Title: Communicating Impact of CES Programs
1Communicating Impact of CES Programs
- Communicating Impact
- Writing Tips
2Objectives
- Increase the understanding Advisory Council
members have on their influence of the publics
perception of CES programs. - Develop skills in communicating the impact of CES
programs.
3Neighbors Friends - Colleagues
- Part 1 Brainstorming
- Record on flip charts
- Call out people you talked with about Extension.
(Ex friend, spouse, child, etc.) - Where were you when you mentioned Extension?
(Ex car, farm supply store, home, etc.)
places.
4Neighbors Friends - Colleagues
- Part 2 Explore Lists
- Discuss with the group.
- Explore the People List and the Places List.
- Who might the people on the list know or be
related to? - Who might have overheard a comment?
- Are any on the list neighbors or friends of
legislators? - Do they know a legislator or elected official?
- Were all comments positive? How might it
influence their perception of Extension?
5How the Word Spreads 10 - 10,000
10 people
Who tell 10 people
Reach 100 people
Who tell 10 people
Reach 1000 people
Who tell 10 people
Reach 10,000 people
6How the Word Spreads 50
50 people
Who tell 50 people
Reach 2500 people
Who tell 50 people
Reach 125,000 people
Who tell 50 people
Reach 6,300,000 people
7How the Word Spreads The Point
- With 4 levels of contacts
- 10 people can reach 10,000
- OR
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- 50 people can reach 6 million
83 Rs of Accountability
- Relevance Why
- The educational need that led to the development
of the program or educational experience - Answers the question, Why is this program
needed?
93 Rs of Accountability
- Response Actions
- Shows how the Extension educator responded to
the identified need or issue. - Answers the question, What did Extension do to
address the need or issue?
103 Rs of Accountability
- Results What happened
- Communicates the outcomes of the educational
program - Answers the question, What are the economic,
social or environmental changes that resulted
from these educational efforts?
113 Rs of Accountability
- As Advisory Council Leaders
- Know the programs you are sharing ask county
educators, specialists, or administrators for
details and data - Your support is more valuable than a report from
CES or an employee - Be able to describe
- Relevance why the program was conducted
- Response what was done
- Results what happened
12Can You Find the 3 Rs
- Group Activity
- Share handout with examples of impact statements
- Read each example and identify sentences which
describe - Relevance
- Response
- Results
- For each example discuss additional information
that would be helpful.
13Points to Remember
- Focus on education
- Wear your taxpayer hat
- Focus on results that indicate increased
knowledge, changed behaviors, or added value - Write then rewrite practice
- Make conversations systematic and intentional
14Writing Tips
- Objectives
- Learn writing tips which can improve written
communication. - Develop a brief statement to share with
decision-makers regarding the impact of CES
programs.
15Say It Simply
- The next four slides will present a statement
that describes a common phrase. - Can you identify the phrase?
16Say it Simply
What does it mean? In this case I have undertaken
the journey here for the purpose of interring
the deceased. From this point of view I do not,
however, propose putting anything on record in so
far as praise is concerned. I come to bury
Caesar, not to praise him.
17Say It Simply
- What does it mean?
- Cleave gramineous matter for fodder during the
period that the orb of the day is refulgent. - Make hay while the sun shines.
18Say It Simply
- What does it mean?
- A plethora of culinary specialists vitiate the
liquid in which a variety of nutritional
substances have been simmered - Too many cooks spoil the broth
19Say It Simply
- What does it mean?
- A condition characterized by tardiness is more
desirable than one that is systematically marked
by eternal absenteeism. - Better late than never.
20Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Audience
- Know your audience age, gender, reading
level, etc. - What does you audience know about CES?
- Is the audience interested in your topic?
- What will the reader want to know?
- Keep your audience in mind as you write
21Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Audience
- Audience Similarities
- Are interested in results
- Want brief understandable information
- Competition for their attention
- Are not specialists or scientists
- Have some control over programs
22Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Words
- Less is more
- Words are the tools use the right one
- Words dont think for you they convey YOUR
thoughts - If the idea isnt clear words wont clear it up
- Trouble trying to put it into words stop
trying to write
23Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Words Use the
- Short
- Simple
- Personal
- Specific
- Colorful
- Active
- Familiar. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Word
24Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Numbers
- With statistics make them clear
- one out of eight not 12 ½ percent
- Analogies In the next five minutes, 10 people
will be diagnosed with cancer.
25Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Writing Numbers
- Spell out numbers below 10 use the number to
express more than 10 - Spell out numbers at the beginning of a sentence,
i.e., Fifty-three people. . .
26Writing For Impact Tips for Improving Writing
Skills
- Writing Numbers
- With two or more numbers in a group, treat the
sentence as a unit - He had two suits.
- He had 100 ties.
- He had 100 ties, 12 shirts, 2 suits.
- One or two more wont matter.
27Common Grammatical Mistakes
- Too Many Prepositional Phrases
- Mixed Tenses
- Dangling Modifiers
- Redundancy
- Non-Agreement
- Careless Repetition
28Polish Your Style
- Distribute Handout
- In small groups rewrite the sentences.
- See if you can use action verbs and eliminate
words.
29Simple Words are Best
- Distribute Worksheet
- Individually (or in small groups) put a simpler
word or a short phrase in the blank.
30Youre The Editor
- Cut unnecessary words
- Simplify sentences
- Use words that are easier to understand
- Avoid technical jargon
- Avoid acronyms
31Clear the Fog
- The edited versions are much clearer, shorter and
easier to understand. - Original The discussions became quite heated at
times, which was an indication that members
themselves determined the goals of their club. - Better Occasional heated discussions proved
that members set their clubs goals.
32Clear the Fog
- The edited versions are much clearer, shorter and
easier to understand. - Original The horticulturalist pointed out that
the homeowners in his section of town wanted
nice, green lawns but werent willing to apply
enough fertilizer to reach their goals. - Better The horticulturist said many local
homeowners wont apply enough fertilizer to have
good lawns.
33Clear the Fog
- The edited versions are much clearer, shorter and
easier to understand. - Original The essay contest is sponsored locally
by the Central Electric Supply Company in
cooperation with the Roberts County Extension
Office. - Better The Central Electric Supply Company and
Roberts County Extension Office sponsor the essay
contest.
34Youre The Editor
- Distribute worksheet
- In small groups or individually, edit the
examples by eliminating words, phrases and
restating
35SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
- You are the voice of Extension.
36SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
- Everything you say influences an opinion.
37SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
- When communicating One size does NOT fit all.
38SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
39SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
- The written word a powerful tool.
40SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
41SUMMARY OF KEY POINTS
- Make it memorable for all the RIGHT reasons!