How to write a composition on a cartoon

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How to write a composition on a cartoon?
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• As the College Entrance Examination is
  drawing near, many teachers and parents pay more
  attention to the students. They take good care of
  the students, it has a negative effect on
  students. Xiaoming is a high school student. He
  will take part in the College Entrance
  Examination this year. His parents look after
  Xiaoming very well, he can have a better
  environment to study well. His grandmother cooks
  delicious and nutritional food for Xiaoming. His
  mother gives him everything he wants. His father
  fans him everyday, he can feel cool, the fact is
  that he is still very hot. They even warn him the
  days left before the final examination. There are
  lots of books on his desk, Xiaoming has to do the
  exercises all the time.
• In my opinion, too much care is not
  necessary. We need to relax ourselves and treat
  the examination with a good attitude.

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but
so that
however,
so that
Consequences?
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• As the College Entrance Examination is drawing
  near, the situation is getting worse and worse.
  From the picture, we can see that Li Ming is
  "studying hard". There are many books for him to
  read and many papers for him to do. How poor he
  is! At the same time, all his family are also
  busy working for him.
• Nowadays, many parents expect too much of their
  sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or
  daughters study hard in order to be admitted to
  an ideal college or a key university. It is for
  this reason that parents are strict with their
  children. However, they dont realize what they
  have done become a heavy burden or a great
  pressure. It is the hard work or the great
  pressure that changes their children that much.
• So I hope parents provide a proper environment
  for their children. Only in this way will they
  try their best and succeed at last!

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Transitions ???
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• and, also, or, neither nor, either or, not
  onlybut also, as well, for one thingfor another

moreover, what is more, worse still, furthermore,
then, besides, in addition
but, instead, yet, whereas, however, on the
contrary, by contrast, otherwise
for this reason, for this purpose, so that
because, as, since, for, owing to, due to
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as a result (of), so, therefore, thus, as a
consequence (of)
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• description

• consequences/reasons

• opinion

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presentation
Its your chance
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• Health Care
• From the picture, we can see that the old man was
  suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to
  hospital for medical care. When he saw the
  medical bill with 5,0000 from the hospital, he
  was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his
  feet. It was beyond what he could afford.Its
  really another heart attack for him.
• At present, many people cant afford heavy
  medical fees. Because of this, they may get into
  deep debt in order to get proper medical care .
  Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they
  have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the
  last day of their life. What a pity!
• We strongly call for the medical expenses to be
  reduced.The government should build up medical
  insurance system ,and try its best to explore and
  develop a new health care so that everyone will
  be able to enjoy their life as long as possible.

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Homework

• Perfect your compositions after class.

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Thank you!