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Discussion

• Discuss in groups of four what Li Daiyu and Liu
  Qian saw and heard during their travel from
  Vancouver to Montreal and make some notes if
  necessary.

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REVISION
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Rocky mountains
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Li Daiyus report
Place What we saw in Canada
From the train
In Toronto
In Montreal
The Rocky Mountains,wild scenery,a grizzly
bear,mountain goats,wheat-growing center, the
busy port of Thunder Bay,ocean ships on the top
end of the Great Lakes
CN tower,mist of the Niagara Falls,the covered
stadium,Chinatown,Pink Pearl restaurant
Many signs and ads in French,the St.Lawrence
River,shops,artists in their workplace
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Liu Qian report
Place What we heard in Canada
From Danny Lin
From Lin Tao
From Henri
Canada is bigger than the U.S.and the second
largest, 5,500 km from coast to coast. Vancouver
is the warmest and beautiful city and the
population here increase rapidly. Ski in the
Rocky Mountains and sail in the harbour.
Cantonese food,most of the Chinese from South
China,it takes long to Ottawa.
He is a student.Montreal has wonderful
restaurants and clubs.Most people speak
French.Good French coffee,bread and music.
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Write a report (about 150 words) for either Li
Daiyu or Liu Qian. Make sure your report
has 1.a title 2.a short paragraph to introduce
the topic of your report 3.a different paragraph
for each new piece of information or new
place 4.a short conclusion.
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Li Daiyus Report
What we saw in Canada From the train In Toronto In Montreal
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Sample What we saw in Canada
We traveled across Canada by train from west to
east. We saw many interesting things both on the
way across and in the cities of Toronto and
Montreal. We passed through the Rocky
Mountains on the train and saw wild scenery,a
grizzly bear and some mountain goats. In the
center of Canada,it is a wheat-growing area and
Thunder Bay is the busy port and ocean ships can
come all the way to the top end of the Great
Lakes.
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In Toronto, we went up the CN Tower and saw
the mist from Niagara Falls.We visited the
covered stadium and Chinatown and had dinner at
the Pink Pearl restaurant. In Montreal, we
saw many signs and ads in French.Then we went to
Old Montreal and sat at a café beside the St
Lawrence River.We spent the afternoon in the
shops and visiting the artists in their
workplaces. There are so many things to see
and do in Canada on our trip.We saw only a few
things. We would like to have another visit to
Canada!
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• My friends and I had a visit to the Great Ocean
  Road. We started from Melbourne. We drove along
  the freeway through the desert and forests. We
  saw some kangaroos and koalas by the road.
  Finally, four hours later, we arrived at the
  Great Ocean Road. At this moment it began to rain
  cats and dogs. In the heavy rain, the waves ,
  winds and rocks looked splendid(??).I took a lot
  of pictures there. After a while, the rain
  stopped and the rainbow appeared. In the sun, the
  sea was deep blue and the rocks were golden. Its
  so attractive that I have no idea whether I
  should keep still enjoying or take pictures .I
  enjoyed myself very much..

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Four more rules to introduce your trip 1.make
full use of what we have learned 2.use at least
one Noun clauses as the appositive . 3.make your
sentences smooth by using Linking words /phrases
show sequence (Firstly , First, First of all,
to start with, Secondly, Next, then, Afterwards,
After this/that, Finally, Last, Lastly, etc )
4.We write about our feelings, by using
effective words, such as splendid, enjoy
ourselves, instead of beautiful, happy etc.  
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Flow chart
time
Attitudes and emotions
place
results
process
persons
What to see, what to feel First, then, finally
What to do
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Discussion What should we learn about a city
while traveling there?
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The Yandang Moutain
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The Nanxi River
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A group of American friends come to visit
Wenzhou, Suppose you were the guide, tell them
their one-day-trip arrangement.
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Structure 1.The topic sentence 2.Detailed
route 3.A short conclusion
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Possible Version Dear friends, Today we
will go on a tour of the city of Wenzhou.
In the morning we will pay a visit to the
jiangxin Island where there are two famous towers
and some old building.Besides , we can enjoy the
beautiful scenery along the Oujiang River which
flows into the East China Sea. At noon,we
can get good seafood here .Wenzhou is rich in all
kinds of sea food,such as crabs,shrimps and
fishes.
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In the afternoon ,we will leave for Yandan
Mountain which lies About 20 kilometers northeast
of the downtown of Wenzhou,It is famous for the
Hezhang Peak and The Dalongqiu Waterfall which is
the highest waterfall in China. In the evening
,you can spend your time in the lovely shops. Im
sure you will have a lot of fun here
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Homework

Improve your composition after class.
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B satisfactory C need improvement
Items Criteria Self Self Self Peer Peer Peer
Items Criteria A B C A B C
1. The topic is stated clearly.
2. Well organized(beginning, middle, end).
3. Each paragraph is close to the point.
Language 1. Spell all the words correctly.
Language 2. Use varieties of sentence structures.
Language 3. Use linking words properly.
Language 4. Employ beautiful advanced words and expressions
Language 5. Make no grammar mistakes(esp. verbs).
Handwriting Neat, beautiful, easy to read
Cooperation Participate in discussion.
structure