Courtesy

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Courtesy
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Courtesy

• Voice Breaks

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Courtesy Social Order

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Courtesy Social Order

• Putting others first

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Courtesy Social Order

• Putting others first

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Courtesy Social Order

• Showing respect

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Courtesy Social Order

• Bob and I bought a snowmachine.

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Courtesy Social Order

• The snowmachine belongs to Bob and me.

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Courtesy Social Order

• ? The snowmachine belongs to me and Bob.

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Courtesy Social Order

• The snowmachine belongs to me and Bob.

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Courtesy Social Order

• ? The snowmachine belongs to me and Bob.

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Courtesy Social Order

• Me and Bob bought a snowmachine.

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Courtesy Social Order

• ? Me and Bob bought a snowmachine.

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Courtesy Social Order

• Putting yourself first immaturity

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Courtesy Social Order

• ? Me and Bob have a snowmachine.

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Courtesy Social Order

• ? The snowmachine belongs to me and Bob.

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Grammar and Syntax

• Courtesy Social Order

•   Syntax Language Order

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Grammar and Syntax

• Courtesy Social Order
• Bob and I bought a snowmachine.

•   Syntax Language Order
• ? Me bought a snowmachine.

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Grammar and Syntax

• Courtesy Social Order
• Bob and I bought a snowmachine.
• The snowmachine belongs to Bob and me.

•   Syntax Language Order
• ? Me bought a snowmachine.
• ?The snowmachine belongs to I.

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Syntax Which is Correct?

• Bob and I bought a snowmachine.
• I and Bob bought a snowmachine.
• Me and Bob bought a snowmachine.
• Bob and me bought a snowmachine.

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Syntax Which is Correct?

• The snowmachine belongs to me and Bob.
• The snowmachine belongs to Bob and me.
• The snowmachine belongs to I and Bob.
• The snowmachine belongs to Bob and I.

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Sentences

• Words (Diction)
• the went to John store.

•   Word Order (Syntax)
• John went to the store.

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Punctuate with Ears, not Eyes

• Breath-units

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Punctuate with Ears, not Eyes

• Breath-units
• When we take
• a breath

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Punctuate with Ears, not Eyes

• Breath-units
• When we take
• a breath
• When we change tone of voice

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Hearing Breath-Units

• Mark a slash (/) where a breath or other change
  of tone of voice occurs.

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Hearing Breath-Units

• Attending college will not necessarily mean
  getting a high-paying job. What it does provide
  is choice. College graduates often can move
  easily between different career fields, whereas
  high-school graduates tend to be locked into one
  field.

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Hearing Breath-Units

• Attending college will not necessarily mean
  getting a high-paying job. / What it does provide
  is a sense of choice. / College graduates often
  can move easily between different types of
  occupations, / whereas high-school graduates tend
  to be locked into one field.

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Hearing Breath-Units

• If that field becomes outdated, people
  without the training that college provides often
  find themselves in a difficult situation.

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Hearing Breath-Units

• If that field becomes outdated, / people
  without the training that college provides often
  find themselves in a difficult situation.

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Hearing Breath-Units

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Hearing Breath-Units

• Daniels wife was a girl of
  seventeen with jet-black hair and eyes
  named Rebecca Bryan her father Joseph Bryan
  was a neighbor whose brother had married one of
  Daniels sisters the Bryans and the Boones
  were families who already had a lot in
  common they were people who liked plenty of
  room.

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Hearing Breath-Units

• Daniels wife was a girl of seventeen with
  jet-black hair and eyes /named Rebecca Bryan /
  her father /Joseph Bryan /was a neighbor whose
  brother had married one of Daniels sisters / the
  Bryans and the Boones were families who already
  had a lot in common / they were people who liked
  plenty of room.

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Hearing Breath-Units

The hunting expedition on which Daniel found
himself in June and early July of 1755 was
different from any he had been on before he was
out after bigger game than all the countless deer
buffalo and bears he had shot he was out after
bigger game than he had even dreamed of bagging
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Hearing Breath-Units

• The hunting expedition on which Daniel found
  himself in June and early July of 1755 was
  different from any he had been on before / he was
  out after bigger game than all the countless
  deer/ buffalo /and bears he had shot / he was out
  after bigger game than he had even dreamed of
  bagging.

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Hearing Breath-Units

• You need to read in a normal speaking voice to
  avoid taking breaths in abnormal places in
  sentences.

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Normal BreathingNormal Reading

• Which sentence on the right has the voice
  indicator at the correct place for normal
  breathing?

•   The Middle Ages lasted almost 1,000 years
  although / the dates cannot be precisely
  determined.

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Normal BreathingNormal Reading

• Which sentence on the right has the voice
  indicator at the correct place for normal
  breathing?

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• The Middle Ages lasted almost 1,000 years /
  although the dates cannot be precisely
  determined.
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Normal BreathingNormal Reading

• Which sentence on the right has the voice
  indicator at the correct place for normal
  breathing?

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• The Middle Ages lasted almost 1,000 years /
  although / the dates cannot be precisely
  determined.

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Normal BreathingNormal Reading

• Which sentence on the right has the voice
  indicator at the correct place for normal
  breathing?

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• The Middle Ages lasted almost 1,000 years /
  although the dates cannot be precisely
  determined.
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Place slashes where breaths or changes of tone
occur

Our nation has no prouder chapter in her history
than the one written during the winter of 1777
and 1778 that was when George Washington led
about ten thousand troops into the winter
quarters about twenty miles northwest of
Philadelphia in Pennsylvania.
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Reinforcement

• Our nation has no prouder chapter in her
  history than the one written during the winter of
  1777 and 1778 / that was when George Washington
  led about ten thousand troops into the winter
  quarters about twenty miles northwest of
  Philadelphia / in Pennsylvania.

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Reinforcement

It was a ragtag army that went into Valley Forge
it had suffered many defeats and realized few
victories it was an army that fought among itself
and was led by generals who were jealous of each
other some of these men even plotted against
George Washington himself
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Reinforcement

• It was a ragtag army that went into
  Valley Forge / it had suffered many defeats and
  realized few victories / it was an army that
  fought among itself and was led by generals who
  were jealous of each other / some of these men
  even plotted against George Washington himself

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Reinforcement

the army had few weapons not enough powder almost
no discipline there was a serious lack of meat
and flour shoes and blankets medicine and
muskets.
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Reinforcement

• the army had few weapons / not enough powder
  / almost no discipline/ there was a serious lack
  of meat and flour / shoes and blankets /
  medicine and muskets.

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Reinforcement

In Philadelphia the captured capital of our
newborn nation British General Sir William Howe
had everything Washington did not have he had a
well-trained well-equipped well-supplied army it
had beaten the Americans nearly every time the
two forces had met.
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Reinforcement

• In Philadelphia / the captured capital of
  our newborn nation / British General Sir William
  Howe had everything Washington did not have / he
  had a well-trained / well-equipped /
  well-supplied army / it had beaten the Americans
  nearly every time the two forces had met.

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Reinforcement

Gaunt shivering Americans stumbled into Valley
Forge that December day in 1777 it was a time of
starvation so gnawing that once when some
soldiers found a cask of rotten herring they
gulped down the mess in what they called a
feast
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Reinforcement

• Gaunt / shivering Americans stumbled into
  Valley Forge that December day in 1777 / it was
  a time of starvation so gnawing that once / when
  some soldiers found a cask of rotten herring /
  they gulped down the mess in what they called a
  feast

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Reinforcement

their feet were wrapped in rags their pockets
were empty because they had not been paid in
weeks or months as the blizzard howled and the
ice thickened on the river the Americans
supplies failed Howe waited for Washingtons
surrender.
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Reinforcement

• their feet were wrapped in rags / their
  pockets were empty because they had not been paid
  in weeks or months / as the blizzard howled and
  the ice thickened on the river / the Americans
  supplies failed / Howe waited for Washingtons
  surrender.

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REVIEW

• Putting others first

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REVIEW

• Showing respect

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REVIEW

• Breath-units
• When we take
• a breath
• When we change tone of voice

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REVIEW

• You need to read in a normal speaking voice to
  avoid taking breaths in abnormal places in
  sentences.