Title: Growing Up
1Growing Up
2What happens?
- The story is simple in outline
- A man comes home from work for the weekend. He
plays with his daughters, who attack him. In the
struggle their pet dog bites him. The girls tend
to his wound, and he goes out to his club for
some male company. - But beneath this simple narrative,
lots of other things are happening
3Themes
- Like several of the authors, Joyce Cary
chooses a title that suggests one of the themes
of the story - that of growing up. - This appears to refer mostly to the two
sisters, Kate and Jenny. - Later we see that it also applies in a way to
their father, Robert, who has been able to play
with them for years, but now sees a time when he
will be cut off from them, good only for paying
the bills. - The author makes this idea clear in the last
sentence of the story.
4- Another theme might be nature - and this story
looks at nature in human, animal and vegetable
terms. We see - the way the garden grows wild,
- the way the bitch, Snort, plays
- the way the girls act
- In all three cases there is a contrast between
ideas of cultivated and civilized nature and
nature in the wild or untamed - a contrast that
appears clearly as the girls go from a ferocious
attack on Robert, to acting as nursemaids, and
tending to his wound. - Which of these is the real nature of the girls?
The truth is that their nature includes
both of these.
5Characters
- Robert
- We see the story through Robert's eyes, and have
access to his thoughts. He seems very different
from his sensible wife (who does act like a grown
up). He is very close to his daughters who have
missed greeting him on his return home only once
in several years. The fact that he recalls this
incident so clearly shows the importance for him
of their concern. - When the girls attack him, Robert has no means to
defend himself. Here are two possible reasons. - He is not able to control his daughters
by force of personality. - He wishes not to use physical force for
fear of harming them.
6- Jenny and Kate
- The girls in the story are Jenny (twelve) and
Kate (a year older). They appear sometimes as
individuals, but also as a pair who act together.
Here are some of the things they do. - Individually
- Jenny reads a book and asks her father to lift
her onto a wall. - Kate plays on a swing.
- Jenny is alarmed by the wound whereas Kate still
laughs when she sees it. - Together they
- attack the bitch (Snort)
- fight their father
- tend his wounds
7- Carey tell us that the sisters adore each other
"and one always came to the other's help". (We
cannot be sure if this is information from the
writer to the reader, or what Robert is thinking.
It could be either.) - The girls have some contradictory feelings. We
see that growing up does not mean becoming more
sensible or like real adults. The girls'
excitability and wildness makes them in some ways
less responsible than when they were younger. - We see this contrast in the way they speak to
their father. Look at what they call him
"Paleface" and "Paleface Robbie" or "Daddy". What
does each of these names tell you about the
girls' feelings at the time? Paleface" is a name
used in Western films by "Red Indians" (the old
name for Native Americans) - and they are here
suggesting that they are savage, like the
stereotyped view of the "Red
Indians" in the cinema.
8- We can see this contrast in some other "before"
and "after" comments. - Before they attack Robert, the girls chant "Kill
him - scalp him. Torture him". - After they have attacked him, Jenny says, "We've
got to wash your bite" while Kate, who fetches
the water for the washing, says, "Daddy - sit
down - how dare you get up?"
9- Roberts Wife
- The story also shows us Robert's wife and her
friend, Jane. Unlike the girls, these two adult
women seem far removed from Robert's concerns and
outlook. There is no hint of a close personal
relationship. It seems (to Robert or the reader?)
that they see themselves as responsible - they
"run the world", while children
(of all ages) amuse themselves.
10- "Old Wilkins"
- Hes at the club. He does not appear directly -
but his description may serve as a grim warning
of what Robert may be fated to become, as he
retreats into the security of his club - it is
safe but utterly boring. Yet it passes the time.
11Writers technique narrators viewpoint
- This story is presented through Robert's eyes,
but not in his voice - so we can never be sure
that what we read is always exactly what is in
his mind
12Writers use of language
- Word choices
- Sometimes these are surprising. When we read that
Jenny is reading were told that she does it
furiously. (Line 33). Why? This description is
both odd and yet could be quite appropriate! - Elsewhere Joyce Cary uses clichés or stereotyped
words. Do you think he does this knowingly? Does
he wholly agree with the ideas that these phrases
normally suggest? E.g. Robert imagines himself as
an old buffer (line 149) and thinks of
Wilkins (line 158) as a crashing bore.
13Writers use of language
- Similes
- What effects does the writer achieve with
similes? Here are a few examples, for you to
comment on - a bamboo likened to a spear (line 71)
- a garden rake compared to a lance (line 89)
- the girls' bones compared to birds'
legs (line 95)
14- Think about what the images used in these
similes, what they say, and how they tell you
more about the thing they describe. - The girls' bones are like birds' legs because
they look thin and fragile to Robert. - The girls' bones are like birds' legs because
they of are a similar size, shape and colour - but, remember, birds legs end in claws!
- What other similes can you see, and how
do they work?
15- Patterns in the Language
- The writer uses patterns of balance with
repetition or antithesis. Look at this example - "The original excuse for this neglect was that
the garden was for the children...The original
truth was that neither of the Quicks cared for
gardening." (Lines 11 to 13) - By using the same words initially, the writer
makes clearer the contrast between the Quicks'
public and private explanations, before showing
how the original excuse over time
became true.
16DialogueJoyce Cary use the exact words that
people speak (shown as direct speech) to suggest
their character and the situation at various
points in the story. Look at these examples, and
see what they tell you about the character
"Tiger, tiger" (line 76) "Hi, Jenny - don't do
that. Don't do that, Kate..." (line 83) "...Kill
him - scalp him. Torture him." (line 91) "Sit
down, Daddy - sit down - how dare you get up."
(lines 127-8) "No, I'll get on the wall. Put
me up." (line 170)
17Comparisons
- Some comparisons/contrasts in the story
- the attitudes of Robert contrasted with those of
his daughters or his wife - gardens that are wild and those that are
cultivated - wild and tame behaviour in a family pet
- civilized and primitive or savage behaviour in
people - childhood and adulthood
(and the bit inbetween).
18- Attitudes in the text
- We learn most clearly about Roberts attitudes.
He has a sense of a world where he knew his
place, and could find happiness in it - but now
that is all changing, and he feels alarm at what
may become of him. - The characters in this story may share some of
the frustrations of the characters in other
stories, but this world seems stable (controlled
by women!) - Robert can seek shelter in his club, but theres
no suggestion that he would leave his world he
just accepts the changes and his place
in this world, and hides
from it!