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The McDonald's french fries grew no mold, but the hamburgers did. FonsBAY: How does it work? Instantly, the driver sentence becomes more exciting and elegant. – PowerPoint PPT presentation

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Title: Hit the Bridge: FonsBAY


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Hit the Bridge FonsBAY
  • SPI Class

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FonsBAY What is it?
  • FonsBAY stands for
  • F - for
  • 0 - or
  • N - nor
  • S - so
  • B - but
  • A - and
  • Y - yet
  • These are bridge words.

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FonsBAY Why do I care?
  • FonsBAY is a simple, easy to use method to make
    your writing more exciting and elegant. 
  • Elegant Writing Better Grades

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • When you come to the end of a sentence and are
    considering hitting the period, 
  • hit a bridge word instead and continue.
  • Bridge words For, Or, Nor, So, But, And, Yet

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Take a simple sentence...
  •  
  • The McDonald's french fries grew no mold.
  •  
  • We'll call it a driver sentence. It's a driver
    because it can stand on its own.  
  • Not a bad sentence, but kinda boring.

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Driver SentenceThe McDonald's french fries grew
    no mold. 
  •  
  • Add a comma and hit the bridge with one of the
    FonsBAY bridge words. Let's start with but.
  • The McDonald's french fries grew no mold, but the
    hamburgers did.

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Instantly, the driver sentence becomes more
    exciting and elegant. 
  •  
  • The McDonald's french fries grew no mold, but the
    hamburgers did.
  •  
  • Your turn Write the driver sentence, and hit the
    bridge.
  •  
  • The McDonald's french fries grew no mold, but...

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Let's try another. 
  •  
  • Driver Sentence The hamburgers turned
    disgusting.
  •  
  • Your turn Write the driver sentence, and hit the
    bridge.
  •  
  • The hamburgers turned disgusting, but...

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Now, let's try it with the bridge word and. 
  •  
  • Driver Sentence The hamburgers turned
    disgusting.
  •  
  • Your turn Write the driver sentence, and hit the
    bridge.
  •  
  • The hamburgers turned disgusting, and...

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Let's try another. 
  • Driver Sentence The hamburger from the place up
    the street turned moldy.
  •  
  • Your turn Write the driver sentence, and hit the
    bridge.
  •  
  • The hamburger from the place up the street turned
    moldy, and...

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Now, let's try it with the bridge word yet. 
  •  
  • Driver Sentence The french fries looked fresh
    after six weeks.
  •  
  • Your turn Write the driver sentence, and hit the
    bridge.
  •  
  • The french fries looked fresh after six weeks,
    yet...

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FonsBAY How does it work?
  • Let's try another. 
  • Driver Sentence The hamburger from the place up
    the street didn't grow mold as fast as the
    McDonald's hamburgers.
  • Write the sentence and hit the bridge with yet.
  •  
  • The hamburger from the place up the street didn't
    grow mold as fast as the McDonald's hamburger,
    yet...
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