Title: Body Paragraphs
1Body Paragraphs
- Support and Expand your THESIS
Modified From Original Document Westwood
Academy
2Body Paragraphs Purpose
- Topic sentences introduce the paragraph and its
connection to the thesis statement. - Provide support for thesis (examples, quotes,
statistics, etc.) - Elaborate on research and connect back to thesis
statement and the introductory paragraph
3Organization and flow
- Each body paragraph and its topic sentence refer
directly back to the thesis statement.
Introduction Thesis Statement
Body Paragraph 3 _____________
Body Paragraph 4 _____________
Body Paragraph 1 _____________
Body Paragraph 2 _____________
4Body Paragraphs Connection and Conciseness
- Within each body paragraph, examples, evidence,
etc. support the topic sentence and thus refer
back to or connects to the thesis.
NOTE Each sentence in a body paragraph should
support the topic of the paragraph and thus the
thesis.
Topic Sentence
Elaborate on and explain support.
Quote Story Statistic other
5Body Paragraphs FORM
- Most paragraphs contain between five to seven
sentences. The first line of a paragraph is
indented to show that there is a new paragraph. - Hint If you look at your outline, each new
CAPITAL LETTER (A, B, C, etc. should be a NEW
paragraph!) -
6Components of a Body Paragraph
- Topic sentence
- Supporting sentences
- Elaborating or Explanatory sentences
- Concluding or transition sentence
7Topic Sentences
- Tell the reader what the paragraph will be about
and connects back to the thesis statement from
the introductory paragraph.
8Supporting Sentences
- Provide support to the paragraph and thesis
- Includes quotes from research sources,
statistics, case studies or examples
9Explanatory or Elaborating Sentences
- Relate to the ideas in the topic sentence
- Your voice (3rd person!) explains or elaborates
on the connections between the topic and the
research/support
10Concluding Sentence
- Signals the end of the paragraph
- Transitions to next topic sentence
- Some common expressions used in concluding
sentences are listed below. - It is apparent
- This is just one
- Consequently,
- This demonstrates that
11Sample Body Paragraph
- Lastly, athletes should not use steroids because
the use of steroids, once only found in
professional sports, has spread to young athletes
at the high school and middle school level. This
poses a huge problem because if steroids can have
such negative effects on the adult human body,
imagine what they can do to a growing teenagers
body. In fact, when teenagers use steroids, the
steroids can signal the users bones to stop
growing. The University of Michigans Institute
for Social Research conducts an annual survey of
student drug use, and they found that the steroid
use of twelfth graders has grown steadily
throughout the twenty-first century. Since
steroid use has grown so rapidly, it is no
surprise that the Center for Disease Control and
Prevention found that more than six percent of
teenagers nationally have used steroids
(Negative). Due to the serious and dangerous
health effects, it is scary to think that
steroids have become so prominent in this country
that high school and middle school athletes are
able to get them so easily. Consequently,
student-athletes must seriously consider the
dangerous health effects steroids can have on
their young, growing bodies and ignore the
temptation to use these drugs, regardless of how
easily accessible they are.
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