Title: Composition 101
1Composition 101
- For me, writing is an exploration and most of
the time, Im surprised where the journey takes
me. - Jack Dann
By Bridget Smith
2Table of Contents
- Essays
- Definition of a narrative essay
- My narrative essay
- Definition of a description essay
- My description essay
- Definition of an exemplification essay
- My exemplification essay
- Definition of a process analysis essay
- My process analysis essay
- Writing the essay
- Methods of Invention
- Clustering
- Freewriting
- Forming an Outline
- Essential Elements of an essay
- About the author
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3Essays
- Narrative
- Description
- Exemplification
- Process Analysis
4Narrative
- A narrative tells a story by presenting events
in an orderly, logical sequence (Kirszner 83). - Rich, specific details chronological order, verb
tense, transition words.
5Narrative Essay
-
Recurring
Nightmare - I never fully understood my lifetime fear of
bridges over deep rivers. The recurring nightmare
that revolves around this trepidation has been
both vivid and frightening since my youth.
Although I may never comprehend its meaning, one
thing remains certain when this nightmare
occurs it unleashes feelings of morbidity and
dread. - It is late evening and the sky is foreboding and
overcast. Cumulus clouds invade the sky, like
monstrous warriors in armies of black and gray,
and continuing to push closer and closer with
each passing moment. I am nestled in a black car
wearing a red full length gown of silk and
taffeta. Suddenly, I realize Im on a bridge and
am overcome with uncertainty. With the dense fog
swarming around me and the glare of flashing
headlights, I feel even more uneasy and my
stomach begins to churn. I look out my window and
everything is a blur. The muffled voices of
passengers coupled with the obnoxious sounds of
car horns make my head pound. - Although my windshield is ordained with moisture
and fog, I am able to see the river rapidly
rising. Short, choppy waves of murky water move
in a succinct rhythm like a band of soldiers. I
close my eyes for a moment, trying to remain
composed as a trickle of sweat runs down my neck.
A sudden wave of panic and nausea rushes over me
as my breathing becomes rapid. I become intently
focused and listen theres a huge cracking sound
and something plunges into the water. Screams
follow shortly thereafter, evidently close yet
sounding so far away. I realize that the bridge
is collapsing. Out of terror, I pray to God to
spare my life and end this disaster. The bolts of
the bridge are coming unscrewed as if an unknown
force is tearing the bridge apart, causing this
catastrophe. I attempt to remove myself from the
vehicle but my effort is useless. I begin to feel
myself gradually slipping until the vehicle
plummets into the water below. Everything seems
to occur in slow motion. Even though Im the
person in the car, I feel as if Im outside
looking in, watching the incident play-by-play. - Once I hear the strident splashing sounds as
tons of cars fall into the water, I instinctively
know that Im going to die. I find myself stuck
in an underwater world where nothing can be seen
except the swirling mixture of dirt, sand, and
muck. I somehow manage to remove myself from the
car, but I am unable to swim to the surface no
matter how hard I try. I struggle and struggle
but my body is so weak! All I can see are shades
of brown and the vibrant red material from my
dress. There is a bright light that shines down
into the water and I reach out for it as if it
holds some sort of key to my survival. But I am
weak, so vulnerable and powerless to the river
that I let it take over as its waters permeate
through my nose and mouth. I know I am dying and
nothing can be done. Before I know what actually
happens, I awake. - To me, this nightmare reveals an intense fear
that stems from an unknown source. My mom
informed me that she used to have dreams like
this one when she was younger. It has occurred
for a number of years, sometimes randomly or when
Im stressed. Ive never had a direct experience
even close to this however, the thought of
spending my last moments being under siege by the
rivers powerful currents scares me terribly.
6Description
- A description essay tells readers about the
physical characteristics of a person, place, or
thing and relies on the five senses (Kirszner
143). - Depicts sights, sounds, touch, taste, smell.
- Words convey sizes and directions.
7Description Essay
Photographer Eugene Richards captures an intense
moment in his black and white picture entitled
Tending to A Stabbing Victim Who Ultimately
Survived. This snapshot stole a moment in time
when pure physical pain was at its peak. The
general image is of a man in dire suffering, but
as we look closer and observe the details of the
photograph, we can only imagine being the victim
in this image.
I believe that anothers suffering can be
experienced through art and photography. This
picture features a man sprawled out on a narrow
table with IVs attached to various places on his
body. Napkins and cloths are used to stop the
heavy flow of blood. Even though the photo is in
black and white, dark spots can be seen on the
cloths, a stark reminder that portrays the
reality of a suffering man. Hands dressed in
latex gloves tend to the victim, working quickly
to spare his life. When one looks at this
photograph, the pain felt by the victim is
remarkably evident. His eyes are shut tightly,
head tilted back, and mouth wide open obviously
releasing screams of distress. This is when we
see the human body at its weakest. As one
observes his facial expressions his screams seem
to be heard, overshadowing the voices of doctors
exchanging their medical jargon. The man
struggles to stay alive, using all the energy his
body contains. His arms tighten, hands clench, as
he feels his own blood ooze out of his body and
the soft fabric of cloth trying to stop it. He
can feel the rubbery latex against his dark skin
and more blood that trickles down his hip. The
tastes of antibiotics mixed with blood linger on
his tongue. Anyone can look at this photograph
and describe it based on what they merely see.
Richards goes above and beyond by portraying what
humans fear pain. The sense of physical pain is
so dominant in this photograph that it seems to
hide the general image itself. The victim
breathes, tastes, touches, feels emotion and
physical suffering. Richards proves a point we
can all see on some levels, this man is just
like you and I.
8Exemplification
An exemplification essay uses one or more
specific examples to illustrate or explain a
general or abstract point (Kirszer
203). Examples help to explain, clarify, add
interest, persuade, and support the thesis.
9Exemplification Essay
- In the eye-opening essay The Human Cost of an
Illiterate Society author Jonathan Kozol
discusses the limits illiterate citizens face in
their daily lives. Kozol introduces a strong
usage of exemplification and rhetorical
techniques to support his ideas. Exemplification
is a pattern of development where one or more
examples illustrate or explain a general point or
an abstract concept (Kirsner 203) and may be
used as an effective way of persuading people
that what you are saying is reasonable and worth
considering (Kirsner 205). In regards to
rhetorical technique, one must examine rhetoric
as a whole and how it functions in Kozol's essay.
Rhetoric is best defined as the art or practice
of persuasion through any symbolic system, but
especially language (Rhetoric). This essay
will examine Kozol's use of exemplification,
rhetorical strategies, and how they support the
author's ideas. Kozol supports his
thesis by applying exemplification in the
following ways statistical studies, examples,
and personal quotes. Statistics provide a wide
basis for Kozol's ideas because the numerical
values deliver proof that illiteracy is a major
problem within the U.S. For example, Kozol states
so long as 60 million Americans are denied
significant participation, the government is
neither of, nor for, nor by the people (Kirsner
253). Kozol proves that illiteracy is a major
issue since millions of Americans are deprived of
reading skills. Furthermore, what kind of
government, who claims to be of, for, and by the
people, cannot find ways to solve this growing
problem?
10Exemplification Essay Cont.
- The concept of exemplification is to illuminate
one's point with specific examples. Kozol
provides his audience with several examples which
highlight how illiteracy affects all areas of a
person's life. With each instance, Kozol makes
powerful connotations that may evoke empathetic
responses from the reader. Consider Kozol's
statement about living an uninsured existence - Several women I have known in Boston have
entered a slum hospital with the intention of
obtaining a tubal ligation and have emerged a few
days later after having been subjected to a
hysterectomy. Unaware of their rights,
incognizant of jargon, intimidated by the
unfamiliar air of fear and atmosphere of either
that so many of us find oppressive in the
confines even of the most attractive and
expensive medical facilities, they have signed
their names to documents they could not read in
which nobody, in the hectic situation which
prevails so often in those overcrowded hospitals
that serve the urban poor, could even imagine
(Kirnser 254). - After reading this passage, the audience may
become shocked and outraged because some
illiterate citizens are robbed of their own
rights. More importantly, readers may fall in
line with Kozol's point of view due to the
emotional responses elicited from the passage.
Once the author has captured a sense of emotion
from the audience, his thesis and ideas gain more
strength throughout the essay. This method is
called pathos and is the rhetorical technique
which uses emotion to alter the audiences
judgment (Rhetoric). Aside from rhetorical
proof, Kozol's exemplification strategy continues
with the use of repetition. With each example,
Kozol begins with the phrase Illiterates
cannot... For example - Illiterates cannot read the menu at a
restaurant (Kirsner 254).Illiterates cannot
look up numbers in a telephone directory
(Kirsner 255).Illiterates cannot read the
notices they receive from welfare offices
(Kirsner 255). The use of
repetition serves a purpose to reiterate the
point that as a result of illiteracy, individuals
are negatively impacted in all areas of life. By
using this strategy in the exemplification
process, Kozol's idea that illiteracy is a major
problem in America is strongly enforced upon the
audience.
11Exemplification Essay Cont.
- Just as Kozol used narrative examples that
appealed to the audience's emotions and
effectively supported his ideas, he added quotes
from illiterate citizens for the same reasons.
Adding quotes is an effective exemplification
strategy because Kozol wants the audience to
comprehend what the illiterate population thinks,
feels, and how their lives are impacted by
illiteracy. For example - I've lost a lot of jobs, one man explains.
Today, even if your a janitor, there's still
reading and writing ... They leave a note saying
'Go to room so and so...' You can't do it. You
can't read. You don't know (Kirsner 257).This
statement proves that as a result of illiteracy,
illiterates cannot even feel secure at lower
status jobs. There is always the looming sense of
uncertainty. The audience can read and analyze
statements like these throughout the essay and
think, That's what it is like to be an
illiterate functioning in society. As
discussed in the opening paragraph, rhetoric is
the art of persuasion through language. Kozol
uses three rhetorical devices (or strategies) in
his essay to persuade his audience to analyze or
think about the human cost of an illiterate
society (Kirsner 252). The first
device Kozol uses is an anecdote. An anecdote
narrates a brief experience with the purpose of
revealing a truth more general than the brief
tale itself (Anecdote). In Kozol's essay, the
following anecdote is used Since I
first immersed myself within this work I have
often had the following dream I - find that I am in a railroad station
or a large department store within a city that is
utterly - unknown to me and where I cannot
understand the printed words. None of the signs
or - symbols is familiar. Everything looks
strange like mirror writing of some kind.
Gradually - I understand that I am in the Soviet
Union. All the letters on the walls around me are
- Cyrillic. I look for my pocket
dictionary but I find that it has been mislaid.
Where have I - left it? Then I recall that I forgot to
bring it with me when I packed my bags in Boston.
I - struggle to remember the name of my
hotel. I try to ask somebody for directions. One
- person stops and looks at me in a
peculiar way. I lose the nerve to ask. At last I
reach into - my wallet for an ID card. The card is
missing. Have I lost it? Then I remember that my
- card was confiscated for some reason,
many years before. At this point, I wake up in a - panic (Kirsner 253).
12Exemplification Essay Cont.
- This anecdote serves a larger purpose to
provide parallels between the character in the
anecdote and illiterate American citizens. Just
like the character, illiterates cannot interpret
the world around them through signs and symbols.
Written language appears confusing, and they are
intimidated by society to ask for help concerning
their problem. Illiterates feel overwhelmed and
panicked with no sense of knowledge or direction.
The function of the anecdote in terms of
persuasion is to influence the audience to create
these parallels, and to delve into the
circumstance of illiteracy. The
audience will notice that Kozol's essay exhibits
a strong use of diction. Examine the following
excerpt, for example Surgical
denial of the right to bear that child in the
first place represents an ultimate - denial, an unspeakable metaphor, a final darkness
that denies even the twilight gleaming - of our own humanity. What great violation of our
biological, our biblical, our spiritual - humanity could possibly exist than that which
takes place nightly, perhaps hourly these - days, within such overburdened and benighted
institutions as the Boston City Hospital? - Illiteracy has many costs few are so reversible
as this (Kirsner 254). - Powerful diction and vocabulary usage
seem to emphasize the cost of illiteracy. In this
example, strong diction includes ultimate
denial, twilight gleaming of our own humanity,
and great violation (Kirsner 254). If the essay
was narrated in simpler terms, it would otherwise
lose its affect. Strength of word choice, in no
matter what form of composition, can have a
tremendous effect on any audience. Language is
used to persuade, and Kozol effectively persuades
his audience to grasp the issue of illiteracy and
pay attention to his message through the use of
language.
13Exemplification Essay Cont.
- The final rhetorical device involves the use of
questions. Kozol directs questions at his
audience as he forms his conclusion. For example
- Stephen now faces twenty years to
life. Stephen's mother was illiterate. His
grandparents - were illiterate as well. What parental
curse did not destroy was killed off finally by
the - schools. Silent violence is repaid with
interest. It will cost us 25,000 yearly to
maintain - this broken soul in prison. But what is
the price that has been paid by Stephen's victim?
- What is the price that will be paid by
Stephen? (Kirsner 259) Consider this
example This is a society that most of us did
not create but which our President and other
leaders have been willing to sustain by virtue of
malign neglect. Do we posses that character and
courage to address a problem which so many
nations, poorer than our own, have found it
natural to correct? (Kirsner 259).
These questions are a positive rhetorical
strategy since they not only provide a
well-developed conclusion, but because they
persuade the reader to critically examine The
Human Cost of illiteracy. Furthermore, the final
question challenges the audience, and may
persuade folks to take action in order to change
the problem our society faces. It can be
determined that rhetoric and exemplification
co-exist. While rhetoric involves persuasion
through language, it can be almost impossible to
persuade an audience without the use of
well-developed examples (exemplification). Since
these devices have been analyzed from The Human
Cost of an Illiterate Society, one can conclude
that Jonathan Kozol's use of exemplification and
rhetoric constructs a strong foundation for a
dynamic and provocative essay.
14Process Analysis
- A process essay explains how to do something or
how something occurs (Kirsner 267). - In class, our essays reflected how a process was
carried out. - Ex How the Cult of Thinness Shapes American
Culture
15Process Analysis Essay
- How the Cult of Thinness
Shapes American Culture I vividly
remember going through the check-out line at
Kroger while the flawless face of Nicole Kidman
stared back at me. She had stolen the cover of
Vanity Fair with her dainty nose, high cheek
bones, wavy blond hair, and astonishingly thin
physique. Her toned arms, lean legs, and
protruding collar bone caught my attention I was
reminded immediately that I did not resemble her
in any way, shape, or form. Instead, I was the
pudgy 14-year-old known by my peers as fatty,
lard butt, or the chunky cheerleader. I took
another look at Nicole Kidman and thought about
the hurtful remarks before purchasing a Slim Fast
shake and vowing to fit into a size two. I had
been recruited unknowingly into the Cult of
Thinness, which contains extreme power in shaping
American Culture. Sharlene
Hesse-Biber, author of the book Am I Thin Enough
Yet? interviewed a young woman who said, If you
are thin and firm you're more socially accepted,
you have more self-confidence and you can achieve
your goals more easily (62). It's not surprising
that many people would agree with her, since
being thin is the cultural norm. How is this
cultural norm established? First, the Cult of
Thinness confirms that being thin is more
socially acceptable. According to Hesse-Biber,
the capitalistic diet, cosmetic, and fitness
industries along with modern patriarchy,
controls women with the pressures to be thin
(26).While capitalistic industries use their
messages to control women, they also instill body
image stereotypes within our culture. The
stereotypical image, of course, is to be fit and
thin. This concept has become ingrained so deeply
in our culture that according to professor Paul
Campos we see normal people as fat. We are so
disgusted by fat that the only perfectly
acceptable prejudice is prejudice against people
who are overweight or obese (DeNoon, par.15).
Our culture has become so accustomed to the thin
body type that anything but thin is abnormal or
wrong. Therefore, American culture develops
prejudices against those who do not meet the thin
standard. In fact, the prejudice against those
who are not thin is taken on by society's younger
generations. A recent study was conducted among
children who were six or seven years old. When
presented with pictures of muscular body types
and overweight body types, the children showed a
preference for muscular body types. A second
study among children of the same age group
revealed that overweight children were judged by
their peers as being less physically attractive
than children with physical disabilities (Sloan,
par.28).
16Process Analysis Cont.
- The general American society is not the only
group influenced by the Cult's message the
family unit is influenced as well. Since family
is a child's first interpreter of the outside
world, parents have the power to reiterate,
modify, or amplify the message that being thin is
more socially acceptable (Hesse-Biber 84). In
some extreme cases, parents may amplify our
culture's value of thinness. Case in point My
mother was speaking to another woman when the
topic of weight loss was mentioned. The woman and
her daughter engaged in chronic dieting and
shared the same weight-loss obsession. One
evening, the daughter asked her mother to stop
her from eating a meal. In response to her
daughters question, the mother spat in her food.
Behavior like this exhibited by parents may cause
children to develop poor eating habits or eating
disorders. Besides how the Cult of
Thinness confirms that being thin is more
socially acceptable, and how its message is
utilized by the family unit, the Cult of Thinness
shapes American culture through mass media.
Females are exposed to the culturally ideal body
through images in magazines, television, and
billboards. They are presented with an image of
the typical fashion model Caucasian,
five-feet-ten-inches tall, and thirty pounds less
than the average American female. Ironically,
these looks are relatively rare so rare in fact,
that only one in 40,000 naturally have a model's
body type. However, since women's magazines have
10.5 times more images of the ideal body than
men's magazines (Sloan, par.30), this particular
image is so consummate that females can hardly
avoid it. As a result, females constantly compare
their bodies with the media's inescapable image.
Since the female is a consumer, she
is more likely to come in contact with ads and
commercials for beauty or weight loss products,
which encourage her to change or alter her
appearance. In reality, these advertisements
promote body insecurity. Advertisements in
fashion magazines and commercials for Covergirl,
Revlon, and Maybeline feature thin, flawless
models candidates for admiration and worship
among members in the Cult of Thinness. Does this
singular concept of beauty and pervasive facet
shape perceptions of body image in our culture?
A study conducted by Sherry L. Turner and her
colleagues revealed that women's body image
satisfaction is influenced by their exposure to
the thin ideal presented in fashion magazines
(Turner, par.21). Turner and her colleagues
studied two groups of college women women who
viewed fashion magazines and women who viewed
news magazines. Afterwards, both groups completed
a body image satisfaction survey. While comparing
the surveys, the results revealed that the group
who viewed fashion magazines prior to taking the
survey desired to weigh less and perceive
themselves more negatively than those who read
news magazines (Turner, par.21). Turners study
is one form of proof that media influences body
image perceptions among females.
17Process Analysis Cont.
- In addition to the stereotypes formed by
capitalistic industries and the messages conveyed
by the mass media, the Cult of Thinness shapes
American culture by recruiting its members during
the most vulnerable point in their lives
adolescence. Adolescent girls instill our
culture's body image ideals at a time when there
is an increased value placed on peer acceptance
and approval, and a heightened attention to
external influences and social messages about
cultural norms (Adolescent Girls and Body
Image, par.1). Desperate to conform to the
cultural decree of thinness, young females engage
in cult-like behavior, worshiping the perfect
body they so desire and engaging in the rituals
which include excessive exercise, binging and
purging, and abuse of laxatives or diuretics
(Hesse-Biber 82). The eccentric and extremely
dangerous habits often evolve into a full-fledged
eating disorder, such as anorexia or bulimia.
When an individual suffers from anorexia, she or
he exhibits an intense fear of food and weight
gain. She or he may limit calories or not eat
anything at all. Prolonged anorexia leads toÂ
depression anxiety dry, brittle skin heart
tremors and even death (Sloan, par.16).When an
individual suffers from bulimia, she or he
endures frequent cycles of binging and purging.
The purging phase can include vomiting, excessive
exercise, or use of laxatives to rid the body of
the food. Both disorders lead to psychological
effects such as strong feelings of guilt or shame
(Sloan, par.20) The Cult of Thinness has such a
powerful grip on American culture that 10 million
females and 1 million males suffer from anorexia
or bulimia in order to achieve the Cult's high
standards (The Prevalence of Eating Disorders,
par.1). Many who fall victim to the Cult's
message rather do harm to their bodies than carry
extra pounds a sacrifice they must make in
order to achieve thinness. A young female
interviewed in Hesse-Biber's book said, I will
never be satisfied with what's in the mirror.
When I see other women I want to be better,
thinner, than them. I would rather be anorexic
than not (70). The young woman chose to make
thinness a top priority. The Cult of Thinness had
such an extreme power over her that she chose
anorexia in order to pursue the Cults thin
ideal. In summary, the Cult of
Thinness holds immense power in shaping American
culture. Members of the Cult of Thinness conform
to a rigid doctrine to achieve the ideal body,
and are driven by the pursuit of bodily
perfection the Cult promises. Through the
stereotypes generated by capitalistic industries
and the Cult's message that being thin is more
socially acceptable the use of mass media to
convey one ideal body image and targeting
adolescents as potential cult members, the Cult
of Thinness reigns as one of the most influential
forces in molding American culture's idea of the
correct body and that correct body is thin.
18Writing the Essay
19Methods of Invention
- Clustering
- Freewriting
- Brainstorming
- Journaling
- Forming an Outline
- (the methods we used in class)
20Clustering
- The writer visually arranges his or her ideas so
that the main topic is in the middle of the page
and is surrounded by major points related to the
main topic.
21Freewriting
- Letting ideas flow by writing nonstop for a fixed
period of time.
22Forming an Outline
- Outlines organize the writers major points and
suggest the shape of the essay. - Outlines may be informal or formal.
- Outline of Stages
- I. The Cult of Thinness enforces the idea that
being thin is more socially acceptable. - 1. Body image stereotypes are formed by
capitalistic industries and modern - patriarchy.
- 2. The "be thin and fit" stereotype is deeply
ingrained in society. - A.) Society forms prejudices against those who
are not thin. - 3. Families have the power to reiterate, modify,
or amplify the "be thin" - message.
- II. The Cult of Thinness shapes American culture
through mass media. - 1. The mass media promotes the ideally thin body
type. - 2. The mass media targets female consumers with
ads and commercials. - A.) Ads and commercials promote body insecurity.
- III. The Cult of Thinness recruits its members
during adolescence. - 1. Adolescent females attempt to conform to our
culture's standard of thinness. - 2. Females engage in cult-like behavior.
- A.) "Worship" the ideal body image.
- B.) Engage in dangerous eating habits.
- 1. Sacrifice food in order to lose weight.
- C.) May develop eating disorders
23Essential Elements of an Essay
- Thesis
- Body paragraphs
- Conclusion
24About the Author
- Im Bridget Smith, a freshman at West Virginia
University Parkersburg. - I plan to major in Nursing with a minor in
Sociology. - The essays featured in this presentation were
composed for my English 101 course. - I enjoy reading, art, and photography in my spare
time.
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