7th GRADE DOL

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7th GRADE DOLS

• Mrs. Nortons Class

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DOL 1

1. we have drank all of the fruit punch eric but
   mother will buy some more for we kids
2. they arrived late they missed the beginning of
   the movie raiders of the lost arc

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DOL 1-Corrections

1. We have drunk all of the fruit punch, Eric, but
   Mother will buy some more for us kids.
2. Because they arrived late, they missed the
   beginning of the movie Raiders of the Lost Arc.

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DOL 2

1. inside of the room you could see how good he sat
   the Dining room table
2. vicky is the better of the four athletes but she
   cant be at all the games

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DOL 2-Corrections

1. Inside the room you could see how well he had set
   the dining room table.
2. Vicky is the best of the four athletes, but she
   cant be at all the games.

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DOL 3

1. if you had shook the malt good you could of
   drank it easily
2. please do the following things mail that package
   type the lists straightening the books and
   phoning mrs ames

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DOL 3- Corrections

1. If you had shaken the malt well, you could have
   drunk it easily.
2. Please do the following things mail the package,
   type the lists, straighten the books, and phone
   Mrs. Ames.

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DOL 4

1. ive never had no desire to have him learn me how
   to drive because hes to critical
2. i would of froze that corn but I couldnt get it
   off of the cob

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DOL 4- Corrections

1. Ive never had any desire to have him teach me
   how to drive because hes too critical.
2. I would have frozen that corn, but I couldnt get
   it off the cob.

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DOL 5

1. will you read the novel time warp or will you
   read the magazine article scientific mysteries
   over the weekend
2. i will lay down for a while and then go watch the
   movie gandhi

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DOL 5- Corrections

1. Will you read the novel Time Warp, or will you
   read the magazine article Scientific Mysteries
   over the weekend?
2. I will lie down for a while and then go to watch
   the movie Gandhi.

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DOL 6

1. marty and me have ate our lunches therefore well
   carry the boxes to the room
2. unless you lay down for a while youll collapse
   from overwork

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DOL 6-Corrections

1. Marty and I have eaten our lunches therefore,
   well carry the boxes to the room.
2. Unless you lie down for a while, youll collapse
   from overwork.

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DOL 7

1. i and my brother seen the movie young
   frankenstein at the majestic theater
2. there are two girls who are reading the short
   story called the india swing theyll shar it is
   Class

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DOL 7-corrections

1. My brother and I saw the movie Young Frankenstein
   at the Majestic Theater.
2. Two girls are reading the short story called The
   Indian Swing theyll share it in class.

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DOL 8

1. betty exclaimed dont touch that hot pan
2. I should of wore them gloves but i returned them
   back to my sister

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DOL 8-Corrections

1. Betty exclaimed, Dont touch that hot pan!
2. I should have worn those gloves, but I returned
   them to my sister.

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DOL 9

1. to be specific the chicago tribune is different
   from the chicago sun-times because the former
   contains more sections
2. he learned we students to refinish furniture as a
   result i refinished this table

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DOL 9-corrections

1. To be specific, the Chicago Tribune is different
   from the Chicago Sun-Times because the former
   contains more sections.
2. He taught us students to refinish furniture as a
   result, I refinished this table.

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DOL 11

• to enjoy a shakespearean play like hamlet a
  person should read it before seeing it i believe
• since donnas poem entitled springtime won first
  prize mr harris our teacher read it to us

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DOL 11-Corrections

1. To enjoy a Shakespearean play like Hamlet, a
   person should read it before seeing it, I
   believe.
2. Since Donnas poem entitled Springtime won
   first prize, Mr. Harris, our teacher, read it to
   us.

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DOL 12

1. the japanese company has began to develop to new
   computers and they plan to market there products
   next year
2. please leave roy read carls popular mechanics
   magazine since carl has already wrote his reoport

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DOL 12-Corrections

1. The Japanese company has begun to develop new
   computers, and they plan to market their products
   next year.
2. Please let Roy read Carls Popular Mechanics
   magazine since Carl has already written his
   report.

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DOL 13

1. cindy she dont borrow her bicycle to many people
   however she will let a friend use it
2. holy cross church must of purchases the twenty
   nine trees for its landscaping porject

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DOL 13-Corrections

1. Cindy doesnt lend her bicycle to many people
   however, she will let a friend use it.
2. Holy Cross Church must have purchased twenty-nine
   trees for its landscaping project.

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DOL 14

1. this here quote appeared on the poster be not the
   first whom the new is tried
2. the sun will rose over the catskill mountains by
   610 AM tomorrow

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DOL 14-Corrections

1. This quote appeared on the poster Be not the
   first whom the new is tried.
2. The sun will have risen over the Catskill
   Mountains by 610 A.M. tomorrow.

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DOL 15

1. that woman who is buying a ticket must like to
   travel a lot because she has went to europe every
   summer for the past ten years
2. i ran farther then the other forty nine people i
   believe

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DOL 15

1. That woman buying a ticket must like to travel a
   lot because she has gone to Europe every summer
   for the past ten years.
2. I ran farther than the other forty-nine people, I
   believe.

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DOL 16

1. has sarah took my book again asked george angrily
2. this rose colored dish was gave to my mother and
   i by my Aunt who lives in savannah

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DOL 16-Corrections

1. Has Sarah taken my book again?asked George
   angrily.
2. This rose-colored dish was given to my mother and
   me by my aunt who lives in Savannah.

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DOL 25

1. after finishing a note to jan the pen was put
   away by gloria
2. on vacation at stone lake the bailey family
   enjoyed boating swimming to fish and to hike

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DOL 25- Corrections

1. After finishing a note to Jan, Gloria put the pen
   away.
2. On vacation to Stone Lake, the Bailey family
   enjoyed boating, swimming, fishing, and hiking.

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DOL 21

1. she should of chose the best of the two plays
   which was life with father
2. juan stated me and my sister are reading the
   interesting novel the prince and the pauper

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DOL 21- Corrections

1. She should have chosen the better of the two
   plays, which was Life with Father.
2. Juan stated, My sister and I are reading the
   interesting novel The Prince and the Pauper.

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DOL 23

• 320 merlin circle
• cicinnati oh 45200
• july 23 1989
• dear bill
• do you have a sleeping bag i can lend when we
  goes camping together
• sincerely
• john

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DOL 23-Corrections

• 320 Merlin Circle
• Cincinnati OH 45200
• July 23, 1989
• Dear Bill,
• Do you have a sleeping bag I can borrow when
  we go camping together?
• Sincerely,
• John

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DOL 25

1. the job requires a person who can take dictation
   use office machines type fast and a person to
   work with customers
2. the pipes freezed i learned because this here
   furnace didnt work proper

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DOL 25- Corrections

1. The job requires a person who can take dictation,
   use office machines, type fast, and work with
   customers.
2. The pipes froze, I learned, because this furnace
   didnt work properly.

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DOL 26

1. they havent never found the most valuable of the
   too stole paintings
2. if you want to see an interesting Television
   program than watch thriller theater on thursday
   evenings

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DOL 26-Corrections

1. The haven't ever found the more valuable of the
   two paintings.
2. If you want to see an interesting television
   program, the watch Thriller Theater on Thursday
   evenings.

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DOL 27

1. i would of drew the outline but i didnt have
   nothing to draw with
2. me and barry visited cliff st in the afternoon
   and then in the evening we go to the movie willow

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DOL 27-Corrections

1. I would have drawn the outline, but I didnt have
   anything to draw with.
2. Barry and I visited Cliff St. in the afternoon,
   and in the evening we went to the movie Willow.

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DOL 28

1. on august 28 1988 we visited donna and her mother
   at 7213 ninth avenue seattle washington
2. shes certainly doing good in her new job at the
   waxford tire co

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DOL 28- Corrections

1. On August 28, 1988, we visited Donna and her
   mother at 7213 Ninth Avenue, Seattle, Washington.
2. Shes certainly doing well in her new job at the
   Waxford Tire Co.

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DOL 29

1. the abandoned house that no one is living in is
   located on the southern part of boulder colorado
2. i think the Mountains in the east is beautiful
   but mom thinks the ones in the west is most
   beautiful

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DOL 29- Corrections

1. The abandoned house is located in the southern
   part of Boulder, Colorado.
2. I think the mountains in the East are beautiful,
   but Mom thinks the ones in the West are more
   beautiful.

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DOL 30

1. the battle of the alamo is a Historic event of
   interest to many texans
2. she dont go to india in the summer because it
   too hot instead she travels to norway

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DOL 30- Corrections

1. The Battle of the Alamo is a historical event of
   interest to many Texans.
2. She doesnt go to India in the summer because its
   too hot instead, she travels to Norway.

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DOL 31

1. you have to many simple sentences in this
   paragraph jeff vary youre sentences for a better
   paragraph
2. the poem october is a serious poem written by
   robert frost in the twentieth century

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DOL 31- Corrections

1. You have too many simple sentences in this
   paragraph, Jeff vary your sentences for a better
   paragraph.
2. The poem October is a serious poem written by
   Robert Frost in the twentieth century.

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Week 6 Day 1

1. we divided the project between the five of us but
   were not sure well finish on time prof jackson
2. will you lend me fifty cents to make the bus to
   brownell park

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Week 6 Day 1

1. We divided the project among the five of us, but
   were not sure well finish on time, Prof.
   Jackson.
2. Will you lend my fifty-five cents to take the bus
   to Brownell Park.?

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Week 6 Day 2

1. hes going to his best Friends house to pick up
   the novel the outsiders
2. because aunt alice and him went to somerset inn
   for lunch and the stopped outside of the marine
   back to talk to nicks friend

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Week 6 Day 2

1. Hes going to his best friends house to pick up
   the novel The Outsiders.
2. Aunt Alice and he went to the Somerset Inn for
   lunch and then stopped outside the Marine bank to
   talk to Nicks friend.

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Week 6 Day 3

1. after she rang the bell many times she gives up
   and left these items by the door cookies fudge
   and cake
2. he has gave subscriptions to newsweek as
   christmas gifts for twenty nine years i think

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Week 6 Day 3

1. After she had rung the bell many times, she gave
   up and left these items by the door cookies,
   fudge, and cake.
2. He has given subscriptions to Newsweek as
   Christmas gifts for twenty-nine years.

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Week 6 Day 4

• moon river has been a popular song for more than
  twenty five years i think
• my car had a flat tire i was late for the movie
  the last emperor

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Week 6 Day 4

1. Moon River has been a popular song for more
   than twenty-five years, I think.
2. Since my car had a flat tire, I was late for the
   movie The Last Emperor.

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Week 6 day 5

1. i seen my father fix the faucet standing in the
   door
2. them students they are reading the article
   entitled pollution on the rise

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Week 6 Day 5

1. Standing in the door, I saw my father fix the
   faucet.
2. They are reading the article entitled Pollution
   on the Rise.

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Week 7 Day 1

1. she arent to concerned about reading the short
   story the gift of the magi shell see it on
   television next tuesday
2. they would of rode the cable car at niagara falls
   but they refused to wait in the long line thier

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Week 7 Day 1

1. She isn't too concerned about reading the short
   story The Gift of the Magi shell see it on
   television next Tuesday.
2. They would have ridden in the cable car at
   Niagara Falls, but they refused to wait in the
   long line there.

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Week 7 Day 2

1. the young girl who was six years old was trapped
   inside of the empty closet which had nothing in
   it
2. mrs vetter told us to do the following read the
   assignment take notes and write a Report

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Week 7 Day 2

1. The six-year-old girl was trapped inside the
   empty closet.
2. Mrs. Vetter told us to do the following read the
   assignment, take notes, and write a report.

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Week 7 Day 3

• brittania record company
• 7321 westridge boulevard
• los angeles ca 90049
• ladies and gentemen
• please send me youre latest catalog
• sincerely
• jennifer riley

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Week 7 Day 3

• Brittania Record Company
• 7321 Westridge Boulevard
• Los Angeles, CA 90049
• Ladies and Gentlemen
• Please send me youre latest catalog.
• Sincerely,
• Jennifer riley

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Week 7 Day 4

1. she dont want to leave we too kids attend the
   football game weve been gone to much recently
2. leave the book playing dead lay on the shelf
   until your ready to read it said mr arnold

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Week 7 Day 4

1. She doesn't want to let us two kids attends the
   football game weve been gone too much recently.
2. Let the book Playing Dead lie on the shelf until
   you're ready to read it, said Mr. Arnold.

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Week 7 Day 5

1. we read the poem paul reveres ride and the we
   started the novel lillies of the field in english
   class
2. one of picassos most famous paintings guernica
   were at the museum of modern art

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Week 7 Day 5

1. We read the poem Paul Reveres Ride, and then
   we started the novel Lilies of the Field in
   English class.
2. One of Picassos most famous paintings, Guernica,
   was at the Museum of Modern Art.

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Week 8 Day 1

1. before 230 PM miss spencer will have chose the
   students who will appear in the play a christmas
   carol
2. his plants have growed good because he has kept
   this here garden free of all harmful Insects

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Week 8 Day 1

1. Before 230 P.M. Miss Spencer will have chosen
   the students who will appear in the play A
   Christmas Carol.
2. His plants have grown well because he has kept
   this garden free from harmful insects.

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Week 8 Day 2

1. if i had knowed the you were hear you could of
   spoke about your trip to russia
2. have you swam across emerald lake before asked
   ethel

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Week 8 Day 2

1. If i had known you were here, you could have
   spoken about your trip to Russia.
2. Have you swum across Emerald Lake before? asked
   Ethel.

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Week 8 Day 3

1. roger has did that imitation for them children
   many times his next act however is new
2. which of the girls val or nancy has throwed the
   ball farthest today

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Week 8 Day 3

1. Roger has done that imitation for those children
   many times his next act, however, is new.
2. Which of the girls, Val or Nancy, has thrown the
   ball farther today?

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Week 8 Day 4

1. i havent began to do no homework tonight because
   my father said that im to clean my room first
2. irregardless of how poorly she played she won the
   game for we juniors when the ball slided threw
   the net

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Week 8 Day 4

1. I haven't begun to do any homework tonight
   because my father said that Im to clean my room
   first.
2. Regardless of how poorly she splayed, she won the
   game for us juniors when the ball slid through
   the net.

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Week 8 Day 5

1. on august 23 1987 our boathouse which was built
   for years ago on lake michigans eastern shore
   burned down
2. there is one poem that appeals to me it is
   entitled annabel lee by edgar allan poe

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Week 8 Day 5

1. On August 23, 1987, our boathouse, which was
   built four years ago on Lake Michigans eastern
   shore, burned down.
2. One poem that appeals to me is entitled Annabel
   Lee by Edgar Allan Poe.

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• Week 9 Day 2
• i should of knowed that sean and me would have to
  deliver the milwaukee journal on easter
• among the to girls it was agreed that bettys
  mother is the better cook in the neighborhood

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1. I should have known that Sean and I would have to
   deliver the Milwaukee Journal on Easter.
2. Between the two girls it was agreed that Bettys
   mother is the best cook in the neighborhood.

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• Week 9 Day 2
• the song st louis blues has been popular for a
  long time because many famous singers have sang
  it
• she went inside of the haunted house but she
  wouldnt go down in the basement said joan

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1. The song St. Louis Blues has been popular for a
   long time because many famous singers have sung
   it.
2. She went inside the haunted house, but she
   wouldnt go down into the basement, Joan said.

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• Week 9 Day 3
• is the people in the south more friendly then
  those in the north
• she must of did her packing early mother since
  she left for boston at 830 AM

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1. Are the people in the South more friendly than
   those in the North?
2. She must have done her packing early, Mother,
   since she left for Boston at 830 A.M.

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• Week 9 Day 4
• who has broke this chair again shouted mom it is
  an antique that I price and like very much
• we have wrote our rough Drafts and now we have
  alot of revising to do

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1. Who has broken this chair again? shouted Mom.
   It was an antique that I prize.
2. We have written our rough drafts, and now we have
   a lot of revising to do.

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• Week 9 Day 5
• that boy who is very independent never asks for
  any favors and dont like to do none for others
• they should of went to see that play julius
  ceasar when it was at the orpheum theater

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1. That very independent boy never asks for any
   favors and doesnt like to do any for others.
2. They should have gone to see the play Julius
   Caesar when it was at the Orpheum Theater.

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• Week 10 Day 1
• 
  222 pine lane
• 
  brevard nc 28712
• 
  december 18 1988
• dear aunt hazel
• me and mother would love to spend a week with
  you and uncle richard at hilton head island
  during the summer

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• 
  222 Pine Lane
• 
  Brevard, NC 28712
• 
  December 18, 1988
• Dear Aunt Hazel,
• Mother and I would love to spend a week with
  you and Uncle Richard at Hilton Head Island
  during the summer.

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• Week 10 Day 2
• on march 9 1979 the divers found valuable coins
  that are later discussed in the article famous
  spanish doublooons
• since im not sure can you tell me if marco polo
  died in ad 1324

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1. On March 9, 1979, the divers found valuable coins
   that were later discussed in the article Famous
   Spanish Doubloons.
2. Since Im not sure, can you tell me if Marco Polo
   died in A.D. 1324?

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• Week 10 Day 3
• she couldnt of ran any better however she lost
  the race
• someones wallet was left hear yesterday after the
  highland glee club had sang

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1. She couldnt have run any better however, she
   lost the race.
2. Someones wallet was left here yesterday after
   the Highland Glee Club had sang.

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• Week 10 Day 4
• keep proper margins when you write said the
  Teacher and also pay attention to youre
  handwriting
• the prophet muhammed who was the founder of the
  islamic religion preached belief in allah

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1. Keep proper margins when you write, said the
   teacher, and also pay attention to your
   handwriting.
2. The prophet Muhammed, founder of the Islamic
   religion, preached belief in Allah.

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• Week 10 Day 5
• you can travel to spokane washington on highway
  95 I believe
• being an architect must be exciting for example
  think of designing the empire state building in
  new york city

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1. You can travel to Spokane, Washington, on Highway
   95, I believe.
2. Being an architect must be exciting for example,
   think of designing the Empire State Building in
   New York City.

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• Week 11 Day 1
• amy remarked gwen hasnt wrote since she moved to
  rochester new york
• my father has chose the hadley travel agency to
  plan a two week vacation in spain and portugal

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1. Amy remarked, Gwen hasnt written since she
   moved to Rochester, New York.
2. My father has chosen the Hadley Travel Agency to
   plan a two-week vacation in Spain and Portugal.

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• Week 11 Day 2
• im angry with my dog freckles which we buyed for
  seventy five dollars in grand rapids last year
• to finish the float on time well need to buy more
  lumber paint and nails

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1. Im angry with my dog Freckles, which we bought
   for seventy-five dollars in Grand Rapids last
   year.
2. To finish the float on time, well need to buy
   more lumber, paint, and nails.

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• Week 11 Day 3
• at a theater on locust blvd ann seen a movie
  about the great depression
• dr manning sayed that food clothing and health
  supplies will be sent by us to south america on
  the twenty first of january

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1. At a theater on Locust Blvd., Ann saw a movie
   about the Great Depression.
2. Dr. Manning said that we will send food,
   clothing, and health supplies to South America on
   the twenty-first of January.

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• Week 11 Day 4
• in the book arctic adventure a dog that had froze
  during a blizzard was let behind
• russian is a difficult Language I havent never
  understood it

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1. In the book Artic Adventure a dog that had frozen
   during a blizzard was left behind.
2. Because Russian is a difficult language, I
   (havent ever or have never) understood it.

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• Week 11 Day 5
• jackie has drew a picture of a ship in the harbor
  at mystic connecticut the ship dont look very
  big
• 2. them cats hasnt never let that dog come near
  there food

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1. Jackie has drawn a picture of a ship in the
   harbor at Mysitc, Connecticut the ship doesnt
   look very big.
2. (Those or These) cats (havent ever or have
   never) let that dog come near their food.

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• Week 12 Day 2
• hasnt me patterson never borrowed you her copy
  of julia childs book the art of french cooking
• a book about harry truman a former President was
  found outside of the school

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1. Hasnt Mr. Patterson ever lent you her copy of
   Julia Childs book The Art of French Cooking?
2. A book about Harry Truman, a former President,
   was found outside the school.

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• Week 12 Day 2
• me and prof adams catched a large lizard in
  arizona however it fighted hard and escaped
• them children misplaced our tv guide and dad
  couldnt find it to see if wild world of animals
  was scheduled

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1. Prof. Adams and I caught a large lizard in
   Arizona however, it fought hard and escaped.
2. (Those or These) children misplaced our TV Guide,
   and Dad couldnt find it to see if Wild World of
   Animals was scheduled.

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• Week 12 Day 3
• i learned more about poetry when we studied casey
  at the bat then I learn from the other poems
• finding camping enjoyable one of my friends have
  decided to join the boy scouts of america a
  worthwhile organization

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Week 12 Day 3 1. I learned more about poetry
when we studied Casey at the Bat than I learned
from the other poem. 2. Finding camping
enjoyable, one of my friends has decided to join
the Boy Scouts of America, a worthwhile
organization.
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• Week 12 Day 4
• serfs bore many hardships in england during the
  middle ages and didnt have no freedom
• as we was setting at a table in mi casa a
  waitress brings a bowl of corn chips

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1. Serfs bore many hardships in England during the
   Middle Ages and (didnt have any or had no)
   freedom.
2. As we were sitting at a table in Mi Casa, a
   waitress brought a bowl of corm chips.

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• Week 12 Day 5
• the longer of the three articles was excellent
  the article described a landslide in the rocky
  mountains
• each of the Students did their own research about
  world war 1

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1. The longest of the three articles, which
   described a landslide in the Rocky mountains, was
   excellent.
2. Each of the students did his or her own research
   about World War 1.

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• Week 13 Day 1
• doesnt me and gary have the more interesting
  article you have ever read in the school
  newspaper mother
• to reach sarahs house in dallas irene goes south
  on highway 20 and then took that highway west

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1. Dont Gary and I have the most interesting
   article you have ever read in the school
   newspaper, Mother?
2. To reach Sarahs house in Dallas, Irene goes
   south on highway 20 and then takes that highway
   west.

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Week 13 Day 2
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Week 27 DOL

1. we leaved for hartsfield airport at 530 PM and
   flied to london we landed in london at 1030 AM
2. we seen mont blanc we seen it while we was
   crossing the alps in france

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1. We left for Hartsfield Airport at 530 P.M. and
   flew to London, were we landed at 1030 A.M.
2. We saw Mont Blanc while crossing the Alps in
   France.

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DOL

1. prof nelson went to the skylight theater and seen
   the film the seventh seal a classic directed by
   ingmar bergman
2. because a bee stinged grace before she could
   avoid it

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• Prof. Nelson went to the Skylight Theater and saw
  the film The Seventh Seal, a classic directed by
  Ingmar Bergman.
• A bee stung Grace before she could avoid it.

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DOL

1. in the northeast their were some pro-british
   feelings during the revolutionary war
2. sarah may of forgot to return her brothers
   goggles before the swim meat

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• In the Northeast there were some pro-British
  feelings during the Revolutionary War.
• Sarah may of forgotten to return her brothers
  goggles before the swim meet.

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DOL

1. i and my sister finded an old harmonica we
   learned to play the old harmonica good
2. several times mother has sat aside Strawberries
   she has growed and has forgot to serve them

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1. My sister and I found an old harmonica, which we
   learned to play well.
2. Several times mother has sat aside strawberries
   she has grown them and forgotten to serve them.

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DOL

• 0420 potomac dr
• topeka ks 06660
• february 21 1989
• mystery book club
• 4102 kelly ave
• portland or 97201

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• 0420 Potomac Dr.
• Topeka KS 06660
• February 21, 1989
• Mystery Book Club
• 4102 Kelly Ave.
• Portland, OR 97201

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DOL

1. for many years on labor day we have drove to
   maple wisconsin the brule river is near this town
2. yes i have frequently gave aunt rita clippings
   from the harrisburg star fay said

137

1. For many years on Labor Day, we have driven to
   Maple, Wisconsin, a town near the Brule River.
2. Yes I have frequently given Aunt Rita clippings
   from the Harrisburg Star, Fay said.

138
DOL

1. our Choir hasnt never sang as st pauls lutheran
   church on the corner of state st and carlton ave
2. the larger collection of indian relics is located
   in the southwest smaller colletions can be found
   elsewhere

139

• Our choir has never sung at St. Pauls Lutheran
  Church on the corner of State St. and Carlton
  Ave.
• The larger collection of Indian relics is located
  in the Southwest smaller collections can be
  found elsewhere.

140
DOL

1. for to weeks he has knowed that these here items
   are on sale sweaters slacks and shoes
2. on monday at hidden valley park we played
   baseball at the same time our parents set under a
   tree it was shady

141

1. For two weeks he has known that these items are
   on sale sweaters, slacks, and shoes.
2. On Monday at Hidden Valley Park, we played
   baseball while our parents sat under a shady tree.

142
DOL

1. the poem a fly was wrote during the restoration
   in england when charles II returned to the throne
   
2. my parents they have went to highbridge middle
   school and spoke to my teachers several times

143

• The poem A Fly was written during the
  Restoration in England when Charles II returned
  to the throne.
• My parents have gone to Highbridge Middle School
  and spoken to my teachers several times.

144
DOL

1. in the short story lost in paris the main
   character set and looked at notre dame the famous
   cathedral for a long time
2. when dad shut a second story window a plant fell
   of the ledge and crashed below

145

1. In the short story Lost in Paris the main
   character sat and looked at Notre Dame, the
   famous cathedral, for a long time.
2. When Dad shut a second-story window, a plant fell
   of the ledge and crashed below.

146
DOL

1. when we was in selma last april we eat at the
   ryan house a restaurant their
2. our Teacher teached us that the industrial
   revolution began in england

147

1. When we was in Selma last April, we ate at the
   Ryan House, a restaurant there.
2. Our teacher taught us that the Industrial
   Revolution began in England.

148
DOL

• fashion masters, inc
• 3824 delaware st
• providence ri 02920
• dear sir or madam
• please enter my name in youre grand sweepstakes
  contest
• sincerely

149

• Fashion Masters, Inc
• 3824 Delaware St.
• Providence RI 02920
• Dear Sir or Madam
• Please enter my name in your Grand Sweepstakes
  Contest.
• Sincerely,

150
DOL

1. one of the children were hurt on that there slid
   said mrs jenkins
2. arthur should of wrote to he and cal irregardless
   of his dislike for writing

151

• One of the children was hurt on that slide,
  said Mrs. Jenkins.
• Arthur should have written to Cal and him
  regardless of his dislike for writing.

152
DOL

1. yes i like swimming to golf and fishing
2. nicky breaked a japanese vase and taked it to the
   fixit shop on peachtree boulevard

153

• Yes, I like swimming, golfing, and fishing.
• Nicky broke a Japanese vase and taked it to the
  Fixit Shop on Peachtree Boulevard.

154
DOL

1. she lay the paper on the porch passing by the
   house
2. my grandmother hasnt never losed her faith in
   god

155

1. Passing by the house, she laid the paper on the
   porch.
2. my grandmother has never lost her faith in God.

156
DOL

1. st peters church is the more modern of the
   catholic churches in san francisco
2. his chest was sunburned so bad on coney island
   that now he must lay on his back

157

• St. Peters church is the most modern of the
  Catholic churches in San Francisco.
• His chest was sunburned so badly on Coney Island
  that now he must lie on his back.

158
DOL

1. the beach boys ate at the regency hotel before
   they singed at foster auditorium
2. officer smith I said me and sally doesnt know
   whom torn down the poster on the corner of maple
   st and hadley rd

159

• The Beach Boys had eaten at the Regency Hotel
  before they sang at Foster Auditorium.
• Officer Smith, I said, sally and I dont know
  who torn down the poster on the corner of Maple
  St. and Hadley Rd.

160
DOL

1. my Uncle learned me to choose between many apples
   to find the better ones
2. in washington dc dad leaded us through the
   library of congress

161

• My uncle taught me to choose among many apples to
  find the best ones.
• In Washington, D.C. Dad led us through the
  Library of Congress.

162
DOL

1. isnt youre sister doing nothing about finding my
   book the slave trader
2. that there man he thinks that the girls
   theirselves should pay for the window they had
   breaked

163

1. Is your sister doing nothing about finding my
   book The Slave Trader?
2. He thinks that the girls themselves should pay
   for the window they had broken.

164
DOL

1. two old copies of longfellows long poem
   evangeline are in dr mellons library
2. the westlake womens club will right a request mrs
   dillon for thirty five brochures

165

1. Two old copies of Longfellows long poem
   Evangeline are in Dr. Mellons library.
2. The Westlake Womens Club will write a request
   Mrs. Dillon for thirty-five brochures.

166
DOL

1. me and my sister have went to the minnesota state
   fair and have rode on the farris wheel for the
   past too years
2. the members theirselves rose the money to see the
   play the miracle worker

167

• For the past two years my sister and I have gone
  to the Minnesota State Fair and have ridden on
  the Farris Wheel.
• The members themselves raised the money to see
  the play The Miracle Worker.

168
DOL

• has mayor davis gave his speech about the role of
  the french in world war I
• yesterday ms sutton breaked a light bulb
  consequently she bought a new one for fifty seven
  cents

169

• Has Mayor Davis given his speech about the role
  of the French in World War I?
• Yesterday Ms. Sutton broke a light bulb
  consequently, she bought a new one for
  fifty-seven cents.

170
DOL

1. either he left someone use the boat or it has
   sank
2. my german shepherd prince has shook that pillow
   until its almost in shreds

171

• Either he let someone use the boat, or it has
  sunk.
• My German shepherd Prince has shaken that pillow
  until its almost in shreds.

172
DOL

1. the criminal runned down turner blvd and headed
   East toward highway 68
2. they havent did nothing about changing the rule
   requiring a two thirds majoity

173

• The criminal ran down Turner Blvd. and headed
  east toward Highway 68.
• They have done nothing about changing the rule
  requiring a two-thirds majority.

174
DOL

1. at 900 PM this evening frank sinatra the singer
   who sings songs will sing my way a song he made
   famous and well-known
2. for who have you drew that picture of cliffs in
   new mexico

175

1. At 900 P.M. Frank Sinatra, the singer, will sing
   My Way, a song he made famous.
2. For whom have you drawn that picture of cliffs in
   New Mexico?

176
DOL

1. my cousin has began writing in spanish to a
   mexican pen pal and just taked a letter to the
   glenveiw post office
2. mother brang some pretzels to we girls after we
   had did the work

177

• My cousin has begun writing in Spanish to a
  Mexican pen pal and just took a letter to the
  Glenview Post Office.
• Mother brought some pretzels to us girls after we
  had done the work.

178
DOL

1. when our cat and dog fought at junction park dad
   throwed a stick to break them apart
2. once we were outside of the cabin we continued
   cleaning the boat loading our gear and to pack
   the life preservers

179

• When our cat and dog fought at Junction Park dad
  threw a stick to break them apart.
• Once we were outside of the cabin, we continued
  cleaning the boat, loading our gear, and to pack
  the life preservers.

180
DOL

1. ms talbot said that she had parked youre toyota
   outside of the gateway transportation company
2. our Club rose nighty eight dollars for the
   american red cross we recived a letter of thanks

181

1. Ms. Talbot said that she had parked your Toyota
   outside the Gateway Transportation Company.
2. Since our club rose ninety-eight dollars for the
   American Red Cross, we received a letter of
   thanks.

182
DOL

1. i didnt have no time too watch cheers on
   television
2. i borrowed a tape to keith I also borrowed him
   several books

183

1. I didnt have have any time to watch Cheers on
   television.
2. I lent Keith a tape and several books.

184
DOL

1. the article parents and their children is
   controversial readers have conflicting opinions
   about it
2. they brung back colored sand from the grand
   canyon which they had visited recent

185

• The article Parents and Their Children is
  controversial readers have conflicting opinions
  about it.
• They brought back colored sand from the Grand
  Canyon, which they had visited recently.

186
DOL

1. when we visited our friends in the west we eat
   several types of fruit they had grew oranges
   plums and grapes
2. the babysitter had took the children to see the
   mummys curse and they goed to the ice-cream store
   afterward

187

• When we visited our friends in the West, we ate
  several types of fruit they had grown oranges,
  plums, and grapes.
• The baby sitter had taken the children to see the
  Mummys Curse and they went to the ice-cream
  store afterward.

188
DOL

1. the picture that mother sat on the table showed
   an airplane in front of mt kilimanjaro a mountain
   in africa
2. because our Neighbors barrowed me there map of
   houston to locate the astrodome

189

1. The picture that Mother set on the table showed
   an airplane in front of Mt. Kilimanjaro a
   mountain in Africa.
2. Our neighbors lent me a map of Houston to locate
   the Astrodome.

190
DOL

1. we swum there in august but he hadnt knowed about
   the serious pollution
2. aunt helen found someones purse were it has been
   leaved after the performance by the vienna boys
   choir

191

• We swam there in August, but we hadnt known
  about the serious pollution.
• Aunt Helen found someone's purse were it has been
  left after the performance by the Vienna Boys
  Choir.

192
DOL

1. me and my friend caught a rabbit inside of a trap
   we had sat in the garden
2. a bee stung greg greg runs in the house

193

1. My and I caught a rabbit inside a trap we had set
   in the garden.
2. A bee stung Greg, and he ran into the house.

194
DOL

1. them people hadnt never saw the greek folk
   dances before
2. during his lecture dr wescott read the poem
   justice wrote after the french revolution

195

• These people had never seen the Greek folk dances
  before.
• During his lecture Dr. Wescott read the poem
  Justice, written after the French Revolution.

196
DOL

1. no we havent never drove to the lake of the
   ozarks for the fourth of july mr adams says last
   monday
2. when i shaked the apple tree a shower of apples
   fell

197

• No we have never driven to the Lake of the
  Ozarks for the Fourth of July, Mr. Adams said
  last Monday.
• When I shook the apple tree, a shower of apples
  fell.

198
DOL

1. we went to there house at 124 winton avenue but
   they had already leaved for the north
2. the hampton gazette announced that governor
   samson whould speak on Television at 730 PM

199

1. We went to their house at 124 Winton Avenue, but
   they had already left for the North.
2. The Hampton Gazette announced that Governor
   Samson would speak on television at 730 P.M.

200
DOL

1. it was overcast and drizzly we decided not to go
   to bradford beach
2. because they enjoyed rafting on the snake river
   this year they plan to return to the snake river
   next year

201

• Since it was overcast and drizzly, we decided not
  to go to Bradford Beach.
• Because they enjoyed rafting on the Snake River
  this year, they plan to return there next year.

202
DOL

• i knowed i would recive these gifts for my
  birthday this year a sweater a calculator and a
  basketball
• entering the theater the smell of popcorn made
  dad hungry

203

• I knew I would receive these gifts for my
  birthday a sweater, a calculator, and a
  basketball.
• Entering the theater, Dad smelled the popcorn and
  became hungry.

204
DOL

1. the guard and the gate taking tickets shouted get
   away from that fence
2. in march them students will read the short story
   wheldon the weed which was wrote in the twentieth
   century

205

• The guard taking tickets at the gate shouted,
  Get away from that fence!
• In march these students will read the short story
  Wheldon the Weed, which was written in the
  twentieth century.

206
DOL

1. mrs nissen chosed a copy of national geographic
   to learn her students about the australian
   aborigines
2. maria said i have wrote letters to four of my
   cousins therefore i dont want to write no more
   today

207

• Mrs. Nissan chose a copy of National Geographic
  to teach her students about the Australian
  Aborigines.
• Maria said, I have written letters to four of my
  cousins therefore, I dont want to write any
  more today.

208
DOL

1. have you ever before saw this here oak tree,
   which bursts into color every october
2. because of the many people at harleys inn a new
   restaurant mom lost her coat

209

1. Have you ever before seen oak tree, which bursts
   into color every October?
2. because of the many people at Harleys Inn, a new
   restaurant, Mom lost her coat.

210
DOL

1. yes i and ella seen that painting in the museum
2. the bell in the tower of the first baptist church
   is cracked it has not been rang for a long time

211

• Yes, Ella and I saw that painting in the museum.
• Because the bell in the tower of the First
  Baptist Church is cracked, it has not been rung
  for a long time.

212
DOL

1. irregardless of the weather we plan to eat
   breakfast load the car and driving to the cottage
2. harold couldnt of took youre chinese puzzle and
   broke it down into its parts

213

1. Regardless of the weather we plan to eat
   breakfast, load the car, and drive to the
   cottage.
2. Harold couldnt of taken your Chinese puzzle and
   broken it down into its parts.

214
DOL

1. no he dont plan to stop at mt rushmore on his
   trip to yellowstone park
2. before the boys could lie the napkins on the
   picnic tables the wind blows them away

215

1. No, he doesnt plan to stop at Mt. Rushmore on
   his trip to Yellowstone Park.
2. The wind blew the napkins away before the boys
   could lay them on the picnic tables.

216
DOL

1. mt everest is the highest peak of the himalayas
   which extend along the border between india and
   tibet
2. one of the clerks at the first national bank on
   main st in burlington fighted with a robber who
   was catched later

217

• Mt. Everest is the highest peak of the Himalayas,
  which extend along the border between India and
  Tibet.
• One of the clerks at the First National Bank on
  Main St. in Burlington fought with a robber who
  was caught later.

218
DOL

1. neil replied mr hill set down on a bench in
   island park and mr hill started to read a book
2. last sunday an Article in tv guide highlighted
   the cast of family ties a popular television
   series

219

• Neil replied, Mr. Hill sat down on a bench in
  Island Park and started to read a book.
• Last Sunday an article in TV Guide highlighted
  the cast of Family Ties, a popular television
  series.

220
DOL

1. ms dobek do you think my paragraph has two many
   adjectives
2. hasnt dad never did nothing about the crack in
   the larger of the four windows

221

• Ms. Dobek, do you think my paragraph has too many
  adjectives?
• Has Dad never did anything about the crack in the
  largest of the four windows?

222
DOL

1. on animal day at the zoo the contest winner had
   to choose between these prizes a stuffed animal a
   transistor radio and a camera
2. the guide leaded us through crystal onyx cave
   which is quite different from mammoth cave

223

• On Animal Day at the zoo, the contest winner had
  to choose between these prizes a stuffed animal,
  a transistor radio, and a camera.
• The guide led us through Crystal Onyx Cave, which
  is quite different from Mammoth Cave.

224
DOL

1. me and my sister visited ft sumter however we see
   more historical items at ft moultrie
2. in november we wasnt able to skate at forest
   park the temperature was too high

225

1. My sister and I visited Ft. Sumter however, we
   saw more historical items at Ft. Moultrie.
2. In November we werent able to skate at Forest
   Park the temperature was too high.

226
DOLWEEK 28

1. while my italian relatives was in the united
   states they visited four major cities new york
   philidelphia chicago and san francisco
2. my dad taked out the windows in the basement and
   my dad has began to repair them

227
ANSWERS

1. While my Italian relatives was in the United
   States, they visited four major cities New York,
   Philadelphia, Chicago, and San Francisco.
2. My dad took out the windows in the basement and
   has begun to repair them.

228
WEEK 28

1. i lended wilmas pattern but I dont think ill
   finish the dress by sunday june 5
2. his friend he has fell down twice outside of the
   san diego zoo

229
ANSWERS

1. I barrowed Wilmas pattern, but I dont think
   Ill finish the dress by Sunday, June 5.
2. His friend has fallen down twice outside of the
   San Diego Zoo.

230
WEEK 28

1. one episode of wild kingdom on television shown
   how a muskrat rose its young under a stream that
   had froze
2. loretta and me watched with surprise as the
   Sheriff on television fighted with the outlaw
   throws him to the ground and taking out some rope
   to tie him up

231
ANSWERS

1. One episode of Wild Kingdom on television showed
   how a muskrat raised its young under a stream
   that had frozen.
2. Loretta and I watched with surprise as the
   sheriff on television fought with the outlaw,
   throws him to the ground, and took out some rope
   to tie him up.

232
DOL 28

1. the article fringe benefits stated that general
   engineering provides a cadillac for its
   president
2. ms oster a mathematics teacher has took a leave
   of absence to study at columbia university

233
ANSWERS

1. The article Fringe Benefits stated that General
   Engineering provides a Cadillac for its
   president.
2. Ms. Oster, a mathematics teacher, has taken a
   leave of absence to study at Columbia University.

234
DOL 28

1. at four oclock your supposed to deliver the box
   of clothes to goodwill industries on summit st
2. wont his inability to speak german affect his
   chances of securing a job at international
   merchandise

235
ANSWERS

1. At four oclock youre supposed to deliver the
   box of clothes to Goodwill Industries on Summit
   St.
2. Wont his inability to speak German affect his
   chances of securing a job at International
   Merchandise?

236
WEEK 28

1. mr leverson has went with them students from
   allen town junior school to a new production of
   romeo and juliet in portland
2. eva and cora rided there bikes down hwy 11 to the
   dodge county fair

237
ANSWERS

• Mr. Leverson has gone with those students from
  Allen Town junior school to a new production of
  Romeo and Juliet in Portland.
• Eva and Cora rode their bikes down Hwy. 11 to the
  Dodge County Fair.

238
WEEK 29

1. me and my brother was shook by the earthquake but
   us and our dog duke was alright
2. nina didnt say nothing after she had breaked the
   recording of the song memories

239
Answers

1. my brother and I were shaken by the earthquake,
   but we and our dog Duke was all right.
2. Nina didnt say anything after she had broken the
   recording of the song Memories.

240
WEEK 29

1. dad forgot about the bread Dough raising on the
   stove and dad took a nap
2. who did rhonda injure by the way when she cast
   her fishing line into the mississippi river

241
ANSWERS

1. Dad forgot about the bread dough rising on the
   stove and took a nap.
2. Whom did Rhonda injure, by the way, when she cast
   her fishing line into the Mississippi River.

242
WEEK 29

1. the picture charlie drawed was the better of the
   better of the seventy six submitted to the
   bakersfield art fair
2. i done my work but i lost my paper on the way to
   school confessed perry tearful

243
ASWERS

1. The picture Charlie drew was the best of the
   seventy-six submitted to the Bakersfield Art
   Fair.
2. I did my work, but I lost my paper on the way to
   school, confessed Perry tearfully.

244
WEEK 29

1. the people quickly fleed from the coastal cities
   of tokyo and osaka before the tidal wave striked
2. mr jameson dont remember however if he has gave
   his contribution to the united fund

245
ANSWERS

1. The people quickly fled from the coastal cities
   of Tokyo and Osaka before the tidal wave struck.
2. Mr. Jameson doesnt remember, however, if he has
   given his contribution to the United Fund.

246
WEEK 30

1. i and my brother teared our pants as we jumped
   over a fence near the garden hotel on a lake
   drive.
2. dr forrest asked carl and joe if they hurt
   theirselves when they fell threw a window at the
   langston civic center

247
ANSWERS

1. My brother and I tore our pants as we jumped over
   a fence near the Garden Hotel on a lake drive.
2. Dr. Forrest asked Carl and Joe if they hurt
   themselves when they fell through a window at the
   Langston Civic Center.

248
WEEK 30

1. after she had sang one verse of this is my
   country sherrie became hoarse and she couldnt
   sing no more
2. the responsibility for learning students about
   european history will be divided between three
   teachers

249
ANWERS

1. After she had sung one verse of This Is My
   Country, Sherrie became hoarse and couldnt sing
   any more.
2. The responsibility for teaching students about
   European history will be divided among three
   teachers.

250
WEEK 30

1. larry have you wrote youre Paper about the long
   poem beowulf for english class yet
2. the michigan cherry growers association
   maintains that cherries one third larger than
   normal are growed here

251
ANSWERS

1. Larry have you written your paper about the long
   poem Beowulf for English class yet?
2. The Michigan Cherry Growers Association
   maintains that cherries one- third larger than
   normal are grown here.

252
WEEK 30

1. you have seven chapters of the call of the wild
   to read before memorial day mr thomas said
2. mrs olsen has chose to guide a tour to runnymede
   where king john signed the magna charta in ad 1215

253
ANSWERS

1. You have seven chapters of The Call of The Wild
   to read before Memorial Day, Mr. Thomas said.
2. Mrs. Olsen has chosen to guide a tour to
   Runnymede where King John signed the Magna Charta
   in A.D. 1215.

254
WEEK 30

1. no i havent seen none of the pictures from your
   trip to glacier national park said angie
2. mother and sheila looked at the list of groceries
   that she wanted from the quick food mart

255
ANSWERS

1. No, I havent seen any of the pictures from your
   trip to Glacier National Park, said Angie.
2. Mother and Sheila looked at the list of groceries
   that Mother wanted from the Quick Food Mart.

256
WEEK 31

1. maria and juan is stopping at the el paso public
   library to borrow a copy of the play the taming
   of the shrew from ms rodriguez
2. us guys sat our baseball gear on the ground at
   river valley park then we eated our lunch

257
ANSWERS

1. Maria and Juan is stopping at the El Paso Public
   Library to borrow a copy of the play The Taming
   of The Shrew from Ms. Rodriguez.
2. We guys set our baseball gear on the ground at
   River Valley Park then we ate our lunch.

258
WEEK 31

1. irregardless of his diet father cant never
   become more thin than I am stated my brother
2. even though I havent no time to study german I
   still must take the test on Friday june 3

259
ANSWERS

• Regardless of his diet Father cant ever become
  thinner than I am, stated my brother.
• Even though I havent any time to study German, I
  still must take the test on Friday, June 3.

260
WEEK 31

1. there are more people who might of participated
   in the run for your life marathon for the
   american heart association if the event had not
   been postponed
2. you shouldnt have leaved your renault in france
   foreign cars bring high prices in the united
   states

261
ANSWERS

• More people might have participated in the Run
  for Your Life Marathon for the American Heart
  Association if the event had not been postponed.
• You shouldnt have leaved your Renault in France
  because foreign cars bring high prices in the
  United States.

262
WEEK 31

1. marty was stang by a Hornet while hiking through
   the nicolet national forest
2. he dont no if the red sox or the orioles won the
   game at fenway park

263
ANSWERS

• Marty was stung by a hornet while hiking through
  the Nicolet National Forest.
• He doesnt know if the Red Sox or the Orioles won
  the game at Fenway Park.

264
WEEK 31

1. after I had drank a box of the boys hi-c by
   mistake they was very angry with me
2. during the teachers interesting lecture I began
   to imagine that I was on a safari in africa

265
ANSWERS

• After I had drunk a box of the boys Hi-C by
  mistake, they were very angry with me.
• During the teachers interesting lecture I began
  to imagine that I was on a safari in Africa