Unit Three : Use Verbs Instead of Nouns

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Unit Three Use Verbs Instead of Nouns
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• Difficulty is encountered in explanation of the
  method to inexperienced engineers owing to its
  computational complexity.
• Revised Explaining the method to inexperienced
  engineers is difficult owing to its computational
  complexity.

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• Simulation of the program is performed in this
  study.
• Revised This study simulates the program.

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• A slight increase occurs in the deposition rate.
• Revised The deposition rate slightly increases.

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• Knowledge of how the variables are distributed is
  not required by novice engineers .
• Revised Novice engineers do not need to know
  how the variables are distributed.

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• Not only is the variability of the control
  factors considered by the proposed procedure, but
  implementation of related tasks is performed by
  that same procedure.
• RevisedIn addition to considering the
  variability of the control factors, the proposed
  procedure implements related tasks.

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• A recommendation of using iterative least squares
  (ILS) as a simple method for analysis of censored
  data was made by Schmee and Hahn (1990).
• Revised Schmee and Hahn (1990) recommended
  using iterative least squares (ILS) as a simple
  method for analyzing censored data.

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• Normalization of operations is achieved by a
  simple calculation of the scores.
• Revised Simply calculating the scores
  normalizes operations.

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• Improvement of the condition is achieved by
  variation of the control factors .
• Revised Varying the control factors improves
  the condition.

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• A recommendation is made here that the program be
  simulated by the engineer.
• Revised We recommend that the engineer simulate
  the program.

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• The operator made a reservation of the ticket for
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• RevisedThe operator reserved the ticket for me.