Ba-Da-Bing!!!

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Ba-Da-Bing!!!

• A sentence-creating exercise
• to
• thrill your reader!

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Problem Writer can see it, but the reader
cant.Solution Ba-da-bing!
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Ba-da-bing!

• Think of a specific moment in your life, and
  Ill show you a trick. Write a sentence with
  these three parts
• Where did your feet go?
• What did you see?
• And, what did you think at that moment?

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Ba-da-bing!

• When I went into the kitchen, I saw my mom at
  the stove, stirring a pot, Mmmmm, I thought,
  Chili!
• Now you try one!

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Ba-da-bing!

• How many of these would you want in your essay?
• Could you change the eye to other senses?
• Did you use another word other than walked?

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Ba-da-bing!

• When I stepped out onto the stage, I could hear
  the audience clapping, What was I so afraid
  of? I thought, This is fun!

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When I stepped out onto the stage, I could hear
the audience clapping, What was I so afraid
of? I thought, This is fun!
When I went into the kitchen, I saw my mom at the
stove, stirring a pot, Mmmmm, Chili! I thought.
smell
Where did your feet go,
What did you think?
hear
see
taste
As I stood at the top of the stairs, I saw my
fathers suitcase by the front door, and I
thought, Hes going to be gone a long time.
What did you see (smell, hear, taste or
touch/feel)?
touch