Unit Six : Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases

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Unit Six Delete Redundant and Needless
Phrases
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• It is well known that a majority of Taguchi
  method applications have the capacity for
  addressing a single-response problem.
• Revised Most Taguchi method applications can
  address a single-response problem.

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• It may be said that computers have the ability to
  incorporate kinds of equipment in order that the
  user is in a position to interact with the
  computer.
• Revised Computers can incorporate equipment so
  that the user can interact with the computer.

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• It is the operator who makes a determination of
  the questions as to the phase should be
  implemented.
• Revised The operator determines whether to
  implement the phase.

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• There is a guideline that makes a provision of
  the necessary requirements.
• Revised A guideline provides the requirements.

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• It has been found that any error that might
  happen will be more destructive in light of the
  fact that XYZ applications is in a position to
  make direct calls to the hardware.
• Revised Any possible error will be more
  destructive since XYZ applications can make
  direct calls to the hardware.

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• It has long been known that the logon between the
  workstation and NT server is encrypted
  considering the fact that an eavesdropper
  actually wants to gain the ID and password.
• Revised The logon between the workstation and
  NT server is encrypted because an eavesdropper
  wants to gain the ID and password.

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• It is our opinion that Windows 95 is for all
  intents and purposes a good operating system in a
  situation in which the user has many
  requirements.
• Revised We believe that Windows 95 is a good
  operating system when the user has many
  requirements.

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• It is possible that the error affects the
  necessary requirements when attempting to
  ascertain the location of the variables.
• Revised The error might affect the requirements
  when attempting to find the variables.

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• It is noted that 10Mbps network cards are
  basically becoming obsolete for the reason of
  their slow data transfer rates.
• Revised 10Mbps network cards are becoming
  obsolete because of their slow data transfer
  rates.

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• It is interesting to note that monitoring
  features in most cases inform the user provided
  that a performance bottleneck occurs.
• Revised Notably, (OR Interestingly,)
  monitoring features usually inform the user if a
  performance bottleneck occurs.