lins Vietnam War
Memorial
45Why these choices for a memorial what
strategies might they represent?
- The Vietnam war memorial is black
- It is made of reflective black granite. When a
visitor looks at the wall, she will see the
engraved names and her own reflection - The monument is built along a pathway that
requires people to move along the small corridor
of space - Unlike many monuments, it lists all the names of
U.S. soldiers who died, and it does so in
chronological rather than alphabetic order (Lin
has she wanted the wall to read like an epic
Greek poem and return the vets to the time
frame of the war) - Information about rank, unit, and decorations are
not given - The wall is V-shaped, with one side pointing to
the Lincoln Memorial and the other to the
Washington Monument. Lin's conception was to
create an opening or a wound in the earth to
symbolize the gravity of the loss of the soldiers
46The rise of the bum-proof bench in Los Angeles
- "One of the most common, but mind-numbing, of
these deterrents is the L.A. Rapid Transit
Districts new barrelshaped bus bench that offers
a minimal surface for uncomfortable sitting,
while making sleeping utterly impossible. Such
bumproof benches are being widely introduced on
the periphery of Skid Row. Another invention...is
the aggressive deployment of outdoor sprinklers.
Several years ago the city opened a Skid Row
Park along lower Fifth Street, on a corner of
Hell. To ensure that the park was not used for
sleeping--that is, to guarantee that it was
mainly utilized for drug dealing and
prostitution--the city installed an elaborate
overhead sprinkler system programmed to drench
unsuspecting sleepers at random times during the
night. The system was immediately copied by some
local businessmen in order to drive the homeless
away from adjacent public sidewalks.Mike Davis,
City of Quartz Excavating the Future in Los
Angeles, p. 233.
47Why design seats this way? How does this
shape/constrain behavior, whose behavior is
targeted?
48Why design walls curbs this way?
492003 One of the greatest acts of political
stagecraft
Going far beyond the foundations in stagecraft
set by the Reagan White House, the Bush
administration is using the powers of
television and technology to promote a presidency
like never before. ELISABETH BUMILLER, NYT,
2003. For more on the history of political image
making see http//www.pbs.org/30secondcandidate/i
ndex.html
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51Political Imagery Rhetorical Strategy
- George W. Bush's Top Gun landing on the deck
of the carrier Abraham Lincoln will be remembered
as one of the most audacious moments of
presidential theater in American history. But it
was only the latest example of how the Bush
administration, going far beyond the foundations
in stagecraft set by the Reagan White House, is
using the powers of television and technology to
promote a presidency like never before.
(Keepers of Bush Image Lift Stagecraft to New
Heights Elisabeth Bumiller, New York Times, May
16, 2003) - The photos took place in San Diego Bay, and
required a lot of maneuvering to get shots that
did not include the San Diego skyline or city
and thus appeared far out at sea.
52Introducing rhetoric
- You may wish to use short texts, visual texts,
advertisements, op-eds and other texts that
students are probably familiar with in order to
introduce rhetoric. - Email communication is a good place to start
students are familiar with the genre, and may
find it easier to recognize strategies, acts of
persuasion, positioning, performance, etc. - This YouTube animation is a good text to start a
discussion about rhetoric about audience,
purpose, persuasion, strategies, genre, ethos,
rhetorical situation, etc.
53Using a YouTube Animation to introduce rhetorical
concepts
54- SubText animation showing a guy composing an
email to a girl he likes. The man thinks aloud
as he writes, and we glimpse what goes on in his
head as he composeshttp//www.youtube.com/watch?
v400w4XnjElI - Examine how this trivial act is full of
rhetorical issues. The character is asking, how
does this language present me? What persona does
it construct? What tactic will be most effective?
What moves should I make, how will this make me
seem? How should I think of my audience? What is
my purpose? How do I avoid embarrassment? - Have students take the concepts of rhetorical
situation, persuasion, construction of ethos,
strategies, etc., and apply to this visual text.
55- 12.00 See Jo Serrano, Jamie Madden and Karen
Keene in AH3138 for office info, keys, etc.
56- 1.00 p.m.
- Rhetorical Reading of Postman Glen McClish
57- 2.00 Blackboard, the Wiki Finding things
583. Blackboard Tech Tools
- The order of things (in a hierarchical,
inflexible, old new media warehouse/content
management system). - At first it will seem like a black hole. After a
while its merely confusing. But its where
everything is. - How to contribute (you have the power use it
carefully!! Dont delete things) - How to copy things to your course
- Making your Blackboard class visible to your
students - How to post on the discussion board in order to
hand in homework - Exercise post a bio sketch to the TA discussion
board.
59Blackboard's SafeAssign
- SafeAssign Tutorial in Blackboard - UNC
demonstrates how an instructor creates a
SafeAssign Assignment, interprets the SA report,
and how students submit their papers to SA - http//www.youtube.com/watch?v1gWf3pPVJ3k
- Blackboard SafeAssign Tutorial presentation on
the use of Blackboard's new Safe Assign - drag
the timeline bar to 30 minutes to start the
section on SA. - http//www.youtube.com/watch?veLMGP6rlOj0feature
related - ITS has a page on SafeAssign and
plagiarismhttp//its.sdsu.edu/tech/plagiarism/
60Blackboard Technology Tools
- If you feel ambitious, consider alternatives
wikis, CSMs, hosted sites, etc. I suggest we use
the wiki this semester for planning.
61- 3.00 Syllabus Workshop
- Sample syllabi, schedules and assignment
sequences are on the wiki (and will be on
Blackboard very soon).
62Learning Outcomes What they are, why they
matter, how to use them to your advantage.
- Outcomes should be listed on your syllabus, and
its useful to include them in your assignments
(see p. 25 of handout). - They can be used as part of student reflections,
and to help prime students for evaluations. - If things get ugly, the outcomes and syllabus
provide you with backup. In disputes, they
matter. - Recent change our outcomes are now explicitly
framed in terms of the general education program
and its capacities and goals (meta-outcomes) - This new language adds a certain amount of
institutional authority to our courses. You can
point students to the section that states how
important our courses and outcomes are to the
educational mission of the university (then go
back to berating them for sending text messages
in class). If questioned, you can also say,
look, the course goals arent my arbitrary whim
designed to torture you, but the universitys
carefully researched conclusion as to what
constitutes essential undergraduate academic
skills.
63- Pre-reading
- Discussion starters (freewriting, group work,
bboard, etc.)
64Discussion Participation
- Prime with a questionnaire, survey or questions
- Call by name
- Put in groups and assign responsibility
- Jig saw work
- Pyramids (alone, in pairs, 4s, etc.)
- Freewrite (give students time to assemble
thoughts, so they feel more confidant
contributing - Wait.at least 7 seconds. Try not to get stuck in
the habit of answering your own questions. - Have students post responses and homework to
Blackboard, so you can bring to class and use to
get discussion going.
65- Author Interview, Panel or Role-PlayingOne
student assumes the role of the writer and
answers question from the audience about the
articles main claim, choices regarding
supporting evidence, and the writers view of
his/her audience at the time of writing. - Students assigned to play role of author for
10-15 minutes. You may choose to let that student
greet the class in character, and provide a
brief summary of the argument that he/she wrote,
which everyone else in class has read. After
that, the exercise consists of class members
asking the writer questions about the argument
itself. - CAN ALSO be used with assignment 2 (sources) in
which students are responsible to assume the role
of different authors, and you can set up a debate
with Chua.
66Seth Taylor Seven Tips for Discussion (RWS 296)
- 1) Beware of cold starts. Consider directed
freewriting, journaling, or the Brain Dump at
the start of class. Quick responses can both
kickstart discussions, and eventually help
students question where their responses come
from.
67Seth Taylor Seven Tips for Discussion (RWS 296)
- 2) Be wary of asking the BIG questions first
- So what do you think about the reading?
- So whats the point of the chapter?
-
68Active Learning Seven Tips for Discussion
- 3) Let your first question be easy, possibly
about their reading process - How long did it take to read this?
- Where does it get interesting (or boring)?
- Were there any passages you found difficult,
interesting or unusual? - 4) Open-ended questions will require students to
think. Yes/No questions require very little of
them, and can often shut down discussion before
it starts.
69Active Learning Seven Tips for Discussion
- 5) Encourage students to explain, support, their
responses to a text. Almost every answer can be
followed up with a Why? question from the
instructor.
70Active Learning Seven Tips for Discussion
- 6) Encourage students to talk to each other,
rather than simply fire answers back to you - Re-directing students to respond to each others
ideas - Group breakout exercises
- Let students teach
71Active Learning Seven Tips for Discussion
- 7) At the end of class, try to re-cap or
summarize the ground that was covered. You do
not need the discussion to come to a grand
conclusion, but some sort of review - will help increase retention.