Unit Six : Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases

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Unit Six Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases

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• It is well known that a majority of Taguchi
  method applications have the capacity for
  addressing a single-response problem.
• ?? Most Taguchi method applications can address
  a single-response problem.

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• It may be said that computers have the ability to
  incorporate kinds of equipment in order that the
  user is in a position to interact with the
  computer.
• ?? Computers can incorporate equipment so that
  the user can interact with the computer.

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• It is the operator who makes a determination of
  the questions as to the phase should be
  implemented.
• ?? The operator determines whether to implement
  the phase.

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• There is a guideline that makes a provision of
  the necessary requirements.
• ?? A guideline provides the requirements.

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• It has been found that any error that might
  happen will be more destructive in light of the
  fact that XYZ applications is in a position to
  make direct calls to the hardware.
• ?? Any possible error will be more destructive
  since XYZ applications can make direct calls to
  the hardware.

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• It has long been known that the logon between the
  workstation and NT server is encrypted
  considering the fact that an eavesdropper
  actually wants to gain the ID and password.
• ?? The logon between the workstation and NT
  server is encrypted because an eavesdropper wants
  to gain the ID and password.

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• It is our opinion that Windows 95 is for all
  intents and purposes a good operating system in a
  situation in which the user has many
  requirements.
• ?? We believe that Windows 95 is a good
  operating system when the user has many
  requirements.

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• It is possible that the error affects the
  necessary requirements when attempting to
  ascertain the location of the variables.
• ?? The error might affect the requirements when
  attempting to find the variables.

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• It is noted that 10Mbps network cards are
  basically becoming obsolete for the reason of
  their slow data transfer rates.
• ?? 10Mbps network cards are becoming obsolete
  because of their slow data transfer rates.

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• It is interesting to note that monitoring
  features in most cases inform the user provided
  that a performance bottleneck occurs.
• ?? Notably, (OR Interestingly,) monitoring
  features usually inform the user if a performance
  bottleneck occurs.

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